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September 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really loved your story! You are very good writer. And, I hope you continue to put out great stories.
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September 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
April.
I apologize for not reading this story sooner. It was spectacular! You really have a grasp of history. I normaly dont read a lot of AU stories but once I got started I couldnt stop. Wonderful work, you truly are an artist.
RWH
I apologize for not reading this story sooner. It was spectacular! You really have a grasp of history. I normaly dont read a lot of AU stories but once I got started I couldnt stop. Wonderful work, you truly are an artist.
RWH
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September 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I loved the epilogue. I thought it brought everything together quite nicely. (And I have to admit that as a pregnant woman in the throes of hyper-active sex drive right now, I could totally relate!)
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September 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
April,
I loved the epilogue... well I loved the whole story, but the epilogue was great. And you really didnt need that long note at the end of it. :-) I think the epilogue actually helped... mostly cause I\'m not a huge fan of the AU type story... granted all fan fic is AU, but you know what I mean. But in the words of Ron, you story was \"bloody brilliant\". I\'m gonna have to get around to reading your other stories.
I loved the epilogue... well I loved the whole story, but the epilogue was great. And you really didnt need that long note at the end of it. :-) I think the epilogue actually helped... mostly cause I\'m not a huge fan of the AU type story... granted all fan fic is AU, but you know what I mean. But in the words of Ron, you story was \"bloody brilliant\". I\'m gonna have to get around to reading your other stories.
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September 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
I love this story! It was very sweet, funny, smart and well written. Thank you for sharing. For critisim, I did see some gramatical errors and some mispelled words, but after all, I\'m a journalist and that\'s what I get paid to do. This was a great story over all and I would bnorenored to read the epilouge.
I love this story! It was very sweet, funny, smart and well written. Thank you for sharing. For critisim, I did see some gramatical errors and some mispelled words, but after all, I\'m a journalist and that\'s what I get paid to do. This was a great story over all and I would bnorenored to read the epilouge.
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September 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Bravo...twas excellent...definitely a different type of story but you did a sb job job!
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September 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
An excellent end to an excellent story :)
I\'m glad Hermione was able to demonstrate to Snape that women are perfectly capable of la petit mort :)
I\'m glad Hermione was able to demonstrate to Snape that women are perfectly capable of la petit mort :)
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September 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful story! The thing I hate most about great stories is that they must end. Unfortunately, everything has an ending. I promise that if you post an epilogue I will read it. It is a great way to postpone the end of story. Please keep writing!
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September 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
excellent job. of your stories this is one of my favorites. i really enjoyed this version of severus, mainly cause i related to his inability to trust/ fear of intamicy. i am very relieved that you allowed him to live. and that they managed to resolve their problems! wonderful story, nicely done!
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September 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
you simply cannot let Severus die. if he dies i don\'t know what i\'ll do!! i really enjoy this story, excellently written, very good! keep up the good work, let severus live [viva la severus!].