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for The Bird Having Flown

by SkidRow

person Shorey
schedule December 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Love this story! Definitely like this direction than the previous ending.

schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
SPECTACULAR!!!
I love it!
I can't wait for the rest. Please Please Please update soon!!!
person alex
schedule August 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story, a lot of feeling and passion in your writing, i am very impressed. this is a good story with a lot of potential. it seems like you\'ve been leading up to a passionate relationship between Snape, and Starr so i think you should continue that to end your story witeir eir happy relationship, and the fury of Lucius Malfoy. Also, i think that Lucius should be taught a lesson or two from Starr, just to show him that she\'s not just his play-thing, but a woman, as well, and capable of taking care of herself, without any of his influence. he should then be shoved off a cliff, or something else that is a undesirable death.. *laughs evilly* he deserves it...great story! update soon.
person Hurricane
schedule July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed Falling Starr however; this new ending lends itself to more possibilities. The dialog between Starr and Snape is great. I hope you decide to continue, and can?t wait to find out what happens next between our favorite Potions Master anciuscius?s former mistress. Good

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