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for Punch Drunk Love.

by Mexxandlex

person The Orange Coconut
schedule August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great second chapter! The dialogue was great and the ending, much like the last, was a teaser. The last chapter, I figured Val was Draco\'s son, but you stopped just before the reaction. And for this chapter, well, guts are spilled and the secret is out. I really look forward to the 3rd installment.
person Kel
schedule August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooo..you.you can\'t just end it like that! It was getting really good! (not that it wasn\'t good from the beginning) There\'s so much more possiblity with this story; it seems a shame to end it now. *sighs* But, anyway, great job on a great fic. Kudos!
person Apollonia
schedule August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful story! Bittersweet with a happy ending. I\'m glad that Draco will be part of Hermione and Val\'s lives. Will we see a sequel? Just curious. :)
person GlindaTrisstt
schedule August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM


I liked reading a story with a more mature subject matter. Great idea, interestingly done, though it all worked out a bit easliy. Overall a good read.

Glinda
person lalaluu
schedule August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful! Congratulations on a beautiful story with believable and definitely likeable characters! Bravo!
person Moldanubikum
schedule August 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hello, I really like this story. unfortunately it isn\'t posted on Fanfiction net anymore - there it is lot easier to find.
Anyway, I am looking forward for part 3.
Regards
person genrou
schedule August 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
well, the thing that caught my attention was the title (i adore the recent movie) and then of course that it was a dm/hg fic. and i must say i really like this fic so far. its well written in both dialouge and characterization. however my only questioning is the calculations to val\'s age in comparison to hermione\'s. isnt it a little off? i mean it quite possibly isnt but id be happy for an explaination. but otherwise keep up the good work. its sad knowing that this is only a three part piece and im hoping for more or other great work. please submit restrest soon. thanks.
person HPfreak18
schedule August 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This n exn excellent story Completely wicked!! OMG!! I love it so much so far. When you update could you please please please e-mail me at HPfreak18@cs.com
person Francy
schedule August 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome story!! I love it! Please continue...!! I am anxious to see how Val will react to Hermione\'s little announcement!!
person The Orange Coconut
schedule August 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Now, if you must know, that was the most surprising ending. I didn\'t expect it... at all. Though I think sherehere in the back of my mind, I really should have. But it was great! I really look foward to reading the rest of this fanfic.

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