Bad Doggy rewrite | By : Lost Miles Category: Harry Potter > Het - Male/Female Views: 89175 -:- Recommendations : 3 -:- Currently Reading : 10 |
Disclaimer: I do not own Harry Potter nor the characters thereof. |
Disclaimer: I don’t own Harry Potter or any characters therein. I don’t make money off of writing this, which is lucky because I wouldn’t make much with my writing skills even if I were trying to.
This is set during the Order of the Pheonix book.
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This is a rewrite of a story I read on FF dot net that was erased along with the entire account it was on, either by the author or the moderators, I don’t know. I’m writing this from memory and mixing a few things up on it to make it more…I won’t say interesting, but more complete, although if someone wants to continue this into a full story, by all means, go ahead. I don’t own the original idea for this either. It belongs to Demon-girl13.
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Late in the Evening, Christmas Holidays, Fifth Year…
A slightly depressed girl with shoulder length black hair in a pageboy haircut sat a bed in a small room with two other beds, her hands clasped together. She wore a pair of glasses with one arm taped together over her emerald green eyes as she swung her bare feet above the floor. A white short-sleeve blouse, which was a bit tight on her and had the top button undone to show a bit of her small cleavage with a hint of white lace bra, and black knee length pleated skirt completed her ensemble of visible clothing. She folded her arms over her perky 15 year old B-cup breasts as she lay back on the bed, her bangs sliding away from her forehead to show an irritated looking, lightning bolt shaped scar. The girl was Lillian Ivy Potter, who insisted everyone call her Ivy.
After laying there for several more minutes, she heard a thump from a bedroom upstairs from her. She smiled a bit as she realized it meant her Godfather, Sirius Black, was in his room as well. Deciding a bit of visiting was in order to cheer up a bit for her and for him, she stood up from the bed and slipped a pair of sandals on her feet before leaving the room quietly to head upstairs.
She knocked quietly on his door as she reached the room. A few seconds later, a scruffy looking older man with brown, shaggy hair, a drooping mustache, goatee, and gray eyes answered the door. His mien brightening as he realized who was at the door and a smile graced his face as he stepped back and said, “Ivy! Come in. Is everything okay?”
She shrugged slightly as she entered his room, saying, “I guess. I’m just lonely with all the Weasley’s at Saint Mungo’s with their Mr. Weasley. It’s only you and me here and I wanted to hang out with you until they get back.” She had moved to sit on his bed, being the only place to sit in the room other than the floor. Her eyes traveled the dusty room to see the muggle posters of female models on the red and gold walls. She blushed a bit as she noticed a copy of a magazine with a folded out page from the center, showing a naked woman on it.
Sirius noticed the blush and followed her eyes to see the magazine, flushing in embarrassment as well as he rushed over to it and shoved it quickly into his top dresser drawer before turning to face her. “I…ah…have no idea where that came from,” he mumbled.
Ivy giggled at his antics and shakes her head, still blushing as she says, “It’s okay. It’s not my business.”
He smiled at her as he moved to sit on the bed next to her and asked, “So what do you want to talk about?”
Her head tilted a bit to the side as she looked over at him and asked, “Can you tell me some stories about Mom and Dad from school?”
A roguish smile crossed his face and he responded, “Of course. Even the ones they would kill me for telling.” He gave her a smile full of teeth and waggled his eyebrows at her.
She giggled and lay back on the bed, listening as he told story after story of her parents, neither noticing as the clock slowly clicked away until it showed four in the morning.
Her hand barely reached her mouth to stifle a yawn as Sirius soon copied her, their eyes half closed from how tired they both were.
“Is it…*Yawn*…okay if I sleep here, Sirius,” she asked as she curled up a bit on the bed.
He frowned a bit and shook his head no before stopping and shrugging saying, “I guess as long as change into Padfoot. Nothing wrong with a girl cuddling her dog as she sleeps.” He smiled wryly as he said that, quickly changing into a large black grim-like dog, easily equaling and outdoing her in mass and weight before hopping onto the bed with her.
The teenage girl sat up as he changed and jumped onto the bed, quickly moving next to him to pet his head. As she moved closer to him, he noticed something when he finally sniffed at her instinctively. Tilting his head curiously, he sniffed again, smelling something he hadn’t from her before, something that tickled his instincts and, unnoticed to him, caused the tip of his red dog cock to extend from the sheath under him, almost eye level with the girl sitting on the bed next to him.
