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by hedwig_927

person BooBack
schedule September 6, 2021 at 12:00 AM

You say long, fluffy and smutty like it's a bad thing. ๐Ÿ˜† Loved this and how much they genuinely like each other (or more than like each other with all this pink snitch stuff going on), makes me all warm and gushy inside. I'm glad Narcissa is a bit more tolerant than Lucius, and I kind of really like Theo in this as the sarcastic but supportive friend. ๐Ÿ™‚ Excited for more and I hope you get all settled going back to school. 

person Smile317
schedule September 4, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Fluffy, smutty and long...just the way I like it. ๐Ÿ˜†. Loved this chapter. I'm just a big pile of goo right now. Still trying to figure out the house...to be honest I have no clue. Thinking about kids, makes me sigh. I love stories where they're parents too. You do a great job with the banter. And I loved the hide and seek. Happy to see all the friends getting along and I think Narcissa was done well. She just wants her son to be happy ๐Ÿ˜Š . Now if Harry would just realize what pink means. ๐Ÿ˜œ

person BooBack
schedule August 22, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Loved it. Smut was fantastic and submissive Draco was very sexy. Curious about the strange house as always and I'm glad Ron and Harry are getting over their fight. I do like Ron as a character but you know I'm a Dramione shipper at heart so he's not usually my favourite. ๐Ÿคท‍โ™€๏ธ

Anyways, hope you're feeling better soon and I love Draco as either a top or a bottom (or both as you said) though I do have a fondness for him being in charge. ๐Ÿ˜‰ 

person Smile317
schedule August 20, 2021 at 12:00 AM

You make me laugh. ๐Ÿ˜„ I love reading your story. To me there's never too much smut or too long a chapter. And I like the fluff. So no worries on my end. Still trying to figure out the house. You've definitely got me stumped there. Can't wait to see Narcissa's reaction.  Hope you feel better soon. Don't push yourself and get some rest. Now I just have to wait for the hurricane to hit. Going to be a busy weekend. 

person BooBack
schedule August 16, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Phew! So happy she's not pregnant! I could see that getting very complicated if Ron really wanted it but she wasn't too keen. I'm annoyed at Ron interrupting their time together though and he's definitely been a bit of a prick when he said before that he'd be happy whoever it was as long as Harry was happy. ๐Ÿคจ

I'm very curious to see what the twists and turns will be and I've enjoyed this chapter a lot; fluffy with a hint of smut is very much a plus. ๐Ÿ˜Š 

person Nari-Chan
schedule August 14, 2021 at 12:00 AM

This was a great chapter and Ron acted just as i expected I hope he chills out and and eventually accept them and see that Harry is happy, also I am glad Hermione is not pregnant I have always never thought that they were right for each other polor opposites and Ron has always been a bit too hot headed and  possessive. This is just my opinion but  I'd love to see Hermione with someone who challenges her and pushes her not holds her back as Ron does in my option. Ok off my soap box lol please update again soon I can't wait ,๐Ÿ™ƒ

person Smile317
schedule August 13, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Yeah it was me. Sometimes I don't notice I haven't logged in. ๐Ÿคช.  I'm always a fan of the fluff.   It's going to make a tough working environment if Ron doesn't come around. I understand his side and that he was worried about Hermione but I'm still disappointed in him. He needs to grow up.  Looks like the maybe the "I love you"s are starting to get close??  Sigh......  But again all the unanswered questions keeping me on the edge. Harry's mysterious house, Draco's mysterious client. ๐Ÿ˜ณ. And you can't forget Lucius lurking in the background. So much to think about. Can't wait until the next chapter. ๐Ÿ˜

person BooBack
schedule August 5, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Hiiii! I've finally just made it through those two beasts of chapters. There was so much going on and I loved it all and of course the smut was... *chef's kiss*

As always, looking forward to more and I'm so glad that you enjoy my stories as well. ๐Ÿ˜

person Nari-Chan
schedule August 1, 2021 at 12:00 AM

I'd love to read the one shots you wrote and can't wait to read the next chapter!!!

 

person Anonymous
schedule July 31, 2021 at 12:00 AM

๐Ÿคฏ๐Ÿ˜ณ I'm blown away. So many unanswered questions-I can't handle it. ๐Ÿคช I don't know even where to start thinking.  And I'm with Draco, don't like the yelling but I do like the making up part.  And Harry needs to tell Ron and Hermione. "No more secrets".  Great chapter. Never too long. And yes, please post those one-shots. And Happy Harry birthday to you too. 

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