Smell of Submission | By : dweek Category: Harry Potter > Threesomes/Moresomes Views: 308949 -:- Recommendations : 10 -:- Currently Reading : 29 |
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CHAPTER UPDATE- After reading some of the reviews I decided to rewrite parts of this chapter. A few people had valid points about a few actions and I realized that Harry was going about things in a way that was a bit confusing. I hope the updates make it more clear what his goals are. As this update is in reaction to some of the reviews I figured I would respond to them here as well.
Hilarity88- After I gave it some thought I decided there was one of the names I didn't like, it felt awkward and a bit forced to me so I have changed it in the rewrite of this chapter. As for Harry's voice control while receiving pleasure, he is working on that, but he is still a 16 year old boy and it may take some time. As for your plea, I sorry but can't promise you anything there. My muse is a bit of a flake and jumps around a bit on what she wants to inspire me to write. I find I have a much harder time writing if I don't just listen to her. That being said I will try and keep updating this story on a regular basis. I am a bit worried that you will not be pleased with future chapters as I plan to have Harry and Snape form a (Non sexual) relationship in the near future. Don't hurt me but this Harry is going to forgive Snape and they ARE going to become
hugplx- I must admit that your review is the one that most made me rethink this chapter a little. That being said I did not agree with your assessment 100% and that is reflected in my rewrite.
anon- Hope you still like the rewrite.
red demon- I am going to work on not ignoring any of his girls for too long. Why have them if he isn’t planning on playing with them? Hermione will always get more airtime than the rest, but that is to be expected.
chm01- Well if I wasn’t writing her as stubborn I don’t think I would be doing the character justice. *smirk* But Harry hopes for her sake it won’t take too much longer.
Aranel- You have a deal, but if the spreadsheet I DIDN’T make is correct you will not be the only cat pet Harry has… Well He may not keep the other so you should be good. Yes he has five at the moment, he is still doing his homework for now. Luckily he can give Hermione attention and do his homework at the same time, or he would be lost! Draco is showing up again in next chapter so I hope you enjoy his time with Ginny! Maybe Hermione does want more spanks? Can you blame her?
Dude- That is what my husband thought you meant. I may use both ideas, one sooner than the other, as I agree it would be hard for him to change a girl into a ship just yet LOL. I will take Tonks under advisement, I have not decided if she is dominant or submissive…
imnc- Thank you so much for the note. I will try and keep an eye on that from now on.
jhh- Hi back! Glad you are enjoying the story, in this chapter you will find out how all the girls interact with Cho… Well besides Hermione
Pairings: Cho/Harry, Ginny/Cho
Warning: Bi, CR, D/s, Exhib, F/F, Fingering, Humil, MC, Minor2, Oral, Voy
The night after his newest slut signed her contract Harry sent notes to all his girls to meet him in the empty classroom that he had claimed for his own. He left Hermione studying in the library and told her he needed to think about quidditch tryouts that were coming up soon.
He arrived in the classroom before the rest of the girls so he could set up things the way he wanted. He was gathering them for several reasons. First Cock Toy needed to meet the rest of his girls and understand her place in the hierarchy among those who belonged to him.
The more important reason for meeting was that he wanted his girls to become comfortable with each other. He felt it would only promote their happiness and more importantly his own if they were at least friendly to one another.
Harry moved all the chairs but the one he had enlarged to be his throne to the sides of the class again. He sat in the middle and waited for his girls to arrive.
First to enter was of course Daphne, she smiled as she noticed this and moved in front of him to kneel and lower her head. “Evening Master.” She said calmly. She was still wearing the school uniform, but had left the over robe in her room.
“Evening Slave.” he said in a cold tone that made her flinch. “Undress, fold your clothes and put them to the side of the room.” he ordered her and smirked as she stood and started to follow his orders without a moment’s hesitation.
As she was undressing Ginny entered the room and watched the other girl for a moment before walking up to Harry and kneeling as Daphne had done before her. “Master.” She said and waited for his orders.
“Follow the Slave’s lead.” he told her simply. Ginny still blushed a little before doing as Daphne was. They were both undressed and kneeling a meter from him when the next girl entered.
Cho looked at the girls kneeling at Harry’s feet and blushed red. She was unsure what to do so she lingered at the door.
“Cock Toy, you should undress then fold your clothes, put them with the others, then come and kneel here.” he told her then motioned to the place next to Ginny. Tracy entered in time to hear most of his instructions to Cho so she did the same.
