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person Kimi
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so glad you\'ve updated. I\'d gotten behind on this story and it was great to have several chapters to read at once. I love the merging of the DA and RAT. The new name is great. Keep up the great work and hope to see an update soon.
person LadyyHentai
schedule April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Honestly, you\'re killing me here. You\'re making me get all sentimental. And for once, in my life, I actually like Draco lol. You have a great way of shaping characters, with good reasons, and to be honest I never thought Hermione and Snape could be a good couple, but now they\'re making competition with Romeo in Juliet in my head. Honestly, you\'re great, really great, I might actually have to kiss your feet.
person scifichick774
schedule April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So, it would be wrong of me to let out an evil cackle at Snape\'s confusion, right? *hangs head in shame* Sorry.
person Raven
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
its just that susan bones was always
convayed as a meek shy person, weak
and norticrticularily attractive and i
dont see that as dracos type. lol
he wants someone more lusty, forceful
strongwilled ;-D lol
ANYWAY im glad she loves him
i didnt think she would i thort that
she would end up sayihat hat she dosent
realy love him and run away or sumet
dont ask me why i thort that i jus did

must trot off i need to do some
history coursework :,-(
stil my fave fic loadsa luv Ravn.x.
person Davina Icaras
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i\'ll keep reviewing, you\'ve got a deal! LOL I really liked the way Hermoine finally \'stopped screwing around\', it was really great to finally read it!
I loved Severus\' way of coming in, I think that everybody really would have parted before him LOL. Thank you for updating so soon, you\'ade ade my day yet again! I can\'t wait untill \'the games\' really begin, i wonder if Draco really is such a good spy... And Henry the VIII is really briljant! you\'ve already given me an idea for a fic of my own LOL But i\'m writing that in Dutch, so i don\'t think you\'ll read it... I\'m thinking about a fic in English, but so far it\'s only an idea I\'ll keep you posted if you want to read it, i\'ll tell you more when I review the next chapter ;) Blessed be, Davina
person PotionsMistressM
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! She said it! And she kissed him! Oh, yay! I\'m so happy you\'ve almost made me forget that I have to go to work tonight. Again... second time today... Oh, but happy thoughts! She told him!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yay!

Did I say \"yay?\"
ove ove this!
person severessa
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My Dear Genius Red,
This story is the first fanfiction story that I read. I was immediately captivated by the way Severus acted towards Hermione, and by the way the staff embraced the family that Lucius forcibly created. It leaves me with a warmth in my being that I need badly right now.

I am sure that you have heard that there is another story now that has been causing a great deal of controversy. Sometimes, this lovely story of yours is compared to it. I want you to know that, as for me, I love A Secret Worth Keeping, and I hope that you are not affected by all of the words that are thrown around on some of the web sites.

In a perfect world, there would not be any assault, rape, or violence. Since we don\'t have that, it is comforting to dream of a life where the victim is cared for, the perp is remorseful, and everyone can heal and become happy, for ever after.

When I read a disturbing story, or when life gets to me, (frequently, I might add), the caring and love that I find in your story is a refuge that I always return to. Thank You.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter twenty-four: Pandemonium... I like the way that Severus decided to take a ploy from the past & use it to everyone\'s benefit, WELL DONE!!! I also like that Neville showed some backbone!!!

I am also glad to see that Hermione listened to Poppy & did the right thing!!! Yes she is in a position that she shouldnbe ibe in, but she is there all the same & has to deal with everything involved!!! At least she was open & honest with Severus & I feel like this is a very important step in their relationship!!! I know that Severus does love Hermione & one can feel the fact that he wishes things were different!!! I think this portion shows a good deal about how he feels...
person ldf
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
sneaku blu bloody sneak!

as usual, it was well worth the wait. i especially
liked the references to Moldy Voldie thinking
he was a god, and Severus knowing that he was
merely a man who had the misfortune to be
fighting a man with a god complex.

i was also fascinated with the history lesson.
one of those things from my high school days that
i just can\'t seem to lay to rest and properly escape.

thank you so much.

*hugs*

~blessings~
ldf
person shiv5468
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t remember whether I left a review for this before, I think I did.

I do like the way you have Severus and Hermione coming together slowly and realistically. I think you\'ve taken a difficult subject and handled it sympathetically and with an underlying sense of how badlrmiormione would have been injured by the attack both physically and mentally.

I do enjoy this story and look for the updates when they come. The added dimension of the slytherins rejecting voldemort is intriguing and it will be interesting to see where it goes

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