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A different way of looking at things	By : radiofishlips Category: Harry Potter > Threesomes/Moresomes Views: 128425 -:- Recommendations : 2 -:- Currently Reading : 3
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A/N ok so i have received a review asking what happened to the collar that Hermione was given in chapter seven .... as part of the answer i need to explain the way this story is being written ...

so here it is ... i tend to write a lot this is my first FanFic but i write a lot of original work i also teach creative writing at a high level. As an exercise for one of my classes i had them writing with no planning at all. now one of the smart brats i teach asked me if i ever wrote in this way (i would have gotten away with it if it wasn't for those damn kids) my honest answer was not in along time!
this got me to talking with the class about the merits of the writing style and as such i told the class that i would write something using this technique and we could all compare results.

so the technique is called scratch writing and its simple to use (many people use it without knowing)
the idea is that you take an idea for a story and the only initial planning to be done is to say "ok my story is about x(in this case a response to a slavefic challenge)" no characterization no plot development nothing ... then sit down and write chapter one and don't correct a damn thing as you write; no spelling, no grammar, no structure nothing just let the creative juces flow (or the plot bunnies ravage your muses cabbage)...
then when you get to a point that you feel that the chapter reaches its logical conclusion that chapter ends. then the chapter gets 1 pass through to fix any structure errors and then another pass through to get spelling and grammar errors sorted and that's it any more editing and your planning and that's a no no.

once the first chapter is written you decide what the next chapter will cover and write it in the same way as the first with the addition that you use the word count of the first chapter as a guide for each successive chapter (in my case about 2500 words). so each chapter gets the scene it will cover from th chapter before it with very little forethought. in my case i have some ideas of events i want to cover based on it being a slavefic but thats it i have gone to great lengths to not plan the chapters in advance.

this technique keeps the writer on his/her toes and you wont know where the story is going one moment to the next already in this story i have had one scene that was setup for something that hasn't and likely wont now happen... i have also seen a major shift in the characters i planned to use and three chapters have just appeared without warning at all... im beginning to love writing like this as the story is as new to me as it is to you the readers ....

sooo what happened to the collar ... ummm buggered if i know actually it popped in on a whim and hasn't been seen since ... tho now that it has been pointed out to me ill likely use it again

ok soo that should answer the question for you all and sorry about he lengthy A/N

Chapter 13: A Late Night Admission

Daphne and Tracy sat together on
Tracy�s bed curtains closed and silencing spells in place they had been sitting
there for most of the evening since returning from dinner talking about their
conversation with Hermione and Harry earlier in the day. Their conversation to
this point had been mainly concerned with the situation that Hermione was in.
deciding that her position was voluntary left them with the conclusion that
unless Harry went too far and hurt her they had no reason at all to interfere
and they both fully acknowledged that with the charm that Harry had used the
chances of him hurting Hermione in some permanent way was not at all likely.

Daphne looked up at her best friend.
�Did you see the way Harry stormed into the room? The professor knew what we
were planning to talk to Hermione about and she told me before that she had
cast an advanced strengthening charm on the door. Damn girl he still blew it
apart like it was tissue paper.�

Daphne shook her head. �His presence
in the room was something else.�

Tracy nodded in response, �I know, I
seriously thought we were goners� and if Hermione hadn�t acted as quick as she
did I�m pretty sure we would at least be spending some time in the hospital
wing.�

Tracy watched her friend squirm and
was somewhat amused to see a blush settle on her best friends cheeks. Smirking
she asked with a tease, �Is there something you want to tell me Daph sweetie?�

Daphne blushed harder. �That display
of power made me so wet. And talking with them both after� Merlin girl if he can
cast that charm with enough power to shatter a detection stone and cares that
much about his slave that he will enter an unknown situation to rescue her.�

Daphne stopped for a moment blushed
harder and looked down at the bed between the two.

While Daphne had paused Tracy spoke
up. �You want him don�t you? You want to join Hermione in his service.�

Daphne looked up tears running down
her cheeks and quietly spluttered. �I�ve found him� My search is over I� I know
what I need.� Her tears started flowing more freely and she started to sob,
�but� but I don�t know if he will take me I don�t know if he wants more than
one slave� what if he says no? With the spells they put on us at birth I will�
I will never have an owner if it�s not Harry.

