rate_review Reviews

Another lovely chapter. I think the way you had Bera tell the story of her childhood crush was very poignant, particularly as it helped the reader relate to poor Hermione. It was also a very subtle way of bringing Bera and Remus closer together. Their relationship is developing beautifully.
One little teensy niggle; as Bera is from Norway and Hogwarts is in Scotland, would she not have apparated across the North Sea, not the Channel? The Channel would involve a pretty long detour. Just an observation!

I liked Bera\'s and Lupin\'s \'conversation\' by the fire very much. Your description of him was very...well, loving is the word that springs to mind!
I wasn\'t sure about Snape\'s dream encounter with Hermione. It all seemed a little bald and mechanical. Of course, if that was your intention because it was a description of a masculine, early morning erection type of dream, then please disregard my comment, LOL! I get the feeling it might leave him questioning his feelings, however, coming hot on the heels of his discussion with Bera (which could almost be a metaphor for a discussion between the SS/HG and SS/OFC shippers, could it not?)

i like this story. A hidden girlfreind is not OOC for Snape after all. he strikes me a secretive man besides Alan Rickman aka Snape is a very attractive man., like he has no girlfriend. A pretty boy is a pretty BOY, but a man is a MAN.

Love the insights. All those difficult questions. Wonderfully done.

I only want to tell you that I like your story very much, although I am a SS/ HG shipper, because I like your snape very much. And your OC\'s are very good, very realistic. English is not my native language AND I am a bit high because of a operation to remove my wisdom teeth two hours ago. I do hope this review makes any sense to you.

please continue

hugs from germany reena

I\'m enjoying this very much! You have a great story here.

I know I said I wasn\'t going to read anymore, but your story is too good to resist! I hope you are happy. I still wish that Severus was w/ Hermione instead of Tziganne, but it\'s not my story. I will simply have to satisfy my SS/HG fix elsewhere. But I will still read and review for you. I can\'t help it you write well Keep up the wonderful job!

P.S. The SS/HG shipper in me thanks you profusely for the dream at the end of chapter 6!

The images created - more so in Chapter 3 are very powerful. My skin was feeling chills for several minutes afterwards. Thankyou.

I don\'t understand how you arrived at the name for your work - some itme you might enlighten me.
dave

Damn! Very nice. Love the idea of Snape with a FULLY ADULT FEMALE, not popping Hermione\'s cherry every other fanfic. I started something like that myself, with my \'Mistress Tanya\' character - but I adore your Tziganne! How do you pronounce it?
The way you described Rosemerata\'s pub reminded me of a place in AZ called Fiddler\'s Dream - cozy.
NICE! WRITE MORE! NOW! (please?)

- \'Da Kitten

This is great. I really feel for Hermione, suffering a crushing blow like that. But then, in my opinion she\'s always be better off with Lupin, LOL! That isn\'t about to happen here, though.
It\'s nice to see SNape in a real friendship too, with Remus. But I fell insanely jealous of Tziganne!
Remus\' reaction to this new woman was very subtly done. I like the way the emphasis has not been especially on them so far, there\'s a slow build-up that\'s working really well.