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April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I rated this a ++ because it seemed to be written more like an outline for a story then written like the final draft itself. I feel a thesaurus could have been used many times throughout. Also because of the way it was written i found myself not nearly as intersted as i could have been because i lost respect for it in that sense.
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope to see more of this story soon i have really enjoyed what I have read so far.
K.
K.
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'ve left this story off at a climactic point without finishing it. It\'s very interesting and only needs a final chapter to finish it. Any chance you\'ll do so?
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July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
read so far: Ch 1-3 (1-7?)
I love this Harry character development although the he seems to be adjusting alittle too easily . He truly seems confident and capable now. I especially love the \"god-house\" effect on him. :-)
I hope you update soon.
I love this Harry character development although the he seems to be adjusting alittle too easily . He truly seems confident and capable now. I especially love the \"god-house\" effect on him. :-)
I hope you update soon.
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July 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Do you think that you could do more on this story, this is getting really good so far and i wanna know much more of Remus\' reaction to being in the house and will Harry take him on a tour of the house.
Please update soon
Please update soon
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June 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit I love this fanfic! Please update it asap, I\'m sure that everyone who has read this will be appreciative. This is one of the best Harry/Sev stories I have read in a long time. I love the way you made Harry the Heir of Gryffindor but didn\'t make it the main plot as any stories do. Also the way you made Harry beleive himself a murderer is what I truely believe he would do. You did an excelent job not making them OOC.
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June 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Minnie
This was great. I hope you write more on this story. If you do would you mind letting me know. I will probably see if you have on your lj or whatever.
Turtle
This was great. I hope you write more on this story. If you do would you mind letting me know. I will probably see if you have on your lj or whatever.
Turtle
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June 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome! I love the maturity of Harry & Sev\'s rrelationship. Harry is one tough guy, man!
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June 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ron is such an arse! Harry went a bit overboard but, hey, he\'s had a stressfull life.
More smut would be nice, but that\'s just my opinion. hehehe. Sev. wants to stay at
the house with Harry. Is that just because of the potions stuff? I hope not. Thanks
for the update.
More smut would be nice, but that\'s just my opinion. hehehe. Sev. wants to stay at
the house with Harry. Is that just because of the potions stuff? I hope not. Thanks
for the update.
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June 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay thank you, now More please. Thank You Very Much ;)