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June 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
your story has a very interesting plot! i\'d love to continue to read You You just need a beta-reader, or if you have one already, try another one. you know, you do make grammar mistakes, and you should re-read the story before posting it. otherwise, your story is really good!
~massarokas
~massarokas
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June 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I suck at grammer wish I could help..
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June 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That sounds interesting. Lets guess - one of the fathers is Lucius? Now that\'s something. Let\'s see who get\'s a coronarinfarct first.
please continue soon.
please continue soon.
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June 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Harry/Draco perhaps?
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June 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. New angle. I look forward to reading more. Is this going to be a Draco Harry slash story? Hope so.
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June 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good so far, the only thing I would of done is I would of found out who the parents were first. before resorting. Keep it up