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Look Before You Leap	By : LadyFlame Category: Harry Potter > Slash - Male/Male > Harry/Draco Views: 16678 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0
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LOOK BEFORE YOU LEAP

BY LADY FLAME
AUTHOR'S NOTE: for the WARNING, and DISCLAIMER, please see chapter one. Okay, so posting part of a story is not something I usually do, but this is the first page of Chapter 4, and the reason I am posting this is due to the length of time between writing Ch3 & Ch4. I am feeling the need to get someone else's opinion on whether Ch4 flows properly on from Ch3 in feel & tone, so I just need you guys to read it through, and give me a honest opinion whether the two mesh or not, pointing out bits that don't feel right, etc.

FIRST PUBLISHED: August 2006
CHAPTER FOUR TEASER
Draco started to suck and nibble gently at Harry's earlobe, causing Harry to moan and gasp out, "Draco... please!! Don't tease me like this!!" Draco pulled back slightly, so that he could look into Harry's passion dazed eyes, "Believe me Harry, I've never been more serious in my whole life." Then he swooped his head back down, to capture Harry's mouth in a passionate kiss.
Draco licked at Harry's lips until he parted them with a moan, then he thrust his tongue into Harry's mouth, flicking it against the roof of his mouth. Engaging Harry's tongue in a battle of passionate parries and thrusts, until both teens were breathless and flushed with desire.
With reluctance Draco pulled away from Harry's delicious mouth, and started to nibble along Harry's jaw, then Draco trailed kisses and licks down the column of Harry's neck, stopping to suck on the pulse point, and leaving a slightly red mark.
Reaching Harry's torso, Draco first explored along Harry's collarbones through his open shirt collar, placing more nibbling kisses along each length, from shoulder to the hollow of his throat. Then Draco pulled back slightly, and started to open the buttons of Harry's shirt, placing a kiss on each bit of newly exposed skin.
As Draco moved further down Harry's chest, he felt ecstatic at the little moans and whimpers he was drawing out of 'The Boy Who Lived', and couldn't suppress a shudder of excitement. He was doing something that probably Voldemort would never do, and that was having Harry Potter laid out beneath him, totally at Draco's mercy, and yet willingly so... with that thought Draco had a sudden twinge of uncertainty and self doubt... Harry was a willing participant, wasn't he?!
Looking up into Harry's wide vunerable green eyes, his pupils large, Draco asked, "Tell me Harry, do you want this?! Yes, or No?! Cause, I really want to keep kissing you!!" Harry gave a slow blink, he'd never felt this way with another person, and he wanted more!! And, even more surprisingly, he definitely wanted to feel it with Draco!!
As Harry made his decision; Draco brushed his thumbs across Harry's nipples, making Harry cry out, "Oh Merlin, Draco... Yes!! Kiss me, touch me, just don't stop, don't leave me alone, please..."
Draco's heart skipped a beat, and then beat twice as fast as normal, as if to make up for that fact. His cock, hot and hard between his legs, throbbing insistently to be satisfied, but Draco wanted to savor this moment, even if this never happened again, Draco wanted to be able to say to himself, that he'd touched and tasted every part of Harry Potter. "Harry!!" The name a passionate moan on his lips, as Draco replaced his hands on Harry's nipples with his mouth.
Draco pointed his tongue, and circled Harry's nipple with its moist tip, spiralling it around until he got to the now taut nub in the centre. Then Draco laved it with the flat of his tongue, before sucking it into his mouth. Pulling his head back, Draco let the nub slip back out of his mouth, grazing it with his teeth as it went.
Leaving Harry's nipples for the time being, Draco continued to trail kisses down Harry's flat stomach. Teasingly thrusting his tongue into Harry's bellybutton, Draco's chin brushed against the very tip of Harry's cock. The bead of pre-come that had pooled there, smeared against pale flesh, like some obscene buttercup, to tell if Draco liked, not butter, but cock.
But, what was the answer?! Draco gently lifted Harry's rigid cock off his belly, being careful not to graze the torn flesh. Draco had never actually done this before, though he had had it done to him once, and what a revelation that had been. But to suck another man's cock, to suck Harry's cock, that was another thing entirely, for if he enjoyed this, there would be no going back!!
