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for Outside the Fire

by moonglow

person Alanfan
schedule August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve just read chapter three. I love your sense of humour, and the story. Like your husband I\'m not happy with slash. But you have a lovely way of telling a story, so I can live withit. Can\'t wait for chapter four.
person Tina
schedule August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You are evil, you know this don\'t you? I cannot believe you stopped there!

This is wonderful. You have a good feel for the characters, I especially like your Draco and Ron. You also weave past happenings easily into the storyline giving the reader a breif but informative glimpse into the past. This is definitely going to be favorite story of mine!
person jenbachand
schedule August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok, it\'s too cute. I love it. Great writing as always. Anxiously awaiting an update, and get Sev some Nicorette.

Jen :)
person Ilove2readlemons
schedule July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like the beginning of this story. I also like that you are including Minor Characters like MB in your story. Is she going to have a part through out your story?
person cutie_draco84
schedule July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the start of your story. Can\'t get enough of H/D so I\'m not at all dissapointed at the scene with them, but look foward to Sev getting some happiness he deserves it. keep posting, I\'ll keep r and r
person silverCross
schedule July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
yay, Harry/Draco, i like, i like!! the other pairings are cool too, so update soon \'kay?!
person Liah
schedule July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
lovely, fantastic, interesting...a good fic all in all. draco and harry is one of my favourite pairings (others are SS/HG and SS/SB, bit weird but can\'t help liking them..:P) and this setting of the scene describes well their relationship, at least this is the image i get when thinking of those two....
but yeah....i hope new chapter is soon out:)
person Deb >^..^< 
schedule December 31, 1919 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12... I guess that Harry learned the hard way that it\'s not nice to mess with Hermione Granger!!! That was BRILLIANT & she was the last person that I would have thought to be a suspect!!!

I VERY MUCH ENJOYED how you got Severus & Hermione together, very well written!!! I look forward to seeing how things go between them now ttheythey have been intimate?!? I hope he doesn\'t do anything to mess this up!!! Can\'t wait to see what happens next!!! Til chapter 14, Deb >^..^<

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