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person alwritermom
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A new chapter; YES! I liked it, I just wish it were longer!
person Elayne
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ugh!!! You can\'t just leave it like that! Evil cliffhanger. I really like how you didn\'t just have Hermione and Snape jump in bed right away, and I really really like how Hermione\'s reaction to sex was typical of someone who had just been raped. I hate those stories that have a rape victim all enjoying sex right away. It is very unrealistic. Overall, I think this story is one of the best fanfictions I have ever read. Complex plot, realistic characters (that you actually care about), and you don\'t repeat the same five phrases over and over (like a lot of fictions tend to do). Please let me know when you post new chapters. Oh yeah, I think aff.net ate some words in earlier chapters. In case you feel like going back and editing. Pain in the butt aff.net. Thanks for writing this story *sends chocolate*.
person Anon
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it!!! Read it about 100 times;) Keep going!
person Ashley_Snape
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve been waiting for this update! Please give us the next chapter soon, I don\'t know how long I can wait to see what happens to Pansy!
person Adrianne
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I keep coming back to this, because it\'s ... SUPERB! ... and yet, I keep hitting the end of chapter cliffhangers, and I swear each time, the neighbors curse me as I cry out in frustration.

The waiting is exquisite agony. As much as I enjoy the suspense, I have to hop on the \"hurry up\" train and urge your creativity to flow in my favour :P

This has truly become one of my favourite HG/SS fics :)
person lovethelab
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks so much for the update. But did you have to leave such an evil cliffie?? I hope you are able to post the next chapter soon so we can find out what happened to Pansy and the baby. I hope Pansy and Ron find happiness with each other.
person Lily_Fire
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No!!!! Not a cliffy!!! GOd, i love the story so much. Please, pleaseplease update!!! (soon if you can}
person Alyse
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh please be quick on your next up date.........PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!
person missmaryrae
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I just came upon this story today. I absolutley love it. It\'s an interesting way to draw the two characters together. I can\'t believe that you left Chapter 37 on such a cliffhanger, though. . . how delightfully evil. I am eagerly awaiting the next installment of this.
person Pixi
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow Red, you do know how to keep a girl reading. I\'ve been away for a little while but i was so glad to find your story. Can\'t wait to see what you do next. You\'ve managed to live up to my expectations so far.

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