Smell of Submission | By : dweek Category: Harry Potter > Threesomes/Moresomes Views: 308949 -:- Recommendations : 10 -:- Currently Reading : 29 |
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A/N- So we are getting very close to the end of the first story in our little tale about a Dark Harry. Actually the story has been completely written as it only has one chapter left. That chapter should be ready to post on the 7th! I hope most of you have enjoyed the ride so far. After the last chaoter is posted I will be switching to a new story! It is going to be my first true try at a major AU fic, so I hope you all watch out for it! Anyway I would like to thank my awesome beta, Eclectic Pet, who force feeds my muse chcolate in order to get to her perform! She was the one who orginally sugested this story idea so everyone can thank her for its outcome!
chm01- It seems to be yes. You will find out more about the collar this chapter.
red demon- Glad you enjoyed it ;) Not much more to say at all...
d3mystic- Glad you liked the Tracy scene. Though we are nearing the end of the first book, it isn't exactly time ot have Hermione make taht long reflection. Maybe in the next book...
Emory- Honestly I think Ron is a very sueful guy, if he is used correctly. I am really starting to get tried of teh stories that makes him out to be the stupidest, bigest wanker in the world... so yes... he has a use in my story... *rant done*
anon- Thanks for pointing out that little type to me, I ahve fixed it and it now does say contract. I switched the tag not because harry will ever stop trying to get his Treasure back, but because he has a relationship with too many others as well. The ending is coming up, you may wish to stick it out ;)
markfl- Next chapter is here!
doubledamn- I am really glad you are enjoying the story all around :D As for the way this site updates, bealive me I wish there was a better way to follow things as well! If youa re interested I also post on my blog, which you can find on my profile. You can use fallow and have it send you e-mail alerts if you are interested.
nichole0887- Glad you are enjoying the whole story as well as the side chapters!
Harry watched from his vantage point under the stands. From this angle he could see the Quidditch field as well as the stands where many Slytherins sat, waiting to try out for the team or lend support to their friends. His eyes were locked on Nott and Astoria. They were why he was really here, though when he was caught he’d let most of the Slytherins think he’d been spying on the tryouts.
Only two of his Order knew about the plan. Ron was the one who came up with the idea of provoking Nott, and Blaise needed to make sure the plan worked properly. Everyone else that heard about what happened or was here to witness it needed to act as they normally would so no one would suspect this was all a setup.
“Nott, Theodore!” Draco called out to take his place in the tryouts. When he mounted his broom and took off Blaise landed in the stands.
Draco called out to his dark haired friend and there was an exchange between them that Harry couldn’t hear from his hiding place. Maybe they should have told Draco he thought, but smiled as the team captain soon left Blaise to his own devices.
Soon the smooth Slytherin was sitting next to the young blonde girl. He distracted her from the practice with small touches and what Harry was sure were charming words. By the time Nott was done with his tryout, Astoria didn’t even notice his return.
Harry watched as Nott grabbed her arm forcefully and pushed her behind him to start snarling at Blaise. Blaise just pointed back at the girl then motioned around him. Harry could hear the other Slytherins in the stands laugh.
Harry’s target turned on his slave and backhanded her hard across the face. That was Harry cue. He wasn’t about to let anything worse happen to the girl over their plan to save her. He mounted his broom and quickly shot towards the stands. As he got closer, he could hear Nott yelling.
“What have I told you about talking to people you little whore?” He screamed before raising his hand to hit her again. She backed up quickly, flush with embarrassment, and fear as she’d angered her Master.
In her rush to get away from the brute she tripped and nearly fell over the side of the stands, if Harry hadn’t been right on her he wasn’t sure how damaged the girl would be from the fall. He fumed that Nott would punish his girl in a way that would endanger her life, and was all the more resolved to take her from him.
“You don’t hit girls!” he snapped making sure the young blonde was firmly on her feet before glaring at Nott.
“Don’t touch her!” Nott growled pulling his wand.
Harry pulled his own pointing it back to the threat. “You don’t touch her!” Harry said taking her wrist in a firm and protective way. “What gives you the right to hit her?” He asked sounding as disgusted as he could while he looked around the stands. “Why did none of you stop him?”
