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I knew you wouldn\'t let me down! This is a great beginning. AND you left me hanging! Great Idea on the getting into peoples minds and I never thought of Ron as a cad, but it works on him well. And I LOVED the Mione nickname, you would think that by now rowling would have thought to have them with nicknames for at l one one of them. I almost thought OMG about the centaur sex, but he IS part human right? And if you think about it, Hagrid\'s only half human and I am not so sure that centaurs are animals more than people. Anyhow it was edgy enough without going gross. The ONLY negative thing I thought, was the typos, and I\'m sure you caught them. Can you go back and change them? If you like I can edit for you so you don\'t have to be bothered with tedious technicalities. But the story is great, it makes sense, it\'s interesting, and flows well. I NEED you to keep writing. Good job.........hurry up

Sherri

this is good...

I love it! So cute and perfect...and H/Hr is my favorite pairing...and it fits that Harry\'s used by Hermione to get back at Ron, like u said at the end of the first chapter. hope you update soon :)

God that was great!!!

Hope you will write more, love your fic!!!

Wow. Rage much? You\'d have to have a lot of hostility built up to write that.
Don\'t get me wrong. I loved it. I hope writing helps you release emotions. And
I hope you write more because I\'d love to read it.