She didn’t notice at first, too busy giggling and treating him like a normal dog for a bit as she petted him. As he shifted in place a bit, she glanced at his rear legs and then blushed as she realized his cock was showing. Seeing it, even as embarrassing as it was, still caused her to be slightly aroused, being the first real cock she had seen ever in person.
She tried to ignore it, instead moving back to petting him, not knowing that her scent had changed a bit, due to her arousal and was causing Sirius to slowly lose control of his instincts as he smelled her arousal as well as her fertility, due to her ovulating at the time as well. His cock slowly extended from the sheath the more his instincts took over, while her eyes kept glancing at it, her own arousal increasing as she saw the thick, red cock slide out into view.
Her tongue slid out of her mouth a bit to lick her suddenly dry lips as her face flushed more with arousal and less with embarrassment. She shifted in place a bit as a wet spot formed in her panties under her skirt. She didn’t notice as Padfoot’s head lowered down to sniff at her skirt, her eyes still staring at the, to her, strange looking cock.
Not knowing that Sirius had almost completely lost himself to his instincts at this point, she asked, “M…may I…see it…closer?” Her face flushed bright red as she asked while looking at his head. His head tilted and lowered a bit, which she took as a nod, not knowing it was surprise and shock from Sirius. Her hand moved along his body slowly after seeing that, rubbing under his chest and then along his belly towards the red penis.
Sirius started to move away from her just as she opened her hand and grasped the thick cock, barely able to reach her hand around it due to its size. At the first touch, Sirius lost control completely to his instincts and started to pant in pleasure. His hips thrust forward a bit, sliding it between her hands and causing her to gasp at the feeling of it.
Blushing harder now, she moved a bit closer to it, her mouth slightly open as she breathed quickly, due to her own arousal, as she slowly stroked along the length of the shaft. It felt slick, but solid, like it had a bone in it as she studied the first cock she had ever seen up close. Her exhales each time she breathed blew across the tip of the pointed cock as her other hand moved up to touch and stroke it as well.
Padfoot started to thrust his hips into her hands, instinct telling him to fuck something right now as he smelled a fertile bitch that wanted it. He lowered his head to her skirt again, sniffing at her as he smelled her juices.
Noticing him sniffing at her skirt and thinking something else, she blushed and said, “I…I guess it’s okay…I did…see yours.” She blushed harder as she reached down and unzipped her skirt, standing up a bit to slip it down her legs and letting him see a pair of white panties with a wet spot against her slit before she slid those down as well, showing her wispy black hair above her glistening wet slit. Before his nose could move closer, she sat back down on the bed and unbuttoned her blouse, slipping it off as well before removing her bra, leaving her perky and pale B-cup breasts showing, pale pink aureoles topped by eraser sized pink nipples that were rock hard.
Padfoot’s tongue quickly lapped her nearest breast as she dropped her bra to the side, causing her to gasp and then moan loudly at the feeling. “Oh Merlin, Sirius,” she mumbled as she reached up to grasp his cock again, stroking it a bit faster. Another lick caused her to clench her hands a bit harder and him to whimper in pain from the tight grip. She let go and looked at him in worry as she asked, “Are you okay? I didn’t mean to hurt you.” As soon as she let go and spoke, Padfoot leaned his head down to her lap and licked again, his tongue sliding along one thigh and then across her downy black curls.
She watched him, eyes wide in shock as he licked near her folds, already wondering what his tongue would feel like on them instead of her fingers. The thought caused her arousal to rise higher, which caused Padfoot to move his cold nose closer to her mound and lick between her thighs this time, the tip of his tongue hitting her clit. She collapsed backwards as his rough tongue tapped that bundle of nerves and almost made her cum from it.
Her collapse had caused her legs to spread a bit, leaving more room for the large black dog to move towards her womanhood and lick again, this time rubbing the long rough tongue along her entire slit and her clit, tasting her arousal now as he licked her repeatedly. She moved her hand to her mouth and screamed in pleasure into it as she came hard from the first tongue to ever lick her folds, juices squirting out a bit as she lifted her hips off the bed towards his muzzle.
The massive dog moved his nose closer to her folds as she lifted her hips and licked faster, his tongue spreading her lips and dipping into her tight, virgin hole each time and causing her orgasm to hit again, her screams of pleasure increasing even though muffled by her hands and her legs sliding further apart. As he kept licking, a third orgasm hit her causing her to snap her legs closed and roll over, her legs pulled under her from the intense pleasure and her ass in the air now, showing her pale perky ass and now gushing slit as she was still cumming from the licking.
