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Just Submit 2	By : grugster Category: Harry Potter > Threesomes/Moresomes Views: 190272 -:- Recommendations : 5 -:- Currently Reading : 18
Disclaimer: Disclaimer: I do not own Harry Potter and make no money from writing this story. All recognizable characters belong to J.K. Rowling, and I am not earning anything by writing this story.

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I’m not a native speaker of English.

Thanks a lot to my betas, remarkable, for correcting this chapter!

Dear readers, here come the sequel to “Just Submit”. Now in the Threesome/Moresome category. Fenrir/Hermione are still the main pairing but there will be many other paring and threesomes. For example SS/DM, HG/DM, DM/NL, HG/OC, NL/OC..... Also many OC's will appear. If you haven't read “Just Submit”, you need to do it before you start this sequel. Otherwise I fear it won't make any sense to you. Warnings: Anal,Angst,AU/AR,Beast,Bond,Death,D/s,DP,Exhib,F/M/M,H/C,HJ,Humil,Language,M/F,M/M,Moresome,OC,Oral,PWP,Rim,Rom,SoloM,Spank,Toys,Voy,WD,WIP,WS... I will give a warning in front of every chapter!

Characters: Hermione, Severus, Draco, Neville Sexual interactions:Severus/Hermione, Draco/Neville

Warnings: het, slash, deep penetration

Chapter 1 – Deep Penetration

Hermione awoke to smacking sounds. When her eyes adjusted to the light, she saw Draco, naked over Neville, rocking their cocks together but that wasn't the cause of the sound. The boys were kissing. Distracted as they were, they didn't realize Hermione was awake yet. She was transfixed by the show in front of her. Draco was so damn attractive! The way he was hovering over Neville, and the way he kissed him, was showing the sort of dominance that made Hermione feel very attracted to Draco.

“Want to join in, pup?” Draco asked when he had stopped kissing Neville.

Hermione wanted to smack the grin off Draco's face.

“What? I can smell your arousal.”

Hermione glared at the blond boy and tried to stand up.

“Hey! Stop that, Hermione. I was just joking. You can watch if you like.”

“I would prefer not to, Malfoy.”

Neville tried to cover himself but Draco was having none of it.

Draco shrugged his shoulders. “If Severus sees you out of bed, he will be mad at you. Suit yourself. I just thought you had already learned your lesson about disobeying the dominants.”

“I'm not disobeying him. He hasn't told me to stay in bed.”

“First, if you ever wake up in a bed where you are unaware of how you came to be there, you are supposed to stay there and wait for instructions. Second, since Severus knew that you don't know that rule, he asked us to stay and tell you about it.”

“And did he tell the two of you to fuck while I was lying beside you as well?”

Draco shrugged his shoulders again. “No, but he also didn't forbid it.” He quickly glanced at Neville. “See what you did? Poor Neville’s gone all soft again. I finally had my hopes up that he would let me fuck him.” He pushed his bottom lip out and pouted in Neville’s direction.

“Draco, please,” Neville said, embarrassed.

Draco rolled his eyes and stood up. Buck naked as he was, he pulled the door open and stepped out of the room.

While Hermione stared at the door in shock, Neville quickly dressed himself in his shorts, shyly looked at Hermione. When she finally looked at him, he said, “Sorry.”

Hermione smiled. “You know what? It was really hot to see you two.” She clapped her hand over her mouth in dismay.

Neville grinned. “You wouldn't believe what I have said lately to Severus and Draco. Really embarrassing.”

That confession made Hermione relax a bit. “Are you okay with all of this, Neville?”

“With Severus and Draco? Yes. I love it here, but... but I’m still scared that I will need to have sex with others and in front of others as well. Severus said I need to do it before my first changing. It's only nine days until then. I fear he will force me, very soon, to go out and do things with others. Until now I was allowed to mostly stay here or be outside with Severus or Neil.”

Neil? That name said something to Hermione but she couldn't remember what it was. “I know. I'm scared about this all as well but I love my pack. Fenrir and Yorik are great. Amaris is like a big sister and Morgan is cute.”

Neville smiled. “It’s worth it to try the scary stuff, isn't it?” He looked unsure and then gulped.

Hermione shrugged her shoulders. “I don't know. It's really scary.”