Harry smiled at how good Tracy was being, when she had put her clothes with the others and turned to move back to the group Harry cleared his throat. “Pets should not be standing on two legs” he pointed out then turned his attention to Cho.
He waited to speak for Tracy to crawl over to the spot next to Daphne and kneel as the rest of the girls were.
“Everyone, this is Cock Toy.” He motioned to Cho, who whimpered in embarrassment from her new name and the ease at which he said it. “She is our newest slut. That being said I have decided to call my other whore Fuck Toy.” He told the girl and smiled as Ginny also blushed. “Do you like your new name Fuck Toy?” he asked the redhead directly.
“Master…” Ginny started with a whimper “Please Master don’t make me answer to that name?” She asked softly.
“But that is what you are.” He told her and was more than amused as the girl fidgeted where she knelt. “Come here.” he told her and pointed to the place just in front of him so he could give her his full attention. Once she was closer he reached down and tangled his fingers in her hair so he could pull her head back roughly. “Why don’t you wish to answer to your name my sweet little whore?” he asked softly.
Ginny swallowed hard and took in a slow breath before she answered. “Its humiliating Master.” She said softly.
“But how does it make you feel?” He asked as he looked directly into her eyes.
Ginny blushed and whimpered. “It… This… It turns me on Master.” She admitted as she knew she couldn’t lie to him.
“Than I don’t see a problem, do you?” he asked as he let go of her hair. “Back to your place Fuck Toy.”
Once Ginny was back to her original position he addressed the room. “I have decided that each of my different types of girls will kneel in a different way. It will show the world when we can finally be in public what they are easily” he said and smiled as all his girls shifted at the thought of doing this in public.
“Sluts should kneel with their legs spread as widely as they can, their hands behind their backs, chins up, eyes down, and chests out.” He said and waited for both his sluts to move into the position he wanted. Ginny’s knees were about 60 centimeters apart, where Cho’s were no more that 30. “Cock Toy if that is as wide as you can part your knees we will have to find a way to help you become more limber.” he said and suddenly Cho spread her legs almost as wide as Ginny had them.
Once both of his sluts were in a position that pleased him he turned to Daphne. “Slave, would you like a new name now, or wait till more slaves join your ranks?’ Harry asked with a smile.
“Whatever pleases Master most.” She said without looking up at him.
“I think it would please me to call you Whip.” He said with a smirk. She looked at him a little confused but did not comment on her new name. “All my slaves will be named for the tools they are” he said and smiled more as she pouted for a moment then hid her embarrassment at being called a tool.
“Yes Master, it is a lovely name.” She told him softly.
“Now Whip, I want my slaves to kneel with their knees together, back straight, hands on thighs, palms up, chin up, eyes down.” He told her and waited for her to readjust herself into the position he described. “Yes I like that.” Harry commented before turning his attention to Tracey.
“Now for my pretty little Vixen.” He said in a more gentle tone than he had used with the others. “Are you going to be a good pet today, or will I have to find you some rope?” He asked playfully as he remembered the bite marks he had had to heal after their last game.
“I’ll be good Master.” She said with a bit of a pout.
Harry chuckled and shook his head. “Pets should spread their legs shoulder length, lean forward and put your hands on the floor between your knees, back arched, head up, eyes down.” He told the last of his girls and waited for her to get into position. “Is everyone comfortable?’ he asked as all four of them pouted at him. “Good.”
He sat back and watched the girls in front of him. After a while of just enjoying the view of how they each displayed themselves purely for his pleasure, he found that he was uncomfortably hard. He turned to Cho and smirked as he motioned for her to move forward.
“I want to see how good you are with your mouth my little Cock Toy” he told her and then motioned for her to undo his pants. Cho whimpered and looked back at the other girls. “Sluts will do anything I wish, in front of anyone I wish. You should all get comfortable with performing in front of each other” He said as he looked to the rest of the girls as well.
Cho timidly moved forward and started to undo his pants so she could free him. Her skin was turning redder and redder as her work progressed. “Is my little Cock Toy whore embarrassed that she won’t be as skilled as some of my other girls?” Harry asked as he just sat back and relaxed. “Tell me why you are blushing so badly Cock Toy.”
“Master, they are going to think…” She started but Harry quickly cut her off.
