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March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the story line but you really need a beta, many spelling mistakes, sentance structures...plus many more. Just need someone to check it over before you post it.
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March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, I\'ll be one of the few people to actually review such a good story. I hope you decide to continue it.
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March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
IT IS REALLY GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
IT IS REALLY GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I need more.please
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December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please give us the next chapter. I want more of this story bay.
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November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have to agree: this Harry is disgustingly pathetic.
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November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, not to bad. Actually, aside from a feellielling errors, it was really good. I love how you portrayed y any and the foolishness of all the people depending on someone who was just a boy. Mind if I make a suggestion? You could make Voldy like nicer to Harry, just to gain his trust, or you could make Harry more resistant. Anyway, just a suggestion. I can\'t wait for you to update soon. I\'ll be waiting for it!!
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November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love it. that was great. The scene of rape brutal and very awful. *Smirk* was great . more soon, please?? bay
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October 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this looks as good as ever
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October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great, great, great. I am jumping of joy. Finaly you wrote the second chapter!! Do you now who much I wait for this?.
No I am not crazy but please, write soon the netx chapter and if you are going to write sendme a email for show. Thank you.
thank you.besos. and cha chapter was fantastic. harry fall in love with the draco and relief togeter. Lamento mis faltas en ing
No I am not crazy but please, write soon the netx chapter and if you are going to write sendme a email for show. Thank you.
thank you.besos. and cha chapter was fantastic. harry fall in love with the draco and relief togeter. Lamento mis faltas en ing