Neville nodded but they were unable to speak any more before the door was opened and Severus stepped in. He glanced over at Neville and then stared at Hermione, his arms crossed over his chest. Eventually, Hermione got the clue and crawled back into the bed. Severus stepped closer and Hermione could see Draco sneak into the room behind Severus, still butt naked.

Draco went over to Neville and tried to push his shorts down. Neville was holding his waistband and looked first at Draco, puzzled, and then at Severus.

“Let Draco undress you, Neville. That's an order!”

Both Hermione and Neville looked at Severus with stunned expressions.

“Don’t make me repeat myself, Neville,” Severus admonished while he pulled his shirt over his head and then unbuckled his jeans. Draco took advantage of Neville’s hesitation and pulled harshly at Neville's waistband so it slipped from the other boy’s fingers. Severus was naked now and crawled over to a wide-eyed Hermione.

“I... I don't think that's a good idea prof... head beta.” Hermione tried to crawl away from Severus, but he gripped her ankle and pulled her over to him.

“I gave you some energy shots to get your system back to normal, so there isn't anything preventing us from furthering your and Neville’s survival training. Stop struggling, dammit!” He pressed her back against his chest while he adjusted his member to be lined up against her back, simultaneously leaning against the headboard. “Neville, we already spoke about what will be necessary to survive. A little private practice with only people you know will be good for you. I want you to let Draco fuck you.”

Neville's mouth dropped open. “Here? In front of you and... and...”

“Hermione. It's Hermione, stupid,” Draco chuckled, pushing Neville onto the bed so that Severus and Hermione would have a good view. He in return would now have a good view of Hermione's pussy from under her short nightgown.

When Hermione realized where Draco was looking, she pressed her legs together.

“Tsk, tsk, tsk, pup. Let them see you!” Severus commanded while he spread her legs, giving her thigh a light slap.

Hermione was embarrassed. Severus was holding her legs spread wide for Draco and Neville to see her private parts. Severus breathed against her ear. “You want to pleasure me, don't you, pup?”

Hermione whimpered. Yes, she wanted to pleasure him, but not like this.

“Then keep those legs open for me.”

Severus’ voice was soothing and sexy at the same time and Hermione felt herself relax. Severus would take care of her. He would not hurt her, neither physically or emotionally. Only the shame of the position made her cheeks turn crimson. She looked worriedly at the door. At any moment someone could come in.

“Nobody will come in. There is a locking charm on it,” Severus explained while he slowly let his hand travel over the inside of her thighs. “Relax, pup. You find Draco attractive, and he is so horny over you. There is no problem in showing your bodies to one another. Neville needs to go one step further with his training and you want to help him, right? He needs an audience for it and he trusts you. You want to help him, don't you?”

Hermione whimpered because Severus’ finger had found her center and was teasing her. She nodded affirmatively to answer Severus' question, and she saw Neville relax, Draco grinning happily. As if that had been his trigger, Draco started to tease Neville back to full hardness. He trailed kisses all over Neville's body, finally taking his penis into his mouth.

Neville's moans, Draco's sucking noises and Severus’ fingers on and in her made Hermione go crazy. She wiggled to get the two fingers Severus was fucking her with deeper into her pussy. The amount of liquid she was producing couldn't be right. She felt it running out of her, and it was so embarrassing, she very quickly felt her pleasure ebb to nothing.

“Stop thinking, pup. You are perfect. This is normal; it’s your natural lube. You will produce even more as we go. The excessive amount of lubrication ensures you will never go dry during sex. The wetter you are, the more pleasure you get, so stop being embarrassed about it. Even now, your body is producing a painkilling lube because your hymen was ruptured only a few hours ago, so relax and enjoy.”

Hermione nodded and bit her lower lip to stifle her scream when Severus pushed deeper and stayed there, now only moving his fingers over her clit.

Neville, meanwhile, was moaning and wriggling under Draco, but the blond boy had no mercy. When Neville screamed that he was coming, Draco bit him at the inside of his left thigh. Neville whimpered, but the whimpers were soon nursed by more licking at his shaft and a finger pushing into his back passage. Neville winced. He was now used to the dry entry into his puckered backside. Severus had practiced it several times over the last five days, but still, it felt uncomfortable until his body started to produce his own lube. Severus said that Neville needed to learn to lube up quickly because only a few dominants would take the time to lube their sub partner because the self- produced lube starts to kick in after a few thrusts with a finger. Still, Neville preferred it when Severus and Draco took the time and prodded him a few times before they stuck their fingers into him. The prodding made his body produce the lube quicker. Severus said they had no time for those kindnesses now but he promised to do it the gentle way as soon as he had survived his first changing and training him didn't mean risking his life any longer.