“They are going to think you are a filthy Cock Toy whore who likes to give her Master head in front of his other girls?” He asked and smirked as she turned bright red. “That is because you are a filthy Cock Toy whore.” Cho whimpered and shook her head. “Do you know the punishment for lying Cock Toy?” he asked and she looked at the ground again.
“Five spanks Master.” She said as she remembered from her punishment before.
“So if I reach between your legs right now I will not find my Cock Toy is turned on by being called a filthy Cock Toy whore?” He asked as she leaned forward and rested his hand on her shoulder. She whimpered and looked to the floor. “Tell me the truth Cock Toy.”
“I am… turned on Master.” She said and quickly shot a look back to the other girls who were all smirking to themselves.
“What does that mean Cock Toy?” Harry asked with his own smirk.
“That I am a filthy Cock Toy whore?” She asked and shifted as she said the words.
“A filthy Cock Toy whore who…?” he waited for her to finish what he started.
“A filthy Cock Toy whore who likes to suck her Master’s cock in front of his other girls.” She repeated what he had said in the first place.
“Better.” he said and sat back again. “Now my little Cock Toy lets see how good of a cock sucker you are.”
Cho finished undoing his pants and then moved them down. He lifted his butt to help her move them and his boxers down over his hips so she could free his member. Once he was free she wrapped a small hand around the base and timidly lapped at the end of him.
Harry groaned and his eyes rolled back into his head a moment before he got used to the sensation. She wrapped her lips a round and and started to suck more of him into her mouth. Harry cleared his throat and looked to the other girls.
“Vixen, I need another copy of the slut contract to carry around with me.” he told her as he tried to get some business done as he enjoyed Cho’s tongue pressing against his shaft.
“I will get you one by tomorrow Master.” She said as she and the other girls watched Cho’s actions intently.
“Good.” he said then turned his attention to Ginny. “Fuck Toy, I want you to meet me by the Room of Requirement on Wednesday after curfew. I am going to offer you to Draco then and we will see if he is willing to touch a whore like you.”
“Yes Master, should I wear something special?” She asked and licked her lips as she watched Cho as if she wished she was the one sucking him off.
“Do something creative to entice him my little Fuck Toy.” he said then groaned as he felt Cho take him into her throat a little. He needed to work on controlling these reactions, it wouldn’t do for him to look out of control in front of his girls.
“Yes Master.” She said and shifted in place. Harry smirked as he watched his other slut get turned on as she watched her comrade suck him off.
“Would you like to help Cock Toy pleasure your Master, Fuck Toy?” he asked as he watched Ginny shifted back and forth.
“May I Master?” She asked and she looked like he had just offered her diamonds.
“She does have my cock pretty well in hand.” He started and Ginny actually looked disappointed. “But I think I would enjoy if you pleasured my Cock Toy for me.” he said and smirked as Ginny looked confused. “Take your hand and pretend that her pussy is your own, then masterbate.” he told her which made Cho choke on him and the other two girls giggle.
Ginny flushed and looked around for a moment before she looked back to him. “You want me to touch her Master?” She asked in a small voice.
“Yes Fuck Toy. You are both filthy whores, and you should get to know each other as much as you can.” he told her and motioned for her to move up behind Cho. “Press your front against her back and them pretend her body is your own, touch it in the way you like to touch yourself.”
After she took a deep breath Ginny moved up behind the other girl and pressed her smaller breasts against Cho’s back. Cho stopped her sucking and tensed as if she was an animal caught in a trap.
“Cock Toy, how are you doing?” Harry asked as he brushed her cheek. She pulled back from his hardened shafted to answer.
“I’m not gay Master.” She said and kept her body tense as Ginny slipped one hand between her legs, and the other moved to breast.
“No my little Cock Toy, I know how much you like cock.” he said with a sweet smile as he pet her cheek. “But I want you to let yourself just focus on what her hands are doing to you, then tell me how it makes you feel.”
Cho closed her eyes and tried to relax as Ginny touched her. She moaned softly then opened her eyes to look up at him. “It feels good Master.” She admitted as she was now panting. “But… I’m not…”
“Whores are usually at least a little bi-sexual, my sweet little Cock Toy. Just let yourself feel and be in the moment, stop thinking so much.” He told her and waited a moment before he turned to look at Ginny and asked. “How does she feel Fuck Toy?”
“She is so very wet Master, and I can feel her body pressing into my hands.” Ginny said as she lightly played with Cho’s nipple.
