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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Now THAT'S a creatives premise! Nice mix of humour and hotness!
Although it would have been even kinkier if Nagini hadn't transformed into human form.... (maybe I should post a challenge to that effect?)
It might have been a good idea to include an "AU" warning, since you made some significant changes - like making Nagini male (she's definitely referred to as a she, plus her name was originally that of a female cobra in a Kipling story) and making her only 6' long (in GF, "The Riddle House," she's described as "at least 12 feet," and since she's evidently capable of swallowing an adult human being, she'd probably be much bigger than that).
I shall definitely check out your other stories. If this one is at all typical of your writing, I'm in for quite an experience. (in a good way)
Although it would have been even kinkier if Nagini hadn't transformed into human form.... (maybe I should post a challenge to that effect?)
It might have been a good idea to include an "AU" warning, since you made some significant changes - like making Nagini male (she's definitely referred to as a she, plus her name was originally that of a female cobra in a Kipling story) and making her only 6' long (in GF, "The Riddle House," she's described as "at least 12 feet," and since she's evidently capable of swallowing an adult human being, she'd probably be much bigger than that).
I shall definitely check out your other stories. If this one is at all typical of your writing, I'm in for quite an experience. (in a good way)
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August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ye... gods... BRILLIANT XD W00t w00t!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I totally love this!!! *dances* MORI WANTS MORE *__________*
I totally love this!!! *dances* MORI WANTS MORE *__________*
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March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The #1 element that make a good bumsex story? a Dark Lord named Tom in leather thong and thing-high leather boots. Can\'t be beaten. The quality of this ficlet lies in the fact that it recognises that sex is funny and painful and the choice of protagonists evokes yet more humour - indeed, other than a Sidious/Vader pairing, it is hard to imagine more evil fictional characterss who might possibly get it on. A Day in the Life of Lord Voldemort also shows that \"Tom\" *does* have a life outside of battling Harry Potter...
Worth a read.
Worth a read.
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August 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hahahaha, I think that whoever corrected your exam was pretty damn lucky!
It was well - and explicitly - written and really brought out the little lover of masochism in me. Heh.
Looove the ending ... poor, poor Harry!
Triple fabuloso and quite excellent!
Love and angst,
vivica
It was well - and explicitly - written and really brought out the little lover of masochism in me. Heh.
Looove the ending ... poor, poor Harry!
Triple fabuloso and quite excellent!
Love and angst,
vivica
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June 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*Searches in her pockets* Ah here it is my dearest. This is for you. * hands over a glowing orb of purest crystal with writhing green and silver flames in it * This is the most funniest sick sad and perverted yet awesome beyond chuckling cool ending award. it\'s flames change color at the awardee\'s preference. Anyway I so loved that and whoever graded yer papaer must have had a dropped jaw and a hard on like no other (or a puddle in their chair depending) That was absolutely..... unbelievably twisted! In a sentence it was worthy of me! GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!*Awards the hug & the plaque that goes along with the orb and vanishes*
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June 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Queer and disturbin\'. But I liked it, tres amusant.
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June 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like the way that you write. I couldn\'t stop laughing at the part about Harry!
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June 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was off the scales!
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June 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was off the scale
even!
even!
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June 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG KESHU.
I absolutely loved it.
It was weird though, Voldemort, and the snake. But something that I\'m pretty sure I haven\'t seen before. (First Ron with the Puffskein, now Voldemort and a huge snake! - go magical-bestiality!)
ANYWAY, as usual, you rocked.
And, DID you write that on your exam paper and pass it in?! I hope they give you bonus points - that is, if they don\'t drop dead of a heart attack!
Also, I liked that bit about Harry at the end - very clever!
I absolutely loved it.
It was weird though, Voldemort, and the snake. But something that I\'m pretty sure I haven\'t seen before. (First Ron with the Puffskein, now Voldemort and a huge snake! - go magical-bestiality!)
ANYWAY, as usual, you rocked.
And, DID you write that on your exam paper and pass it in?! I hope they give you bonus points - that is, if they don\'t drop dead of a heart attack!
Also, I liked that bit about Harry at the end - very clever!