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Under Moon and Sun	By : whitewitchdark Category: Harry Potter > Slash - Male/Male > Harry/Draco Views: 2295 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0
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Ok, I lied�

The next chapter isn�t ready yet, but I figured I�d post
review responses separately because of the length of the next chapter. As it is, it might have to be split into 2
parts anyway. It will go up la
ton
tonight I hope. Thank you to everyone
who reviewed. It�s nice to know that
people are enjoying the story.

Xylodemon: This is wonderful so far! Keep it
up!

J

WhiteWitchDark: Thank you.
I�m glad you think so.

Kat: Love
the beginning so far � can�t wait to see were you go
with this!

WhiteWitchDark: I liked the beginning too!
Bet you thought the match was Gryffindor V Slytherin at first as well?

/p>

FainpatheElanesse: oooooh! this story looks really promising! your
viewpoint on Gryffindor/Slytherin rivalry is very interesting, and one i ha> have thought about - how come every Slytherin is
automatically evil and every Gryffindor automatically a hero? surely there must be shades of grey? Ok, so i'm babbling now - back to the review - i
like your characterisation, Draco seems calmer and more likeable than usual
(although i am particular to bastard!Draco :P) and
Harry's feelings of being torn between who he is and who people feel he should
be. Keep up the good work, hope you update soon!

WhiteWitchDark: Thanks. I always thought the entire Evil Slytherin
thing was a bit weird. And the eternal
question; what house was Wormtail in? I
remember reading a skit on Harry Potter
and the Sorcerer�s Stone called Torg
Potter and the Sorcerer�s Nuts. In
it, all the evil people were put into one house for easier book-keeping� If you
want a look at it, the address is http://sluggy.com/daily.php?date=020902
The sequel was called Torg Potter and the Chamber of Secretions

Sak: The partnership and
friendship between Harry and Draco is interesting. Especially that now you have
revealed they are on the same side, but on neither of the ones that have drawn
the lines of battle. This is a surprising turn of events, but one that would
prove well-worth exploring. I look forward to more.

WhiteWitchDark: The Order
always seems to be watching and waiting rather then doing. The most active thing they�ve done so far is
protect Harry (badly). Harry isn�t the
kind of person to sit around and do nothing.
Draco isn�t either. I�ve always
got the impression that he never really agreed isagisagreed with his father and
Voldemort. It was more of a case that he
was never asked. His attitude has also
changed since the first book. He appears
to be targeting people he doesn�t like now rather then anyone who doesn�t met
his fathers standards. I thought this
was a good way out for both of them�

Br'>Briel: I really liked your
fic and don't really have anything constructive to say. Just thought I'd let
you know that I'm reading. I'm now off to stalk you for an update list. Wish me
luck!

WhiteWitchDark: Glad
you�re enjoying it. As for an update
list� I don�t really have anything like
that. The only thing I could suggest is
joining the Yahoo! Group as I send out emails when I update a story. pan>pan>I guess I could email you every time I update
if you want me to�

Sak: I did not expect
any of the developments with Neville, but it was interesting. I cannot wait to
find out what Hermione has decided and if Ron will be approached.

WhiteWitchDark: Interesting? Damn, I was aiming for hot� No one was meant
to see it coming, although I did mention Harry�s sexual position in the first
chapter. Harry can�t afford to care for
anyone, but he is a teenaged boy. They�re
not known for practising abstinence. Hermione
had decirealrealized (depending if you like the character or not) that she is missing
something in her life. As for whether she
joins the GF or not� Nope, not telling! Ron will be asked� eventually, but there will be
a few surprises first.

Keikokin: Poor Draco, I don't think
he's going to be too happy when he finds out about Harry's latest conquest.
This casual sex may hurt the team. I question his tactics. Of course we could
match him up with Blaise now eh? Thus leaving Harry &
Draco free to be together. Post soon! kk

WhiteWitchDark: At this
point, Draco really couldn�t care to be honest.
The casual sex might be a problem in later chapters, you�re right, but
in Harry�s defence he wasn�t expecting Neville to go for it. He was a little too surprised to think it
out. Who�s tactics? Neville�s or Harry�s? Sorry, Blaise is taken; he ends up with �
someone else. That bit I have planned. I made the point that there would be multiple
pairing in this fic, because there will be.
Neville and Harry aren�t the only surprise coming along. The only guaranteed couple is Draco and Harry
and if I had of thought it out, I would have out this in the main folder to
keep the paring a surprise�
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