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THE PHOENIX	By : tas Category: Harry Potter > Het - Male/Female > Draco/Hermione Views: 24893 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0
Disclaimer: I do not own Harry Potter, nor any of the characters from the books or movies. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.

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I would just like to say again that J.K Rowling is amazing. I fully enjoy the magical world of Harry Potter and the many characters that she thought up of in her head. I personally can't wait until the new movie comes out in just a couple of weeks, yay!

I know that I haven't replied to the reviews in a long while, but I've been pretty busy. I do check them everyday and it always makes me smile when I do get some....especially the good ones. I have had a few requests to be start up a mailing list, so if anyone is interested in being added to the list, please let me know with your e-mail address.

I would like to also apologize in advance for any errors in motorcycle terminology that me happen in this story. I have never been on a motorcycle, but liked the idea of Hermione being a leather-bad-ass girl.

Recently I had been approached with someone wanting to beta for me. We are giving it a try and found that I am learning.....damn fractured sentences!!!! Anyway, thanks to Lessa for beta-ing for me. Some errors may still occur throughout the stories, as she suggests an improvement and hopefully it is re-written okay. Also, because I do sent the chapters to her, the submitting of new ones may take a bit longer. I have just finished writing out 'The Phoenix' and am in the process of typing it out. Lots of other ideas for long stories and a few more chapters to my 'Slytherin Parties'.

Anyways to the thanks to the awesome reviewers out there:
(a few reviewers may have multiple comments, they have left more than one for me and I do like to comment on each one)

May 18/04

Anon: (2004-04-11) - I am glad you're liking it so far, and do plan on continuing.

georgia: (2004-04-11) - Thanks for the review and am glad you like my other 'stuff'. Thanks for the compliment and more chapters will be added regularly (i hope)

tabitoo: (2004-04-11) - Draco first realizes that Phoenix is Hermione after seeing Harry's tattoo first. The Hermione character in my story is a 'bit' out of character, but I always like to write her a little bit more independent than in the books. thanks again and hope you enjoy the rest.

XxphenixX: (2004-04-11) - thanks for the many exclamation marks. When i reread the break up between Hermione and Harry I did realize it was a little 'quick'. I added some things to that segment but also put in a bit of an explanation later why they broke up. As you have probably read, Hermione is chaser. Thanks again and hope you like the rest.

deblovesdragon: (2004-04-11) - Thanks for the review. I can always count on a review from you on my stories. Draco did not recognize Harry in the magazine due to the fact his face was buried in Hermione's neck and where would Draco see Harry shirtless? Hermione's eyes were covered or closed and her hair longer and black, I wanted to keep the suspence there, so he didn't recognize her right off.
(2004-05-02) - I liked your idea with the cat fighting with Pansy and the tattoo showing itself , but I had already written that part and it was too soon for that to be revealed in the story. Thanks again.

Kel: (2004-04-12) - Yay! Thanks for the review, past and present included.

reader: (2004-04-13) - Glad you like the story so far and 'Life time mate'. You should read the prequel to that ' A Mate for Life'. Hope you like the rest. Thanks.

Faye: (2004-04-13) - Happy you're liking the story so far. I have never been on a motorcycle and like to apologize beforehand on any terms that I may have screwed up. The guy with the stag tattoo and the longer black hair is actually Harry in the magazine.....that's pretty cool on the resemblence though. THANK YOU FOR LOVING THIS STORY. hope you enjoy the rest.
(2004-04-29) - Thanks again. I'll try to update faster.

Shannon: (2004-04-13) - WOOHOO! THANKS. Hope you liked the chapters after the third one. Now a total of twelve and more to come. Lots of other ideas for more 'long' stories.
(2004-05-16) - Glad you're still loving it. Did the cold shower help?

Me: (2004-04-14) - Thanks!!!!!!!!!!

