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October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter just like the rest of them. Onequestion- can Hermione slap him again? Maybe a good thing to include in the story would be a detailed POV when Severus\'s feelings start to change , or a flashback to when his feelings start to change. Great story keep up the good work!!!
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October 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really like your potrayal of Hermiona as the angry,strong,fighting person,equal Snape in cruelty,I think she should be less soft and more like a warrior if she wanted to be the one of Voldemort`s conquerrors.I obviously love Severus in his moody way-violent,cruel,rude,perfect and quick in the fight,sometimes a bastard,yet,of course,dead sexy as well.I`m glad you wrote so many chapters,however a little unhappy that you`re going to update more slowly I heartfully wish.I hope you`ll write this fic to the very end(I hardly bear when my favourite fics ain`t finished and badly suffer from)
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October 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
MEOW!!! I love badass Hermione! She totally rocks! Yeah!!! I was all jumping up and down when I saw this update! I totally didn\'t expect it! I can\'t wait for the next chapter! More! More! More!
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October 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter Please Please update again very soon.. If it iwll help you update a little quicker I will beta for you.. smile..
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October 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It\'s ce cce change to see Hermione portrayed as something else as innocent and in a more serious way. I espically like to see Hermione get the best of Severus. Keep up the good work and update soon!!! I can\'t wait to see what happens next.
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October 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
O..te..tension! I like it.
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October 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This fanfic has real style to it... Hermione a biker chick? Thats so damn cool.
MORE MORE MORE MORE
MORE MORE MORE MORE
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October 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Perfect! I loved the Mark Twain quote. I love the story you\'re building and definitely don\'t mind waiting, but I have to say the tension is going to be explosive by the time... well, you know.
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September 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Eep! I love Hermione\'s reaction to Dumbledore. I\'m looking forward to seeing what Severus has to say.
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September 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ANOTHER WOOHOO! loved thetingting from Hermione tmblembledore!!!
lmao... i could so imagine that! i like WOOHOOing... it\'s fun!
ooh ooh! In the sorting, Hermione uses her stealth and secret agenty skills type things to fling a spoon of mashed potatoes at Snape!!! lol...
that would be fun, and Snape thinks it\'s Dumbledore and throws a tomatoe at him but it hits McGonagall... and all hell breaks loose! *sigh* FUN!
ciao,
your reviewing and woohooing Fish friend!
lmao... i could so imagine that! i like WOOHOOing... it\'s fun!
ooh ooh! In the sorting, Hermione uses her stealth and secret agenty skills type things to fling a spoon of mashed potatoes at Snape!!! lol...
that would be fun, and Snape thinks it\'s Dumbledore and throws a tomatoe at him but it hits McGonagall... and all hell breaks loose! *sigh* FUN!
ciao,
your reviewing and woohooing Fish friend!