“What are you doing here Potter?” Draco sneered as he landed nearby. “This is the Slytherin tryouts. Did you want on the team?” He asked with a smug voice.
“That doesn’t matter.” Harry said firmly, shooting Draco a glare before refocusing on Nott. “Why are all of you letting this bully hit a small girl?” He questions fiercely.
“She belongs to him Potter.” Blaise said smugly when no one else answered. “He can do with her what he wants.”
“You can’t own human beings.” Harry said as if he actually believed it.
“This is none of your business Potter, let go of my girl or we’ll make you hurt.” Nott threatened.
Astoria was shaking, unable to decide what to do. On one hand, she knew she was supposed to hate the arrogant Harry Potter, but on the other, his close form was making her feel safe. When her Master demanded her return, her instinct made her press into Harry’s chest.
“I don’t think she wants to go back to you.” Harry said rewarding the girl subtly by giving her a reassuring squeeze to her wrist.
“The slut doesn’t get a choice.” Nott snarled which made Blaise laugh.
“Actually she does. Unless you’ve put a true collar on her; which I don’t see one.” Blaise said sounding amused. “She seems quite eager to be claimed by Potter at the moment.”
“Collar?” Harry asked narrowing his eyes at the people around him.
“He can’t claim her! He’s a Gryffindor!” Nott snarled at the smooth Slytherin.
“I’ve never heard that rule.” Blaise said teasingly. “Though I doubt Potter has the balls to actually claim the girl.” He added so people would see him challenging both sides of the conflict.
Harry frowned and looked down at the girl in his arms. “If I… claim her… does that mean you lot won’t let him touch her?” He asked as if he didn’t understand these rules already.
Blaise laughed and looked around. “If you actually claim her, I’d swear to keep an eye on her when you couldn’t.” He said in a tone that was both challenging and doubtful.
“How do I do it?” Harry asked and what little control Nott had broke.
“NO!” He screamed casting a stinging jinx in Harry’s direction.
“Protego” Harry answered pulling Astoria closer to his chest so she would also be protected by his spell.
Blaise and those around them laughed as Harry so easily shrugged off Nott’s attack. “Well I’d say exactly like that.” The Chaser said with a smirk. “If you want her, she’s yours.” He sneered as if he still didn’t believe Harry would actually claim the fourth year in his arms.
“Fine, then we’re leaving.” Harry said picking his broom up from where he’d dropped in on the floor.
“I won’t stand for this!” Nott was still yelling as Crabbe and Goyle held him back from attacking Harry the muggle way.
“Potter.” Draco called as Harry moved so the girl could get on the broom in front of him.
“If I ever see you at one of my practices again; I now know exactly how to get to you.” he said eyeing Astoria. “Blaise can only hold back so many of the team.”
Harry didn’t answer as he flew both him and the small shaking blonde off the pitch. Once outside he landed and helped her to her feet. “Are you okay?” he asked in a more firm voice now that he didn’t have to act like his old self.
“Did it work?” Ron came running up before the girl could answer.
She looked between Harry and Ron in fear and confusion. “Have you really claimed me?” She asked sounding meek and unsure of herself.
“I’ll take that as a yes.” Ron said grinning before he looked around. “Better head inside.” He added after a moment.
“Yes.” Harry answered her and took her wrist again so they could follow the redhead in.
That night Harry gathered all those he considered top ranking members of his order to their meeting room. He hadn’t wished to be separated from Astoria, so even though she was new and not even a full member yet he had her sitting on a small stool beside his chair. He wanted her to feel protected, because that was what she needed most after her time with Nott.
Ron hadn’t left his side either, almost as if he wanted to make sure to protect the girl from Harry himself, to make sure his friend didn’t plan anything with her. It didn’t bother the dark haired Master, because he knew his friend was just worried and the slight form of the girl was pushing his friend’s protective instinct into overdrive.
Ron sat on a chair near the wall with his pet kneeling at his feet. Her cheek nuzzled against his knee as he ran fingers through her pale blonde locks.
Astoria had asked no more questions after they entered the school again and Harry felt it best to wait to give her answers until her sister could join them.