Draco tentatively dipped the tip of his tongue into the slit at the top of Harry's cock, where another bead of pre-come had formed. Harry sucked in a deep breath and held it, knowing that this was a turning point for both of them.
Draco closed his eyes and moaned, as Harry's salty essence flowed across his taste buds. Harry released his trapped breath with a loud grunt, when Draco sucked the head of Harry's cock into his mouth to get more of the flavour, and accidentally caught the edge of Harry's wound with one of his lower canine teeth. Draco pulled away contrite, "Oh Merlin, I'm so sorry, I kind of got carried away..."
So, does this mean I don't get that blowjob?" Harry blinked at himself, where the hell had that come from, he rolled his eyes, "Sorry Draco, did that just sound as stupid as I think it did... sometimes I really should think before I say certain things." Draco stared at Harry for a moment, and then burst out laughing, which in turn made Harry grin... Draco actually had a very nice laugh. "Maybe we should start over again, Draco."
"Yes, I think the two of us definitely need to start over," Draco sat back on his heels, and held his hand out to Harry, "Hello, my name's Draco Malfoy, how you do." Harry laughed, "Harry Potter pleased to meet you." Then he shook Draco's hand, "and in case you hadn't noticed; which since I'm lay virtually naked on your bed, it would be difficult to miss; my cock's still hard..." Harry blushed slightly, "You know Draco, I think I might kinda get off on a bit of pain."
On hearing this, Draco's head was filled with images of Harry lay across his lap, whilst Draco spanked his arse red, and then his subconscious flipped the vision around, so it was Draco across Harry's knee. Either way it was a vision Draco wanted to come true. Maybe if Draco made this really good for Harry, then this wouldn't be a one-off thing, maybe they could explore all kinds of stuff together.
Draco settled himself back over Harry, close enough to feel body heat, but not actually touching. Supporting himself on one arm, Draco used the other hand to brush his thumb across Harry's lower lip, which was slightly swollen from Harry biting it earlier, and the kisses that they had shared. "You know Harry, I love the way that you say my name."
Draco's finger slid up the line of Harry's jaw, and down his neck over his pulse point. As Draco's finger trailed along each collarbone, Harry realised that Draco was following the path that his mouth had taken earlier. The realisation made Harry gasp, as Draco outlined his nipples, and moved down to dip into his bellybutton.,/p>
"I think we were right about here." On 'here' Draco swiped his finger up the trail of pre-come which had dribbled down Harry's cock. Grazing the wound deliberately, Draco was relieved when all the reaction he got was a shudder, and more pre-come oozing out of Harry's tip. Bringing his finger to his lips, Draco licked it clean, "You taste delicious!!" Then Draco kissed Harry deeply, letting him taste himself on his tongue.
Breaking the kiss Draco moved back, so that he was once again face-to-face with Harry's cock, but that left him precariously positioned on the edge of the bed, so Draco slid onto his knees on the bedside rug. Draco gently nudged Harry's knees further apart, and then he pressed gentle kisses along Harry's wound from top to bottom.
Harry's feet slid off the edge of the bed, and found their way over Draco's shoulders, as he let himself be taken over by the sensations Draco was causing.
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Like I said, this is only the first page of Chapter 4, but I'd really appreciate any input that people may have, either by review or email.
EDIT: Heh, you lucky folk, I thought that I'd posted the original one page teaser I published on the WWoMB Harry Potter Slash email list in August '06, but in actual fact I've also posted the second page which I wrote in October '06 too!! But even so this chapter is still only about half way complete, maybe not even that, so there's definitely more to come!!
Love Cara (aka) Lady Flame

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Look Before You Leap

LOOK BEFORE YOU LEAPBY LADY FLAME

CHAPTER FOUR TEASER

LOOK BEFORE YOU LEAP

BY LADY FLAME