Padfoot moved over her as he recognized the position as his bitch being ready for mounting, his fur on his stomach rubbing her ass cheeks as he stood over her now while she shook under him from the pleasure, still not realizing what was going on around her yet.
She started to realize something was going on when she felt something thick, hot, and hard rub along between her ass cheeks, but was still shivering from the orgasm too much to do anything about it. As it pulled back, she felt the pointed tip of something slide down across her tight rear hole, down a bit further to touch her dripping wet vulva, and then move forward, forcing her lips apart almost missing her tight virgin hole, only to slip into it from her juices lubricating her. The thick cock forced deep into her suddenly, not even stopping for her hymen as it ripped it open and stretched her painfully around the dog cock, the tip of it hitting her cervix hard before it stopped moving forward and leaving her gasping in pain, with tears in her eyes from the sudden intrusion of her womanhood.
Before she could even adjust to the pain, the thick member was suddenly pulled back until it was halfway in before thrusting into her again, just as hard. Not even a second later it was done again, then again, and again, again, again, as the massive black form of Padfoot fucked her hard, neither noticing nor caring about the bit of blood from her hymen showing on his cock as he fucked his bitch.
At first, she was shocked, in pain, and horrified as Sirius fucked her like that, taking her virginity as a dog. As Padfoot kept fucking her, the pain slowly left, turning into pleasure from the sensation of a cock sliding in and out of her tight hole. Her eyes closed, tears still in them, as she whimpered underneath the large dog as most of her muscles were still spongy and shaking from the previous multi-orgasms from his tongue. She couldn’t even move her head and shoulders off the bed as she was shaking too badly.
As the pain turned to pleasure, though, her hands started to move on their own, one moving to her breasts and still rock hard nipples that were being rubbed into the bed covers by the thrusts from the dog, and the other moved to her clit, sliding through her pubes to the sensitive button of nerves. As both hands reached their targets, she decided to enjoy this as best she could and pinched one nipple hard while her other hand started to gently rub her clit, causing her arousal to quickly rise to a fourth orgasm, causing her to clench around the dog cock as he kept pounding her fifteen year old pussy hard.
Unnoticed to her, a thick portion of Padfoot’s cock started to swell just outside her pussy, soon looking like two grapes on either side of his cock as he rammed into her harder. Padfoot instinctively started to fuck her harder, trying to force more of his cock into her to get the knot into her before it swelled fully. She kept moaning now, her hips pushing back to meet the thrusts into her as she kept rubbing her clit and pinching her nipples while enjoying the first sex she had ever had.
When the tip of the pointed cock finally hit the opening of her cervix, the motions of them both forced it open wider around the pointed tip, allowing the knot to slip into her tight pussy and stretching it far wider than before around it as the tip and two inches of the shaft entered her fertile womb. Her entire body clenched from the pain as her cervix was forced open around the thick cock, making her fingers on her nipples pinch harder than before and the two fingers playing with her clit to pinch it instead, causing her to orgasm on top of the pain and clench on the knotted cock harder before passing out from the pleasure and pain.
Padfoot barely slowed his thrusting, only changing the strokes as his knot swelled up inside her quickly to the size of two golf balls, holding his thick cock deep inside her as he started to cum, spraying his hot, virile seed into her unprotected womb. As he sprayed into her, he finally stopped thrusting and panted over her. He quickly poured almost a cup of his semen into his bitch’s fertile womb. As he stopped cumming, he moved to dismount her, pulling at her folds with the knotted cock still stuck inside her. He moved ass to ass with her and waited a while, her still passed out form with her ass pressed tight against his from the cock inside her as his tail wagged, brushing her ass with the fur.
After almost ten minutes, the knot had shrank enough to slip out of her, still forcing her lips to stretch further than when it slipped in and leaving her gaping for a bit as cum leaked from her womb and down her thighs to the bed before she fell over onto her side, still unconscious from the orgasms.
Padfoot, still in control, moved next to her and laid down after licking his cock clean as it moved back into the sheath before sleeping next to his bitch.
As both fell asleep on Sirius’ bed, a dirty tapestry downstairs in a dark room slowly changed. The tapestry, showing the Black Family Tree, updated next to a burned off name, reading Lillian Ivy Black nee Potter, with a line connecting the burned off name and the new name, before another line moved down from the middle of it, stopping to show a blank spot for a new name. A name for the conceived child of the two.
Fin~
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