“Good, are you enjoying yourself Fuck Toy?” he asked as he watched his sluts pressed together for his enjoyment.
“Yes Master, she is so soft.” She told him and blushed. “I like to touch her and please you.” She told him then kissed Cho’s shoulder without being asked.
“Perfect, now I think it is time for a little game. If Cock Toy comes before I do I will be coming all over her face and breasts. Once its dry I will let Fuck Toy pick who licks it off of her skin until she is clean again. If I come first then I will let Cock Toy pick who I focus on next time.” He watched as both girls got back to work, Cho on swallowing his cock, and Ginny on masterbating Cho, he swallowed his moan and cleared his own throat before he turned to his other girls.
“Do either of you know what Professor Snape likes in a girl?” he asked with a bit of a strained voice but otherwise tried to ignore his two sluts, or at least pretend like he was ignoring them.
The two Slytherins looked to each other and then back to Harry. Daphne spoke first. “I’ve never heard of him sleeping with a student Master, but he always seems so lonely. Actually Draco would know better than anyone as Professor Snape is his godfather.”
“I’ll have to ask him when I speak to him on Wednesday.” He said and closed his eyes for a moment to enjoy the feel of a tongue lapping over the head of his shaft. “Is there anything else you two think I should know about your House?”
Tracey looked to Daphne and then nodded before she looked at Harry with a bit of worry in her eyes. “My old Master is upset that I am gay Master.” She told him meekly. “He wants me back and he is not taking no for an answer.”
“Who is your old Master pet?” he asked curiously, then clutched the arm of his chair as he suddenly came down Cho’s throat.
Tracey wanted for him to sit back and watched as Cho swallowed then started to lick Harry’s cock clean. “Theodore Nott is his name Master, he is in our year.” She told him then looked to the ground.
“Tell him that you belong to my Whip now.” Harry said as he pet Cho’s hair gently, he could feel that she was trembling from Ginny’s attention and that pleased him, even if the development with Nott did not. “Is he someone worth bringing over to our side? Maybe I would be willing to share you with him.”
Tracey swallowed hard and shook her head. “Master he is wealthy Master, not nearly as much as the Malfoy family, but he will be inheriting quite a bit. I am not sure what it would take to bring him to your side, his family is loyal to the Dark Lord if anything he ever told me in bed is true...” She said and Harry could tell she wanted to ask him not to make such an offer. “Master I will never lie to you, he is half way intelligent and he may serve you well as an ally.”
Harry frowned and moved Cho out of his way, he was pleased that even though he was done, Ginny continued to try and get Cho to come. He motioned for Tracey to move closer to him as he fixed his pants.
“Why did you leave him my pet?” he asked seriously.
“He did things I didn’t like Master.” She said meekly as if she was being bad by saying such a thing.
“I will make you do plenty of things to don’t like.” Harry reminded her in a deadly tone. “You know your contract better than anyone.”
“Master I do know our contracts.” Tracey started and swallowed hard. “The things I feel that you will make us do that we don’t like. It isn’t the same. We will enjoy not liking them Master.” She said as if her statement made perfect sense.
“My last master made me do things I did not enjoy even a tiny bit. He made me pretend to be different mud… muggleborns from the school so he could beat me and pretend to rape them.” She said and he watched as she started to tremble a little. Harry frowned deeply as he could tell she was actually scared of Nott.
“I see.” Harry said and thought for a moment as he a sudden urge to kill Nott tried to overpower him. “Well we will have to see to Mr Nott, for now I want you to tell him you are under the protection of your Master, and if he so much as touches you, your Master will be forced to retaliate.”
“Yes Master.”
“Do not tell him who I am, just call me ‘my Master’, do you understand?” Harry added after a moment.
“Yes Master.” Tracey said again.
There was a sudden loud moan coming from the two sluts which made everyone look over as Cho finally found release from Ginny’s actions.
Hermione sat on the same comfortable couch she had meditated on last time. She was fidgeting a little as she couldn’t decide whether this was a good idea or not. “Master, you know we have so much else going on. I don’t think that meditation is actually that important.” She said as he offered her the tea laced with the same drops they had used last time.
“I think you mental health is very important.” He said and took her chin so he could look her in the eyes. “Remember how relaxed you felt after last time? This couple of hour break won’t hurt anything.” he told her firmly.
“But…” She started then stopped when his frown turned stern.