Jules: (2004-04-17) - Thanks Jules for the review. I always can count on a review from you on my stories. Makes me feel good to have people that enjoy what I write. And Draco and Hermione will definitely be 'cumming' closer. As for Sirius, I like the character too much to keep him dead.
(2004-05-02) - Halloween festivities is the main part of the story. Draco will race in both the broom and the bike race (as you probably have already read if you got this far in the story). I also like the more confident Hermione in the story. Thanks again.
(2004-05-04) - THANKS FOR THE FABULOUS review again. I personally like the scene where Hermione ties Draco up, one of my favourites. Pansy gets more of her due later.

elemetaldeity: (2004-04-30) - Glad you like the biker angle. Have read alot of fanfics and don't recall the biker angle, wanted something different and I like leather on guys or girls in my stories.
(2004-05-03) - Woo Hoo! thanks. Glad you like the smut, lots more in later chapters.
(2004-05-09) - Trying to update as fast as I can. Now 12 whole chapters to read. Finished writing it, in the process of typing it out. Thanks again.

Artraea: (2004-05-01) - Thanks, Where does it need more at the end.?

amanda: (2004-05-03) - Glad you're loving the story and hope you like the new chapters. Lots more to come. Thanks.

Julili: (2004-05-05) - Happy you like the sexiness of leather and Hermione. The fighting scene may have been far fetched, but I had it in my head, and trying to think it out and type it out, the translation may have come out different. It reads quite similar to 'Forever Fantasy' scene for me with 'more'. Draco and Hermione action ....for sure. stay tuned!!!!!!

Lana: (2004-05-07) - Thank you for the FREAKING good review! I take that as a great compliment that you liked the story that much, as I have read alot of the fanfics and they are really good. Thank you for putting me up there with some of them. I don't like to leave stories unfinished....very frustrating when you get into a story then all of a sudden...no more. The conclusion in written, just in process of typing it out.

Amie: (2004-05-12) - Thanks for the awesome review. hope you like what happens with Draco and Hermione.

Austin: (2004-05-12) - Thanks for the review. Any relation to Amie (above reviewer)?

sakura yama kawa: (2004-05-16) - Gosh darn, thanks for review. Glad you 'fucking' love it. There will be more, enjoy.

birdy: (2004-05-16) - Soooooooooooo....thanks for the review. The race on the broom or the bike. You'll have to read and find out.

May 22/04

Molle: (2004-05-19) Thanks (i think) for that looooong review. I am sure you will be happy that Hermione does have another go at Pansy near the end of the story. The fight could be unrealistic, but too bad.....I like the way I wrote it. (ha)I didn't have Snape have a fling with another biker character (although the thought did cross my mind), because I had too much smut in mind for my two favourite characters to use. The Hermione I have in mind when I write more stories looks more mature. Have you ever read or looked at a 'Tombraider comic', well like that but a bit younger of course. I wish I was able to draw, then I could show what I had in mind for the stories. Sorry not too much with Ron either, I find it's a hard character to write right now. Maybe sometime in future stories.
Also sorry, but it will be a happy ending. Epilogue with happily ever after included. I like the sappy endings with lots of smut. I personally don't think it would ruin the story, and I don't think some of my other faithful reviewers would mind the way I write it either.
So, hope you like 'some' of the story, if not. can't help that. Thanks for the good thoughts though.

elementalideity (2004-05-19): Thanks for the support and and the review. Three more chapters will be added tonight after I'm done commenting on these reviews. Hope you enjoy.

Shannon (2004-05-19): glad the shower worked for ya. You are now on my mailing lists and will be hearing from me in the next couple of hours with news of new chapters. Nothing wrong with your reviewing, love it. I am so honored that you have my stories saved for that smutty-pinch. I actually save and print out all my stories for myself. I even get warm sometimes when I read them over. crazy huh? Well shannon, thanks again.

Jules (2004-05-19): Sorry to hear about your 'cruddy' days and was happy to hear that reading the updates brightened your day. Hope you enjoy the next couple of chapters with the bike race and the photo shoot. Thanks again and there will be more smut, I promise!!!!!!!

May 23/04

shauna1983 (2004-05-20): Thank you for your support. Glad you like all the stories. Have about three of four more ideas for more stories and am working on more of 'Slytherin Parties," thanks again.

Blazing Fire (2004-05-22): I Have now put you on my mailing list. Thank you soooooo much for your review. It makes me so *blush* happy that people like my stories. I can't believe you print them all out!!!!!! That is such a compliment to my writing and it's people like you that keep me writing. Thanks.

evil_vanessa (2004-05-22): Thank you and I ADORE all the praise that you gave me. is is a great compliment to me that you think I am one of the best that you have read. I have read alot of fanfic for Harry Potter (am obsessed with the story), and there is quite a few good ones out there. Thanks again!!!!!!!!!! I have put you on my mailing list.

ash (200405-23): thanks.