Tracy looked at her sobbing friend,
�Oh Daph calm down babe, yes it might be a problem but I�ll talk to him and we
will see what happens ok?�

Reaching forward for her friend she
pulled the tall blond into her arms cradling her head to into her shoulder and
started whispering soothing words in her ear. After ten long minutes Daphne
started to calm down and the tears came to a stop. Tracy pulled back a little
and gently turned Daphne�s head to face her. Leaning in one hand behind her
neck she gently kissed her friend on the lips. Slowly she started to deepen the
kiss with her free hand slowly moving along Daphne�s thigh and up under her
pajama top As Tracy�s hand came in contact with the soft flesh of her friend�s
breast her fingers curled about the mound and started to stimulate the nipple
that was found as her tongue sought entry to her mouth.

Daphne moaned into the kiss and
relaxed into her friends caress. The hand that was holding her head to Tracy's
mouth slipped from its position and came to the front of her neck and she felt
it start to manipulate the buttons. In very little time at all Tracy had the
pajama shirt open and she pushed Daphne onto her back.

The kiss broken Daphne looked up at
her friend with some shock, �umm� Trace what�s going on I know you don�t like
witches like this?�

Tracy smiled at her friend, �Nop I
don�t but my master made sure I know how to please a witch and besides you�re
my friend� my sister in this life, and I know this is the best way to help you
calm down.

Tracy smiled again her hands slipping
to Daphne�s waist where her thumbs hooked into the waistband of her friend�s
pajama pants and began to tug them down her long legs, �so just you lie back
and let me help you relax.

Daphne�s hips rose slightly to let
the material slide over her shapely ass and then lay back trying to relax.
Feeling the soft feminine hands of her best friend slowly run up her legs and
apply pressure to the inside of her knees she let herself be moved and in
almost no time she found her legs spread wide open and as one soft hand massage
her inner thigh the other hand brushed up her taught stomach finally coming
back into contact with her breast. As the hand ran slowly over her breast its
fingers tweaking the nipple she sucked in a deep breath and felt a warm breeze
flow over her pouting lower lips.

Tracy shuddered slightly she was
about to do something that she really didn�t like, something that in the past
had only been done at on the order of her beloved master. Daphne had been there
for her two summers ago when she had felt the call to a man, when she herself
had had the doubts that she knew Daphne must be feeling now. And through the
time of her initial training Daphne had been her rock the one she confessed all
her feelings to, from the feelings of being loved and wanted to her feelings of
inadequacy and the associated terror that she would not be good enough for her
master and he would cast her aside.�

Shuddering again she thought of the
consequences of not been accepted by the man or woman that their nature called
to and wondered if Hermione had felt the call without the spells specialist
spells cast on her at birth. Those spells used to enhance the submissive or
dominant nature of the child in question were a blessing as they removed the
worry and fear about the social Implications of the lifestyle that she had
heard some muggles went through. Knowing that Daphne needed to calm down she
clamped down on her own feelings and lowered her mouth to her friends puffy
nether lips and her tongue flicking out and slowly swiping up the length of the
woman below her. The taste of Daphne was not as strong as the taste of her
masters other slave but it was still a taste she would never come to truly
enjoy.

Daphne lay back on the bed with
Tracy�s tongue lapping at her womanhood; this was heaven and knowing that Tracy
really didn�t like it was making it more meaningful. The feelings of her
friends wet flesh swirling about her clit was interrupted as Tracy started to
suck on the nub and her fingers teased the blonds� stiff nipple. Without
thought Daphne�s hand dropped to her friends head and held her tightly into her
pussy as she moaned, �YESSSSS� Ooh Tracy that�s so good� god I want him to be
my master��

Suddenly a thought lanced through her
mind and gripping her friend�s hair she pulled Tracy�s face up off her pussy.
Looking deeply into Tracy�s eyes smiling at the sight of the juices covering
her friends face.

Shaking her head slightly she asked,
�Tracy� you�re not going to get in trouble for having sexual contact with
someone are you?�

Tracy blushed, �Maybe� but when I
tell master it was a woman and why I did it he will probably let me off with a
light punishment.� She thought for a moment, �It would be worse if it was
something I enjoyed and I don�t want to think about what would happen to me if
I let someone do something to me.�

Feeling the hand in her hair loose
grip Tracy again lowered herself to Daphne�s sex and started gently lapping at
her sex.

Daphne lay back again and gave in to
the feelings and in a short time she was panting and moaning again.

�Merlin�. Oh Merlin I�m cuming�.
That�s it Trace oh� god your good at this.� Finally she let out a shudder and
groaned as she pulled Tracy up beside her and rested herself on her friend�s
still clothed chest and drifted off to sleep in her friends arms.

~*~

Harry looked up from the book he was
reading it was a slim volume that Tracy Davis had given him at the end of their
meeting. It had been an enlightening read and had answered most of his
questions just as Daphne and Tracy had told him it would.