“This is one of the exact reasons I think you will do better with our new relationship.” he told her firmly. “You are always putting your needs below other people’s wants. It is my responsibility as a good Master to know what your needs are and make sure they are met. You need to relax, and this is the only way that has worked so far. So you will be drinking this tea.”
She opened her mouth to argue more then closed his again and shook her head. “Yes Master.” She said softly as she finally took the tea, she really didn’t have a good argument for his point.
“Good girl, now drink up and do your breathing exercises.” he told her then cupped her cheek and kissed her lips softly. “I am going to do some work while you are relaxing.” he said and smiled as he moved to the other side of the couch to get out a book he had to read for Charms.
Hermione smiled and sipped the tea slowly. She sat in silence and watched Harry read for a while until the cup was done. Once she had finished it she set the cup down and sat back on the couch to try and relax. She closed her eyes and let herself drift into her meditative state.
Harry waited till he was sure she was in her trace again before setting his book down and moving closer to her.
“How is my good girl?” he asked in a soothing voice.
She moaned softly as she had no reason to hold back in this state. “Relaxed Master.” She told him, her voice sounded like she was dreaming.
“Very good slave.” he said and pet his hand over her knee. “What should we talk about tonight?” he was asking himself more than her, but in true Hermione fashion she answered anyway.
“My punishments and rewards.” She said softly.
“Oh? Have you been thinking about those?” he asked her with a chuckle.
“Yes Master.” She answered simply.
“Did you enjoy your punishment?” Harry asked her curiously.
“Oh yes Master. I have been thinking and dreaming about it.”
“Have you touched herself while thinking about it slave?” he asked as he wanted to know as much about what turned her on as he could.
“Yes Master.”
“Thank makes you a very good girl.” he said just to make her moan and let her know he was pleased with the reaction. “Did you not like your reward?” he pressed as they were on the subject.
“I wanted it Master.” She told him honestly. “I was just being stubborn.”
He smiled, he had hoped that was what the rejection was about. “You are a very naughty girl for holding back on me.” he told her sternly.
“Yes Master.” She said
“Good girl.” he said just to make her moan again. “Now, I want to know what you think about Ginny, and Cho.” he asked as he figured he should start with the girls closest to her.
“They are both prettier than me Master.” She said with a soft whimper.
He sighed as how stupid girls were again and shook his head. “Why do you think that?” he asked and she frowned as if she didn’t understand the question.
“Master I see the way boys look at them, no boy looks at me that way.” She told him how she felt and what she noticed.
Harry sighed and shook his head. “Hermione, you will start to notice the boys who are now looking at you the same way they looked at Cho and Ginny.” he said as he didn’t wish to push too much, he wanted her to realize how beautiful she was on her own.
“Yes Master.” she said in her daze.
“Now I want you to tell me how it would make you feel to watch me have sex with other girls, if you did not feel threatened by them in any way.” he asked carefully. He had already started to try and break down the moral constraints that modern society had placed on her, but he was far from done.
“I would be upset that you would have sex with other girls when you were so mad that I was pleased with the fact Ron was looking at me.” She told him honestly.
Harry smiled to himself and shook his head, she was still thinking that their relationship should be fair and equal. He would teach her differently, but for now he needed to know more. “Is that all you would feel?” he pressed.
“No Master, I would also feel humiliated that you would make me watch while you cheated on me.” She said and licked her lips. “I would feel ashamed that I could not be enough to give you everything you wanted.” She added then paused for a moment. “And I think it would turn me on, but I don’t know why.”
“I want you to examine those feelings more. Find the root of why you think it would be arousing.” He ordered but kept his soothing tone.
She was silent for a long while before she finally answered him. “It comes from the shame and humiliation Master.” She told him softly.
Harry smiled and pet his hand over her cheek, if only he could get her to see herself the way he saw her. The feelings of shame and humiliation were both a good and bad thing. They were good because it turned both Hermione and himself on for her to feel that way. They were bad because he knew Hermione well enough to know that she would try and fight what she was truly feeling because of them, she was just stubborn that way. So the question now was what push could he give her to let her accept these aspects of both of them?
“Hermione, whenever you hear me say the words think accept in that order, I want you to stop whatever you are doing and think about your actions and feelings. You will recognize when your actions go against what you really want and accept you own feelings. Do you understand?”
“Yes Master.” She said simply
“Good girl.” he said and smiled as she moaned.
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