The door slammed open as a fuming Draco Malfoy entered the room and glared at Harry. “Why didn’t you tell me?!” He asked as his darker friend laughed behind him.
Harry glanced to the girl and smiled as she looked between the two old enemies with confusion on her face. “I needed you to act as if I hadn’t told you. The only ones who knew were Blaise and Ron.” Harry answered making allowances for the upset Slytherin.
Before the door had a chance to close Daphne came running into the room looking for her sister. She started to move to the smaller girl before she stopped and lowered her head to her Master. “Please?” Was all she asked.
“You may touch her Whip.” He said and smiled as she remembered herself and showed a good amount of humility when asking permission. She finished rushing to her sister and pulled her into a tight hug.
“Never do that again.” She snapped at the younger Greengrass. Seeing the sisters hugging one another, Draco’s fury fizzled and he sighed looking back to his Leader.
“It worked out I guess. That wanker Nott has no more girls to torture.” He said and smiled. “Though he’s going to be aiming for you this year on the Quidditch pitch.” Draco added sounding pleased.
“Let him try.” Harry said amused, then turned his attention to Daphne. “Take your place Whip.” he told her firmly so she would separate from her sister.
Daphne nodded and stepped back so that she could remove her clothes and kneel in her usual place to wait for the meeting to begin.
Ginny and Cho were the next to enter. Cho taking up her usual place, while Ginny kept her clothes on, and knelt off to the side, in a much more modest pose than she had used under him.
“Is that everyone?” Ron asked looking up from his pet to his sister. He was obviously glad she wore clothes, but was slightly confused by her placement in the room.
“Professor Snape isn’t joining us tonight, but I was hoping we should get at least one more.” Harry said looking to the door with a frown.
“I told her about the meeting Sir.” Ginny said from her position. The words made Ron frown all the more.
“Why are you over there?” He asked suddenly looking at his sister.
Ginny frowned at the question and blushed a little at being singled out in front of everyone like this. “My new Master wished me to attend the meeting and report back to him.” She told her brother simply.
Draco couldn’t help but smile when he realized the annoying Weasley didn’t know the new status of his sister. “Well at least Severus will know what is going on.” He said before the redhead could ask.
“SNAPE?!” Ron blew up getting to his feet and throwing his hands in the air. “What the bloody hell Harry?” he asked turning on his friend.
“It wasn’t my place to tell you Ron.” Harry said frowning at his friend. “And it’s not my place to explain. If you want to know more, you can wait till after the meeting and talk to your…” He stopped as the door opened and a flushing Hermione entered the room.
She fingered the necklace nervously as she looked around at all those gathered. “Sorry I’m late.” She said before looking at Harry with a strange sort of frown on her lips. “I couldn’t get away.”
“We haven’t started yet.” Harry said coldly as he tried to figure out the mix of desires that were running though her in that moment. It was making him nauseous to focus on her so he turned away.
Hermione stood apart from everyone in the room, looking both uncomfortable and curious as the meeting started. She glanced between Harry and Astoria with a tight frown.
“As some of you may have noticed Astoria has joined us today.” Harry said motioning towards the younger girl. “Under Slytherin tradition I have claimed her from Nott and now she’s under my protection.” He continued looking around the room. “I hope the two of you are pleased with this outcome?” he asked focusing on Tracey and Daphne now.
“Yes Master.” They said in unison before Daphne looked to Tracey in a bit of confusion.
“Vixen, I’ll need a contract for her. One that can be reevaluated on her fifteenth birthday.” He said turning to his pet fox.
Astoria frowned around the room. She seemed to be becoming more confused as Harry spoke.
“What would you like the contract to say Master?” Tracey asked and gave the girl an encouraging smile.
Harry frowned in thought as he looked down at the new girl. “The three of you will stay after the main meeting to discuss that.” He said finally. “Whip, maybe you should explain to your sister who we are.” He added and smiled at Daphne. “And what she’s doing here.”
As Daphne explained the Order of the Bound to her sister, and the request she’d made to keep her sister safe, Harry watched the bushy haired girl in the corner. She seemed more comfortable when she looked at him, Ron, and even Ginny than she did when she was focusing on any of the Slytherins.
