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for Damaged Goods

by shelia

person crissy
schedule November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this fic is so overwhelmiits its crazy. and so long. and so scary. i have to read bits at a time. but i kcomicoming back. you have a great writing style and the plot is great. scary but it draws the reader in. i want to know if heermione will fight back herself or if it will be severus who saves her. will she have her chance to kill lucius yet?
person Mary
schedule November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You\'ve done it again! *grin* Another brilliant chapter. Your attention to detail is simply mind-blowing especially all your A/Ns at the end of chapters. I simply love the depth you have created for Sev & Hermione\'s characters. Don\'t let Harry\'s heart get broken though. Sweet caring honourable boy v/s dark brooding troubled complex Sev. Hmm... I know who I\'d tanydanyday... Go you good thing Sev!! You need some joy! This is by far my most favourite fic and as much as it feels like the end is nigh, I wish this story would keep going forever!! Given your amazing, inspired imagination, I\'m pretty sure you could do it too!

Hugs & Godspeed
M
person Rilla
schedule November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You have me all tied up in knots again reading this. I can hardly wait for the next update.
person Deb>^..^<
schedule November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I Have been reading this story for a whilI doI don\'t bekieve that I\'ve left a review, for that I am sorry!!! I try to make the author aware that their work is appreciated & this is a story that I have become caught up in!!! Your work, for al the the darkness & sadness has been exceptional, well written & honest!!! You have made the situation & the characters very real which shows pure talent!!! I am so impressed by your portrayal of Severus, of all of the characters in truth!!! With chapter 22 you have given us a new insight to the many sides of Severus.... LOVE!!! You gave tiny bits of hints along the way, just enough to make him stating it believable, but not so many clues that it didn\'t give the statement the surprise & power it deserved!!! I will be watching for chapter 23 as I feel a great need to know what will happen to Severus & Hermione at Lucius\' party & if they live, what will happen to them beyond!!! Deb >^..^<
person Fish
schedule October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
awwww... sevvie-kins - typically h
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i love this fic... it\'s so dark, but with the light showing through at times...

loving it! more soon, please!

ciao
Fish
person SillyLily
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful!! Please update again soon!!
person Introspect
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You know, your story was the first Harry Potter fanfic I ever read...it iduceduced me to a world that I have since become so immerced in, I cannot live without. Your story has inspired me to write my own, and I look forward to your updates. That being said, I also wanted to say that this chapter has made me love your story all the more...not only the tenderness and trust you portray between Hermione and Snape, but I am a huge H/Hr shipper, and the kiss at the end almost made me cry. I love your story...I can\'t wait to see more of it in the future.
person GlindaTrisstt
schedule October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh I was so, so happy the see a new chapter for this story. it has been like a guilty pleasure for me. This has turned out to be one of the best stories on the site. That is why I listed it in my recomended readings !!

Can\'t wait for the next chapter. Is Harry considered equal footing ??

Glinda
person Deb >^..^<
schedule October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is AMAZING!!! I just sat & cried through parts of it, no one should have to suffer such things!!! I am hoping that you wil be updating soon. Deb >^..^<
person GrrArrg
schedule October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hurrah!

You\'re back, and better I hope?
Fantasic chapter
More soon plz
kisses

GrrArrg

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