Looking over at the center of the
room he smiled as he saw Hermione knelt on the thick sheepskin rug with her
eyes closed. Her back was arched and her breasts pushed out in an inviting
manner her knees were wide enough that her pussy lips were pulled open. Her
arms were behind her back and she was breathing deeply giving her chest a
delicious movement as it rose and fell.

�Well Miss Granger it seems that
there is a lot more to the D/s community in the magical world than either of us
realized.�

Hermione opened her eyes and looked
at him as he spoke to her not having been asked a direct question she nodded
and waited for him to continue.

�it seems that the group of families
that we were told about is not all that large but they take the welfare of any
submissive witches and wizards very seriously� he smiled as Hermione nodded, �I
think it�s good to know that this group exists don�t you?�

Hermione nodded as she answered her
master�s question, �Yes master.�

Harry rose and crossed the floor to
her his hand reaching out and resting on her head. �Some of the reading I have
done has given me more information about the spell I used on you. Apparently
while it requires your agreement it also requires a non magical commitment from
both of us to the other one. If this commitment was not there the spell would
have failed.�

Harry crouched down behind the
kneeling girl and moved to whisper in her ear as his hand slid about her side
and curled about her breast. �I also read some interesting things about
punishment in the book they gave me. The main point is from this book and the
other books I have read is that for punishment to be effective it has to be
proportional to the offense and performed in such a way that there is no doubt
it is punishment do you understand me miss granger?�

Hermione lent back into his chest the
feeling in her nipple was wonderful but his words were making her think about
her transgression. �Yes master�

Harry tweaked the nipple harder and
continued to whisper in her ear, �so I will punish you tomorrow and that will
be the end of it. I have decided once you are punished for something it will
not come up again unless you make the same mistake at a later time. Now let us
be off to bed my love�

Hermione shuddered with joy at the
thought of her upcoming punishment. Not at the thought of needing the
punishment but rather at the knowledge that her transgression would soon be
behind her in honesty the lesson had already been learnt but she was fully
aware that here needed to be a physical action to wash the sin from her being.
The fact that Harry had not called her Miss Granger that last time was not lost
on her either.

Hermione waited till she felt Harry
rise from behind her and then stood waited a moment as she stretched out the
mussels in her legs and turned to follow him into the bedroom. When she reached
the bedroom she saw Harry sitting on the edge of the bed talking quietly to
dobby and he had his hand raised to her obviously asking her to wait at the
door. After a few moments dobby bowed to Harry and popped away.

Harry looked up and over at Hermione
as the elf left and a wide smile graced his lips as he motioned her to him.

Crossing the room to where Harry was
Hermione started to drop to her knees when she was stopped by Harry's hand on
her for arm.

�Into bed Miss Granger tomorrow will
be a long day and you need your sleep.�

Harry watch as the naked girl slipped
into the bed with a shudder and after slowly divesting himself of his clothing
he slipped in behind her and pulled her close to him his cock stiffening and
coming to rest between her ass cheeks. Hermione felt his cock come to rest
against her ass and smiled as she gently pushed back into him and tried to let
herself drift off to sleep

~*~

Hermione slept well that night and as
she woke her internal clock warned her that it was later than she normally
woke. There was something not quite right about things after a moment she
realized that the comforter had been pulled off her. Rolling over to see if
Harry was still with her she saw the rest of the bed empty. Hermione attempted
to sit up only to find herself jerked to a halt with a light rattle. Reaching
up to her neck she found that her collar had been attached to a length of chain
and that chain ran up under the pillow and off under the bed after some more
experimentation she found that while her arms were still free her legs had been
similarly attached to the foot of the bed with a sigh she rolled over to face
the center of the room and noticed a note on harries pillow.

Hermione reached out and took the
note which read.

�Miss Granger,

Today is the day
you will receive your first punishment from me. And I can honestly say I hope
it to be the last. Please know I take no joy in the upcoming events that your
actions have forced me to take.

At this time I wish
you to know that I have forgiven you for your actions but I see the need to
apply a physical repercussion to the incident in question. As such you will
remain where you are until such time as you are retrieved and bought to the
place of your punishment. Once in the fore mentioned location you will be given
the chance to explain your actions and will then receive your physical
punishment. After this punishment is dispensed you will be cared for and there
will be no further mention of the incident.

Be advised that
while you may view the punishment as severe this time any repeats of this
transgression in the future will be dealt with in a harsher manner

Your lord and
master

Harry James Potter-Black�

Hermione shuddered and had a feeling
that today was going to be painful both physically and emotionally and she lay
back realizing that she deserved what was coming.

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