Severus had told him little about the necklace she wore. He only mentioned that it was up to her to save herself from its power. Harry frowned at that, it was his job to protect his Treasure; she shouldn’t have to do things alone.
Once Daphne was done with her explanation, Harry looked down at the young girl. “It’s honestly your choice to join or not, but if you don’t I’ll have to at least get a vow of secrecy from you. Also you will not be under my protection if you don’t join this Order.” He told her simply.
“You saved my life Master.” Astoria said in a soft voice. “I serve at your will.”
The next day was a Monday. Everyone in the school seemed to already know what happened at the Slytherin practice, and that was the way Harry seemed to want it. When he entered, the Great Hall Astoria walked over to him and bowed her head before following him over to the Gryffindor table.
Hermione watched this from her place next to Cormac with as much curiosity as everyone else in the hall had. “So I guess it’s true.” Her Master said sounding more amused than anything. “He seems to like them young.”
She knew she should feel a flare of anger or annoyance for the comment, but she couldn’t muster any protective emotions for her former friend. It was getting worse, she realized as she thought back to what Snape had told her a week before.
“Those are magical collars. A Wizard’s Collar is much more powerful.” He had told her with a frown. “A Wizard’s Collar is a binding contract between two people. Where as a magical collar; is more for training and entertainment purposes. You are now wearing a Wizard’s Collar.”
“What does that mean?” She asked as she looked down at the beautiful gift Cormac had given her.
“They can have several powers attached to them.” The professor said with a deep frown as she could see the wheels turning in his head. “Did you say he gave it to you for your birthday?” he asked suddenly as if that was in any way an answer to her question.
Hermione rolled her eyes. “Yes.” She told him simply so he would keep talking.
“Before or after he put it on you?” He asked which made her roll her eyes.
“How can someone give you a gift after they have put it on you? It was wrapped in a box and he handed it to me and told me it was my birthday present. Why?” She asked in a huff, wanting answers.
“It means there’s a chance to remove it without having to kill him.” Snape said rubbing his chin.
“Why would I want to remove it?” She asked clearly confused with the idea.
This question seemed to stun the Professor for a moment. “Tell me Miss Granger, how are your parents?” He asked almost sounding curious.
She threw her hands in the air as he asked another weird question that had no place in the conversation. “Why would I care?” She countered and he smiled.
“Think on that for a moment Miss Granger, why would you care?” He asked her and waited for her mind to make the connection.
“The collar is making me not care…”
He’d gone on to explain that the collar would take away all feelings she had for anyone but her Master. It would start with the people she cared about the most and end with herself. Soon she wouldn’t care for anything but him, and she would go so far as to put his happiness over her own health.
“You're going to support me at my tryouts this afternoon.” Her Master told her as he patted her knee. She smiled at him and nodded.
“If I make the team I think we’ll celebrate.” He added as he let his hand slip up her inner thigh.
She wanted him; she could feel herself become damp with her need for him. If he were to ask her to ride him in that very moment she was unsure of what she’d say. She pressed back against the feeling, knowing it was the collar and not her real emotions, but her knees still spread, giving him an opportunity to touch her more intimately if he wished.
“I’m not sure how much you’ll learn today while you think about what I’ll do to you tonight.” He whispered against her neck making her whimper in need.
Suddenly there was a crash further down the table that woke her from the lust daze her Master had put her in. She watched as the small blonde Slytherin tried to clean up a pitcher of pumpkin juice she seemed to have accidentally poured in Harry’s lap.
It seemed like an odd mistake for the girl to make.
Cormac drew a kiss from her before he flew off to take his turn as Keeper. She watched as he was actually doing a good job at the position, better than the rest had done at least. She knew if she didn’t get out of the collar now it would never happen, after he ravaged her that night she’d be his forever.
She wouldn't have the will to achieve the act of defiance the first stage of her release required. Professor Snape had told her exactly how to be free of her Master, but the process scared her more than she would like to admit.
She could at least start the process even if she didn’t have the will to finish it. With soft-spoken words and a flick of her wand she be-fumbled Cormac, making him lose track of the ball for the rest of his turn. Before he could come back to her angry, she left the pitch and headed to her next task.
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