Neville fought against the urge to push Draco's finger out but couldn't stop himself when Draco pushed in too deep for his comfort while he still wasn't wet enough.

Draco spanked him. “Don't fight me!” He obviously loved to play the dominant.

Before Hermione could feel sorry for Neville, Severus commanded her to sit on her legs. It was awkward. She was still sitting low over his knees but that problem was solved when Severus pulled her closer to him and pushed her upper body a bit forward.

Draco made a disappointed sound because now he couldn't see Hermione's pussy with Severus' fingers in her anymore.

“Shut up and enjoy what I allow you to have, Neville.” Severus’ voice was tense. Hermione could

smell that he was very aroused as well. She was exposed to him now and couldn't move because he had trapped her with a hand on her back. “No, that won't do.” Before Hermione could react he pulled at her ankles and she lost her balance. She fell face first onto his outstretched legs and Severus pulled her by her legs closer to him. Her pussy could only be inches away from Severus' member but she couldn't feel it. “I want you to look at Draco and Neville, Hermione. Obey me!” He spanked her arse cheek lightly.

A jolt of pleasure went through her and Draco moaned at the sound of Severus' hand making contact with Hermione's arse.

Severus crossed her legs behind his back and told her to keep them there or she would be punished.

Again, Hermione found herself in a totally helpless position with Severus’ hand on her lower back. He pressed her down while his other hand moved over her lower lips to thrust two fingers inside of her. The angle made her let out a frustrated groan. She wanted his fingers deep inside her but they couldn't go as deeply as she wished them to. She closed her eyes and tried to wiggle. A smack on her bum made her squeal.

“Don't disobey me!”

Draco chuckled and pushed a third finger into Neville's now well-lubed channel. The other boy was wriggling and moaning and begging the blond to take him. Draco knew Neville had forgotten about everything around him. Draco wanted to satisfy Severus, and he knew that it was important that Neville remembered that they weren't alone. He turned Neville around and made him face Hermione. She was struggling to obey Severus as well.

Neville's and Hermione's eyes were locked, when Hermione felt Severus position his penis at her entrance, pulling her backwards with a sharp jerk. His cock was enormous, and even in that position she had the feeling that he would push so far inside of her that he would hit the deep end of her pussy. Calming circles were drawn on her lower back, and Severus didn't move inside her just yet. She felt her lube drip out of her, her walls clamping down over the end of Severus’ cock. “Remember my order, pup.”

Neville had lost control of himself as well when Draco had entered him in one harsh thrust. Normally, Draco was the sweet one, but today he was acting on Severus’ orders and was behaving like a dominant. Neville liked it, but he still wished that it was just Draco fucking him. He couldn't concentrate on pleasuring Severus with the additional audience. He knew that having an audience was the lesson and that he was failing it. Neville was sure Severus would have noticed his thoughts and discomfort if he had been the one to fuck him, but Draco was enjoying himself and wanted to perform well for Severus. After a short time he started to fuck Neville.

“Neville, I can hear your thoughts. Stop thinking about failing and do what I told you to do. Look at Hermione while Draco fucks you. If Draco does something that you don't feel comfortable with, tell him. That's another lesson you still have to learn.”

Hermione bit her arm out of frustration. She felt as if she were in a classroom. Severus behaved as if he were standing in front of a class and wasn't poised just inside the entrance to her pussy. More pressure was applied on her back and before Hermione could do anything, Severus leaned forward and deepened his angle by doing so. Slowly, his cock slipped deeper and Hermione felt pure pleasure. She wanted him even more deeply inside of her.

“Patience, little pup. You need to lube up more for it.”

Hermione breathed hard and tried to satisfy Severus by fixing her eyes on Neville's pleasure- stricken face. Neville had told Draco that he had been too forceful, and the blond boy was now trying to fuck him more gently.

