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for A Delicate Obsession

by Avrild

person Lady Aidil
schedule July 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well,well-I promise not to claim to longer chapters if yoe goe going to write them so quickly and amazing ;) Honestly-I find your work the pure entartainment for my mind-the lightly-written smut with twisted ideas and you did it again-had written another admirably sweet chapter I`m pleased with so much.I enjoy Snape`s remembrances of Tara,however his relationship with Hermiona/Laura is my favourite most of all.Considering Hermiona`s meeting with Dobby I suppose the next chapter will be funny(this creature is really invented to making fun).
person Halo
schedule July 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I giggle at the thought of Dobby running all over Hogwarts for a week wearing Herm\'s underwear on his head, and the thought of the face Minerva gives Hermione about it is just priceless. Great work.
person BeautifullyMalicious
schedule July 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic. I think the chapter lengths are perfect, and as you are the author it is up to you how long or short theouldould be. There\'s only one thing left to say...
More, please. :)
person Laerai
schedule July 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Don\'t you worry about chapter size. Its all good. I will say again that I am soo loving this story! Keep it up! ^_^
person fervesco
schedule July 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! THat was impressive! I just read the whole thing (not a small feat, I might add - your fic is getting quite long!) Please, please keep going, and I so hope that all works out for Sev and Herm!
person Kitty D
schedule July 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is bloody bryliant, and I cant wait till the next chapter!!!!
Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Lady Aidil
schedule July 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter,partially because you gave a lovely reminiscence of Tara what was my great wishing-and it was really funny-such a pricky,unwise young Snape-called to order by young girl,magnificent scene indeed.There are in fic three romances-the former with Tara,the present with \"Laura\" and at the end-actual-Hermina`s relationship with Snape on two levels-in her imagination and in reality-performing Laura.It appears very complicated so both wonderful and amazing-I can`t bear waiting for the next part-despite some chapters are too short for my appetite-yet I badly want to read more and more-be \"the writing machine\"and update soon!Praying for author`s inspiration-regards L.A.
person jenbachand
schedule July 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. The length is fine and the story is great. Looking forward to more.

Jen :)
person Rei
schedule July 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Question: is Snape ever going to find out that Laura is Hermione? I can\'t imagine that it\'ll be a very pretty sight when he does realize it...
Poor Hermione! She was just looking for a little lovin\'.
person Halo
schedule July 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, but too short!!! When do we learn more about Tara? I\'m so eager to find out how Severus reacts to finding out that Laura is Hermione. All in all, great work. :)

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