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October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Muah. The secret is out and now the real girl action (not that action) starts. It\'ll be amusing how the slag Billy deals with this. I like Alicia/Terry still. But damn hot sex with Marcus/Katie, arguement/breakuop sex, so damn passionate and full of emotion. Always an avid reader...
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October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh i kew i had missed a lot of chapters, but wow. This story keeps getting exponentially better with each chapter. Sorry I can\'t write much now, but i\'ll give a much more indepth review as soon as i can. keep those chappiescoming.
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October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
And the plot thickens... dada, dada! Dude, it keeps getting better and better. I think it would be nice to see Alicia and Terence hang for a few chapters before they got back together, but please, they must get back together.
As for Billy, can anybody say pycho?
I can\'t wait for the next chapter! Happy writing! :)
As for Billy, can anybody say pycho?
I can\'t wait for the next chapter! Happy writing! :)
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October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Whoo! Real Anger, lol, thanks a million for another brilliant chapter, can\'t wait to see the fight.
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October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Uhoh! Great post. :) I hope that things work out with Terry and Ally, and that Marcus can make sure that Katie remains safe. I\'m sure that he will.
~~Jilly
~~Jilly
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October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
My computer has been down for the past week so I was thrilled to find that I come back to a few more chapters! Loved how you incorporated the events in book 3 (the fake dementors in the Quidditch game) with a plausible explanation for Marcus\' behavior. Like that he declared in the last chapter his intentions toward Katie and can\'t wait to see Katie fighr her her man.
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October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo... hey, I love this new angle with the marriage bitnd end excellent choice on letting Katie being pureblood: give us hope for her and Marcus!! Plus the library sex is incredibly hot! **fans self** But things don\'t seem to be looking so good for Ter and Ali... **weeps** Poor Ter... and I bet in her heart, Ali really misses him too. PLEASE let them get back together... I\'ll be your slave if you do!! **bows and wibbles at thy feet**
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October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Still going strong. Wonder character work. Like how the stories are weaving together.
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October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Over Billy\'s dead body?...OK have it her
way! The dead common cow!! LOL..still
lovin\' it...always!
way! The dead common cow!! LOL..still
lovin\' it...always!
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October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story... well written... mysterious... sexy... and adventure. I hope you update soon or I\'ll die! lol keep writing your stories!! :D