rate_review Reviews

This is incredibly strong. You are really setting the reader up for a long fic with all the information, asides, innuendos, mysteries and strong characters in this chapter. Will it be long??? I do hope so. I love your teenage Snape, just love him. He\'s got so much potential.

The dialgue is strong, your scenes well described and played out. I want to know more about Theda!

You just keep layering and layering onto this story. It is very intriguing. It\'s nice to see a young Severus with so much hope for the future yet so much faith in the present.

I am so anxious to see how a relationship develops between these two darkly mysterious characters.

Keep going!

I\'m really enjoying this story. It\'s nice to see Severus characterised in this way, still a loner but before the death eater years make him bitter and tortured. Theda is a nice character too, and I like the way their relationship is develpoing. And it makes a refreshing change to have the student/teacher story turned on its head!

I think your story is very, very interesting. I can\'t remember seeing this premise anywhere else in the HPVerse, so good onya for coming up with something original. You have a great command of dialogue and very strong visuals.

I think your story would be easier to read if it were formatted with breaks between paragraphs and/or dialogue.

You\'ve certainly captured my interest and I will check back for your updates. Keep writing!

Be well,
Elizabeth