Hermione was lost in Neville's eyes when Severus pulled out completely and pushed in again. She moaned and couldn't obey him any longer. She hid her face in the bed sheets. “Merlin, please!”

“Face up, Hermione, or I won't go on!” Severus barked in warning. The moment she lifted her head Severus started to plunge into her. Hermione made high pitched screams of pleasure. Severus’ cock felt wonderful in her, so much that she wished he would fuck her deeper and harder and not ever stop. Neville’s face turned into a grimace and Hermione could see that he was trying to stay silent.

“Let it go, Neville. Let Hermione hear your screams of pleasure.” Severus’ voice was so sexy. Hermione almost came with Neville and Draco just by hearing Severus’ voice.

When Neville and Draco collapsed, Hermione hoped she was allowed to stop watching them. She pressed her head into the bed to muffle her own screams.

“Oh no, pup. I want to hear you as well.” Severus pulled out and Hermione almost started to cry because she thought he would punish her for it. To her relief, he only turned her around, forced her legs to her shoulders and studied her entrance. Even this deep in her passion, Hermione felt embarrassed by the position. She could not move at all.

“Stop thinking,” Severus instructed again while he tried to position his member at her slick entrance without his hands. After two attempts he slipped in. Hermione had the feeling her channel was squeezed more tightly in this position, because Severus’ cock caused more friction when he fucked her this time around. His cock was far from Fenrir's thickness but much longer than her alpha. Still, in that position it felt thick, and Hermione was glad Severus pushed in slowly.

“Other dominants won't be able to read your mind, pup. That would have been the moment where you needed to tell your partner to slow down. Do you understand?”

Hermione whimpered, but nodded. She wanted Severus to stop fucking lecturing her and just fuck her!

“Hermione Granger not wanting to learn something? How odd.” Severus chuckled and pushed deeper. He knew he was slowly coming close to the end now. He had experienced that a lot. He was really unusually well-endowed, and it had been painful for many a woman. Some women loved deep penetration, and he wanted to find out if Hermione was one who did. She had urged him to go deeper the entire time, but Severus knew she had no clue what she was asking him to do. He watched Hermione's face intensely while he went more deeply inch-by-inch.

Hermione could feel the pressure grow more and more intense. Her body wanted Severus to go deeper, but there was that small part of her mind that reminded her that there was a limit to what her pussy could take, and she was afraid of what would happen if Severus met that limit.

Severus could see Hermione's human mind taking over and he paused. “Do you want me to go deeper?”

Hermione bit her lips and closed her eyes. Her body was burning and her inner walls already answered for her with sucking motions. She was torn between the fear that was so very big and the pleasure that wonderful cock was causing because it was so amazing. “I don't know,” she said miserably.

“How about I go deeper like your body wants me to, and the moment you tell me the pleasure is going away because discomfort or pain is taking over, I pull out?”

She wanted to know what it felt like. She wanted to feel him buried to the hilt inside of her, so she nodded.

There were only two more inches before Severus met resistance.

Hermione stiffened because the feeling was too confusing. She wanted to move away, but also didn’t want to tell Severus to pull out. When Severus drew circles with his hips to see her reaction, she felt tight waves of pleasure coil up in her once again. She was surprised because she hadn't expected to feel that she might be coming so soon, caused simply by slow penetration and his small movements. She tried to push Severus away by his shoulders to stop the waves that were joining, gathering into one giant tidal wave about to put her over the edge. Severus knew why she was wiggling; not out of pain or discomfort but out of embarrassment because she enjoyed it that much. He didn't let go of her, and he drew more circles with his hips until Hermione shuddered underneath him. She bucked and screamed when her orgasm crashed over her, never seeming to end.

Just seeing her orgasm that hard and long made Severus blow burst after burst of come inside of her, that sweet pussy milking his cock so deliciously he thought his head would explode.

Soon they all were lying in a big pile of limbs. Neville's hand was in Hermione's. Severus’ hand was between Hermione's legs, feeling his come flow out of her. Draco was spooning Neville from behind. After a long time had passed they could all hear the panting of one another until Severus exclaimed, “My subs, you are all so fucking perfect!” That comment made happy smiles appear on each sub as they fell into a sated, exhausted sleep of tangled limbs, sweaty bodies and familiar faces.

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