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Trial by Fire	By : sazsazzel Category: Harry Potter > Slash - Male/Male > Harry/Snape Views: 37684 -:- Recommendations : 4 -:- Currently Reading : 4
Disclaimer: I do not own Harry Potter or any of the characters associated with the books/movies and I never have and never will make any money from the writing of this story

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AN: I hope everyone will enjoy this chapters. Reviews welcome :)

WARNING!!! There is graphic torture in this chapter. Its only short and I've split it so that you can skip it with out effecting the story on bit. You wont miss out if you do skip the chapters as the after effects will be clear in the next chapter (which has also already been written and will be uploaded after this one. So if you do or don't want to read this very graphic chapter then you at least get to read something with the update. Please no flaming about the content of this chapters because if you don't want to read about torture then please don't read this chapter. But with that said i hope you will read and enjoy.

stacey123 - Very nice idea's and they gave me much inspiration. I hope this chapter, despite being short lives up to your expectations.

orkchild - Thank you for requesting no torture. I would advise that you skip this chapter. I hope you keep reading. Nothing will be missed by skipping this chapter.

Third Angel - I'm glad your enjoying the updates. Thank you for the advise and as you can see I've added the warning about the chapter. I wonder, will you read this chapter or let you imagination run free by skipping? Either way I hope you enjoy. :)

theladykt - Thank you for reading and i'm glad i can surprise people sometimes :)

heartstar - Thank you, and as requested more :)

unneeded - I'm happy my fic can make you giggle and that you're still sticking with me and it :) Not much has been decided on Herms yet. Might have her turn a bit bad then see the error of her ways? Defiantly woot woot for Sev Sev hehe. Well its your choice if you would rather skip this chapters and as i've said you wont loose anything by skipping :)

Draconia Lesoto/ Anon - Naked Draco on top? How could i refuse! I hope you enjoy it. And yes I will be accepting names for the baby shortly so watch this space!

Anna - Thank you very much. I've also taken your advise on the about the warning. I hope you can keep enjoying the story.

Chapter 18 – Retribution

Ear piercing screams rent the air. The air in the dank dungeon was thick with despair. Severus was being vicious with his torture, in his mind they deserved death, so he would have to do with the next best thing. Currently the four ex-students, his first act was to expel them and snap their wands, were still handing on the dungeon walls. The skin on their hands was slowly being pulled off, strip by bloody strip. It started at their fingers and peeled back about a foot at a time, letting the skin curl up in a bloody ball before falling to the floor. This continued up their arms and stopped after taking a couple of strips from their necks. Tears and snot were streaming down their faces. In a stark contrast to them Severus was silent; he didn’t react to their pleas, didn’t flinch at their screams and didn’t verbally bash them. Even his spells were silent, which added to their fear because they never knew what to expect.

Severus turned his sole attention on Pansy causing her to flinch despite trying not to. He pointed his wand at her left eye and twisted his wrist as he cast a spell. The eye began to swell, becoming blood shot before it exploded with a sickening pop. Pansy screams so loud that she actually ripped her vocal cords. Severus gripped his wand as the tip appeared to heat up like an iron brand. He then proceeded to press the heated wand against her face, drawing jagged patterns and disfiguring her. The dungeon now smelled of burning flesh. Severus conjured a mirror in front of her and made her look at herself with her one good eye. Then for good measure he made the mirror shatter and sent the shards flying at the chained girl, embedding them in her skin.

Severus looked at Crabb and Goyle and he knew they weren’t the brains behind the attack. That they were only following Pansy’s orders due to a lack of leadership from Draco. He wasn’t going to punish them as much as the other two but he was still going to punish them. With a spell he stretched their tongues out in front of them before severing them with a flick of his wand. Both boys screamed in agony, trying to not choke while their mouths filled bloody. He then pointed his wand at their crotches causing both boys eyes to go wide and frantically shake their heads. They tried pleading with him but the lack of a tongue made it difficult. He wouldn’t have listened anyway. Without blinking he quickly cast a castration spell at both of them, it wasn’t long before they passed out.

Finally he turned his attention back to Ginny. He loathed her the most for she actually thought she deserved his precious Harry. She would pay dearly. He aimed his wand at her feet and a vicious looking green substance poured out of it and landed on her bare feet. It turned out the substance was some form of acid and it made quick work of her skin before moving on to the muscles. Ginny was screeching and thrashing as much as she could while still chained. Once the liquid was finished with the muscles it even started to dissolve the bones. It was very painful and very slow. Every time she passed out he woke her up so she could fully appreciate her ordeal. Severus cancelled the spell once it reached her upper thighs, leaving a pile of sludge on the floor that used to be her legs. An idea struck him as he remembered a spell he hadn’t used since he first joined the death eaters. He smirked at her and if she could have paled more she would have. He made a complicated motion with his wand before pointing it at her stomach. The skin started to ripple as if it was alive, with the movement spreading higher up her body. The skin wasn’t alive but what was underneath it was. What seemed like thousands of insects started pouring out of every orifice and going back in others. Some even seemed to be eating her. A whimper drew his attention back to the boys who had regained consciousness. After what seemed like hours but what was only a matter a minutes the insects disappeared.

Severus stepped back as surveyed the snivelling mass that represented the former students. With a flick he cast the Cruciatus curse and held the spell on…

…Severus stepped back as he left their collective minds. He made them share a joint vision of things that hadn’t really happened. In their minds it had been hours upon hours of torture; where in fact it had only been 20 minutes. There was not a scratch on any part of their bodies. ‘Time to return them to their respective parents’ he thought to himself.

To be continued…
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- 19
- 20
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