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Thou Shalt Not!	By : KusanoSaku Category: Harry Potter AU/AR > Slash - Male/Male Views: 17650 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 4
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Title: Thou Shalt Not!

Fandom: Harry Potter

Notes: Post-Battle of Hogwarts fic in part. Non-Epilogue compliant. AR/AU. Evil Dumbledore.

Summery: Severus Snape survives the war, only to realize he has nothing left to live for. While musing what he might have done differently, he is interrupted by the arrival of Dumbledore who is doing some ‘housekeeping’. A duel begins and in an attempt to save himself, Severus does the unthinkable and breaks one of the greatest tenets of Magic!

What has he done and where has he gone?

The Past - Ch 1

“Sir? Are you alright? Sir?”

The voice was vaguely familiar, then achingly so. Severus’ eyes blinked the sun was bright; he covered his eyes and sat up feeling dizzy. He realized he was still holding his wand in a death grip and cast a wandless, non-verbal charm to settle his nerves and banish his dizziness. He blinked and then his eyes fell on a very familiar form, the pale face, silver eyes and long blonde hair. He gasped, Lucius…a young, shining Lucius. He couldn’t prevent it from falling from his lips, “Luce…”

The teen blinked at him, “What did you say?” Utter confusion distorting his Malfoy mask.

“My apologies,” Severus began slowly, “I thought you were someone else.”

Lucius Malfoy stared at him, then said swiftly, arrogantly, “No you didn’t. That was a tone of intimacy, yearning. I’m no fool. Who are you? And how do you know my name?”

Severus sighed, wincing as he changed his position to a more comfortable one. “One question at a time. By Salazar I’ll answer them, but you must tell me the where and when I am.”

“Where and when?” the teen’s brow creased in confusion.

He muttered in Gaelic, “Day and time Lucius! I haven’t time for this. I need to know where I am.”

“You’re at Hogwarts, near the Black Lake. As for the when why it’s September, September 4, 1971.”

Severus’ face was split by a grin, “Salazar’s Basilisk! I’ve done it! It’s supposed to be impossible. I got clean away.” Then a thought struck him time, “Lucius, what time is it?”

Lucius seemed as though he thought that Severus was crazy. “It’s just gone past one.”

“How far past?” Severus couldn’t prevent this important moment in his life.

“Five past.”

Severus stood up, “On your feet Lucius. You’re on Prefect rounds aren’t you? Better hurry. There is about to be a scuffle near the Forbidden Forest. You can’t miss it. You’ll find four Gryffindors and one Slytherin about to have an unequal duel. Don’t interrupt it until the Slytherin is about to lose. Make a lot of noise but you must detain the scrawny sandy haired Gryffindor and the Slytherin. Bring them here and I’ll explain everything. By Salazar I well.”

It was sometime before a fifteen-year-old Prefect Lucius Malfoy returned with eleven year old Remus Lupin and Severus Snape.

Severus steeled himself, after about two minutes of the world ending in fire and water he relaxed. He signed, “For one thing Severus Snape, the greasy glamour doesn’t suit you. Pick something less disagreeable. James Potter is, as Lily will say a useless todger at the moment. He bullies you because you react, treat him like you do your father’s taunts and ignore him.”

A young Severus stared at him in shock.

Severus turned to Remus, “As for you Remus, I’d focus more on school then pranks no matter what Potter and Black say. I’d find a way to eliminate Pettigrew before you live to regret it.

Now he had them, he laughed, “If you’ll take a seat I’ll explain why I know so much about you all. I’ll swear on Godric’s sword though Slytherin I am that every words I speak is the truth.”

Warily the three Hogwarts students joined him on the ground.

“First of to the most sceptical and rightly so I offer this as proof of my identity.” He handed his wand to the eleven-year-old version of himself.

Young Severus gaped at him, “This is mine.” He pulled out his wand as well and held them together, “See? Just the same.”

Severus nodded, “I was born the same day you were, we are in essence the same person. Now, study, study everything. You’re the son of Eileen Prince. You maybe a Halfblood but you’re son of a Proud and Ancient Wizarding Line. I have broken the greatest law of magic; I’ve come back in time to change it, to create a better world. To right the wrongs I have done. I can’t and won’t tell you everything, not unless I have to. I know each of you so well.” He pointed to Lucius, “Lucius Abraxus Malfoy, age fifteen, you’ll be sixteen in December. You’re currently betrothed to Andromeda Black, Queen of Slytherin. While you yourself are the Prince of Slytherin, some say it’s a perfect match but you’re not sure.”

He glanced at Remus, “Remus Lupin, no need to be shy, I know your secret and I won’t tell the whole school. I owe you better then that. You’re a bright boy, don’t let Black and Potter hold you back. You could go far. You should have been a Ravenclaw but you’re Gryffindor. You’re braver then you think if I were you I’ll spend more time with Lily Evans and Severus Snape. Now, you can’t tell anyone about me, especially not Dumbledore. Contrary to what he told you Lupin Hogwarts was not the only school you could get into. Also he’s lying about the nature of your furry little problem. I’ll explain that soon. Right now I’ve got to figure out how I’m going to do what I need to. If you stay friends with Potter and Black, Lupin you need to curb their bullying tendencies early before you find yourself unable to stop them. Severus, you can trust Lucius Malfoy with your life. He’s as loyal a snake as you’ll ever find. Watch out of a third year named Bellatrix, she’s crazy and violent. Her sisters are alright, I’d eve venture trustworthy for a Slytherin.”

Severus stood, “You can’t call me the same as you though,” he said holding out his hand for his wand, “Call me Prince, Aurelius Prince.” Copying Granger who wasn’t even born yet, he crafted four fake Galleons and using a variation of the Protean Charm he handed them the fake coins. “Don’t loose them or spend them, its vital you keep them with you. Go about as best you can as if you never saw me. You need to be friends.” He glanced at Lucius, “Petrovski. Graduates this next year, no one but the Slytherin prefects knows about him. His father is the ambassador from the Russian Ministry. Introduce him to Lupin. He’ll know what to do. Above all avoid Dumbledore. Trust him at your peril. I swear on Salazar’s necklace and Godric’s sword that he is dangerous.”

He spun on his heel making for the Entrance Gates, which lay just beyond the boundaries of the Anti-Apparition wards.

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