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Chapter 16 - never for one minute did I think that this pregnancy would miscarry. I\'m bitter, but I\'ll live, its my problem. The chapter title didn\'t even clue me in. *sigh* thanks for the update.

Oh my, that was wrenching. The emotions were so raw and real. I really appreciate that you take chances with your story instead of writing the usual shipper formula stuff. Great story, looking forward to more.

Chapter 16... This is probably something I should have waited to read in the morning!!! I couldn\'t wait & now I\'m sitting here with tears rolling down my face!!! This is so very BEAUTIFUL & yet so very sad!!! The beauty comes with the amount of love that they feel for each other & even with theunt unt of love that they share, their loss is so sad & unfair!!!

I do hope that Hermione & Remus will stay together & not allow the cord to turn back to white!!! They are happy together & they do love each other & I do hope that you will allow that to happen!!! In hope & til chapter 17, Deb >^..^<

That was so sad. They lost the baby.
Well, in MHO she was too young to be having children. What was she 16?
I hope they stay together though. Just let her finish school. She is too intelligent to not finish her education. (She should go to university also.)
Write more soon Andrian.
Cheers.

::sob:: Remus...So kind and loving and...DAMNIT!!! Do any guys like that exist in the Muggle world??!! ::sniff sniff::
I was definitely uber-happy that you updated this!!! You are one of the best H/R writers out there, and I look forward to more!!!

OMG with the last two chapters!! Both have been rather short compared to all the rest and both have been totally depressing. I 't s't say that I\'m surprised about her losing the baby \'cause I was expecting something like that but I wasn\'t expecting him to push her away.
This is by far the best HG/RL fic I\'ve ever read and I was hoping that it would be different from the 90% out there that always have a tragic ending where Remus dumps Hermione for her own good \'cause he\'s older than her. It\'s a bit late for him to get all noble at this point, IMO, and pushing her away after she\'s miscarried saving his life is just cold. Please make him see the light and find his way back to her, realize how much she loves him and consumate the damn bonding.
(I think this may be why I\'m so hooked on stories with Herminone -- the girl never gets a frigging break with her love life. Poor girl.)

oh what a sad chapter. Losing the baby... possibly losing Remus. Please... please... no angsty endings. Angst is ok up until the end, but pretty please with sugar on top wrap it up nice and pretty with a great big bow?

Oh My god I was in tears as soon as I saw the chapter title Bereavement nooooooooooo!... she\'s going to kill Remus (because I know you aren\'t afraid to do it) but instead it was the baby (sob) Wh dec decision and Hermione must be in so much pain emotionally and physically. Poor Remus as well he thought he was going to have a family of his own. Dammit I\'m not as usually as emotional as this but I love the story.

NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AW man! another cliff hanger GRRRRRRRRRR!!!! Please hurry up with the story! :p ^_^ =)

Great Job
Lupinsgirl

Ahhh! I hate cliff hangers!