June 30/04

I know I haven't been keeping up with the responses to the reviews, but I honestly do check them daily and it makes me smile when reading. Been busy writing more and doing that everyday thing....called work.

shauna1983 (2004-05-20): Thanks for reading and reviewing my stories. It's quite a compliment when you hear that someone has read your stories more than once. Hope you liked the rest of it.

Blazing Fire (2004-05-22): thanks for the compliment on my being your favorite Harry Potter author. There are quite a few other good authors out there and have enjoyed reading many, many others. So thank you, it means a lot to me. And that you printed them out....WOW, alot of paper and ink you must have used. As you may have noticed you are on my mailing list. Hope you like the updates.

evil_vanessa (2004-05-22): Thank yor ADr ADORING my stories. Hope you liked the rest of 'Phoenix' and the other chapters to 'Slytherin Parties'. You are on my short but meaningful mailing list now. Thanks.

ash (2004-05-23): Short review but still means alot. thanks.

Mooneflowerz (2004-05-23): Thanks for the review on the story. As for the way I wrote Hermione....have you ever read a Tombraider comic....well that's the way I pictured her in most of my stories. I like writing her a little wild and naughty, makes her more fun. thanks

Jules (2004-05-23): Glad you liked the race and the sexy photoshoot. I really liked writing that. Got the idea from a guy friend of mine. All my Harry Potter characters are out of character, some people don't like that.....but really....would you really read in Rowlings books Draco and Hermione snogging somewhere in a broom closet? hehe. Hope you liked the conclusion.
(2004-06-10): thanks again Jules. The 'tickle war' actually had me smiling when I was writing it. I had a coworker that thought I was losing it when I was smiling madly while I was writing it on my lunch break. Hope you liked the way Pansy 'got the crap kicked out of her' in the last couple of chapters. thanks again for your support.
(2004-06-25): Glad you liked the conclusion to the story. AFF is getting to be quite slow and frustrating at times. I also have my stories on Potterverse.com, like I may have told you in the e-mail update I sent you. I may look for an additional site to post my stories. Although AFF has been great for me, I get the best reviews here and the most, and that really makes my day.

amie (2004-05-28): thanks for the review on 'Phoenix'. Am not planning on a sequel to this story in the near future, but am in the process of writing a veela story with Draco HermHermione, and a new pairing that I haven't tried writing before, which may or may not get a good response for me. We'll have to wait and see.

Shannon (2004-06-07): You are one of my ever faithful reviewers and it's people like you that keep me writing...thanks. Pansy does get her ass kicked in a hopefully believable way, if not...whatever. I like it. Slytherin Parties is an ongoing thing. Submitted a couple more chapters, (which I am sure that you have read, considering you are on my mailing list). That project is for inbetween longer projects. thanks!!!!!!!
(2004-05-14): Glad the new chapters made your Monday morning. thanks.
thanks for the 'fantastic' review. In process of writing a veela story. Draco is already one and Hermione gets it later. Want to write a bit more first before I send any chapters to my beta reader. haven't had much time lately. I'll let you know when they get posted .

Kel (2004-06-08): Thanks Kel for the review. Hope you liked the updates. Your favorite story up to date??? Big thank((2004-06-15): I am hoping that my vampire story will be sexy, with a different twist to the story I hope. Right now I am working on a veela story, which I plan on completing. I have read so many veela stories, really good ones, and they never finish, damn frustrating.

The Charmed One (2004-06-14): Glad you liked 'every bit of it'. Thanks.

Monique (2004-06-25): I have written six stories with Draco and Hermione in total which would be in my profile. All six are rated NC-17. My first fic was a 'clean' story which is posted on harrypotterfanfiction.com. I am also in the process of fixing that particular story up. I would love to add you to my e-mail list, but you didn't add your address. Thanks.

Centuries scars (2004-06-27): WOW, thanks for the review. You are right,,never did do the bondage thing with Hermione tied up. I'll have to do that as a 'Slytherin Parties' chapter. I like the picture of Draco tied up better though. thanks.

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