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person MeganAnn0801
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I know that you try very hard to keep the chapters updated asap, and I wouldn\'t want you to take it any faster if it meant sacraficing the amazing writing that goes into each chapter. Sorry if I came out rude! :) I always thought that people ble being mad because u don\'t get the chapters up sooner would be good because u would know how much they like your story! Lol, I donknowknow, I can\'t write!!! Well, or play went to competition and we didn\'t advance out of district (pooey) but the two public performances will take place soon and we\'re going to rock their world! What with the kiss scene with Peter and Anne, and the tear-jerking monolouge by Mr. Frank, we\'re going to make everyone love us. Keep up the amazing work, this chapter was great, and update ASAP!!!! LOVE~~~~~~~~~~~ MeganAnn*
person ldf
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
~clappipng enthusiastically~
BRAVA! brava! encore!

it\'s about damn time, woman!

eagerly awaiting more. wonderful stuff.

*hugs*

~blessings~
ldf
person PotionsMistressM
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH BOY! It was like Christmas to find a new chapter!! This is totally my favorite unfinished story here, and I simply cannot wait for more. I mean, well, I CAN, but I don\'t want to. I understand, though. RL sucks. But I\'m so so so glad that this is updated now \'cause now I know that Hermione at t INt INTENDS to be in love with Severus, and that\'s what I\'ve been hoping for all along. I have to tell you I actually got chills reading the passage between Hermione and Severus! I totally wanted to touch him to comfort him, too! He\'s such a wonderful tortured souI loI love him- please end this story with them getting married and ng tng to the country and getting a dog and everyone living happily ever after! Poor Sev and poor Hermione both deserve it!!!!!!! Keep up the good work! No, really- stop whatever it is that keeps you from writing and just update this story!!! =)
person spaz141
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your Draco, what a refreshing surprise and with Susan Bones, double surprise. Nicely written showing Hermione\'s conflict with loving Severus and getting past what he did to her. Brilliant, you know I love it. Thanks.
person nesscafe
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t know what it is, but this story is so addictive. I get to the end of chapters and go \"OH NO! There has to be more!\", but alas writers are busy folk. I hope you can update for us again soon!
person Davina Icaras
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes, finally I could turn on my comp to read a new chapter! It wasn\'t very eventful, but I like the kind of person Draco is becoming (en not to mention Snape :D). He\'s still a Slytherin, but he\'s got his softspots! I can\'t wait \'till the Occlumency lessons! Please update quicker, \'cause you\'re costing me all my fingernails ;D Still a great story, and I hope you\'ll keep writing, \'cause I\'m not stopping reading it untill at least the revenge on Lucius, I\'m glad I\'m not in his shoes right now...

Keep up the good work, and blessed be,
Davina
person Estrilda
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you are updating this again. It has a great plot and wonderful characters.
person ba
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i\'m reviewing here, because ff.net doesn\'t work for me at the moment. :) Good chapter, very good, go on!
person M
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Glad I popped in here. I\'m impatient. I may wait even longer next time so I can get more than one chapter. I don\'t deal well with suspense. BUT don\'t rush on my account, take you time so it is perfect.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter twenty-three: For the love of the Sons... I really can\'t say enough about how WONDERFUL your story is!!! You have taken some very difficult subjects, put them together & done them real justice!!!

The conversation between Poppy & Hermione was so very emotional & touching, not to mention very eye-opening for Hermione!!! She really gave Hermione some food for thought & I think she also settled her mind about a few things!!!

I must say that I am VERY IMPRESSED with your Draco!!! There are times that his bad boy persona are expected, but I think the personality you have given him is believable & PET foT for this story!!! I also very much appreciated the conversation between Severus & Draco!!! Not only did he show that he has honor, but that he is growing up!!!

I am looking forward to seeing how the meeting of the DA & RAT goes as well as finding out if Hermione will tell Severus how she feels about him & a possible future for them!!! Til chapter 24, Deb >^..^<

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