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Mistake of the Century

By: Edelweiss
folder Harry Potter › Threesomes/Moresomes
Rating: Adult ++
Chapters: 6
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Disclaimer: I do not own Harry Potter, nor any of the characters from the books or movies. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
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Four...

AN; Characters belong to J.K. Rowling. I\'m just putting them in situations that they otherwise would not find themselves in... hehehe

Again, readers of Trial and Error....I will be ripping apart and putting that story back together sometime within the next month, so keep your eyes open. Those of you who haven\'t read it, you\'re welcome to look, but be warned that the words and grammar got jumbled up a bit for some reason and chapter 13 (or was it 12?) will NOT have the letter sent from Voldie to Harry. I wrote that at 4 in the morning and wasn\'t thinking clearly. Also, if you do read it, leave reviews and let me know what you like/don\'t like about it. I\'m going to take away the...things...Severus said to Hermione and save them for later, too.

On to story at hand...

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Four....

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When Bill and Charlie came back from Diagon Alley with the twins in tow, the first thing they noticed was a magnificent creature curling her tongue around a chocolate covered spoon. They stopped in their tracks, bags from various stores still in their hands, and watched as Hermione licked the last little morsel of sugary cake off of the spoon. Her eyes were closed and she really seemed to be enjoying it. Once she finished, she looked up, startled, at the men watching her. Blushing deeply, she got up and put her plate and spoon in the kitchen, very aware of their eyes following her every movement. The twins came up from behind Bill and Charlie, wondering what had captivated them so much. When they noticed Hermione (for the first time since they had been there), their eyes got wide and their mouths dropped below their chins.

Trying to ignore the fisheyed and glaze eyed men, Hermione walked back out to the living area where Ron and Harry were finishing up yet another game of chess. \"Check mate\", Rons\' voice was getting a bit cocky. Harry had always had trouble beating the other wizard, but that didn\'t keep him from trying. \"Another game then, Ron?\" he asked, while the pieces started making their way back onto the board. Hermione settled in to watch the boys play another game, trying not to think to hard on the way she was being looked at by every man in the house.

Molly came into the kitchen and took the packages away from the statues that were her sons, noticing the attention their eyes were giving Hermione. Sighing, she shook her head and took the supplies into the kitchen to prepare for the party they were going to have that night, but not until she shooed the men up stairs to \"get some rest\". They had grudgingly obeyed, but turned their necks around to watch Hermione as they climbed the stairs.

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After a couple more hours, Molly served lunch. Hermione asked if it would be alright if she ate upstairs. Harry and Ron went with her to Ginny\'s room and Hermione closed and warded the door behind them. The boys looked at her curiously. She ignored the looks and started eating her food. Harry and Ron followed suit. The next several minutes passed in silence, Hermione blushing every once in a while and the other two glancing back at the door, wondering why she had warded it. Ron finally decided to voice his thoughts. Hermione sighed and closed her eyes, then told them how the other men had been looking at her. She left out Arthur. She didn\'t want to freak Ron out any more than she already had. As it was, they both looked at her skeptically. Ron spoke up; \"Uh, Hermione...are you sure you\'re not...you know, imagining it?\"

\"And WHY would I be imagining it, Ron Weasley?\"

\"Well, er...after um, last night... well... maybe you thought that....I mean, maybe THEY ...uh, are attracted to you, too?\"

Wrong move. In fact, a fatal mistake if Hermione had been a Death Eater.

\"Ronald Weasley! You think I am so conceited that I believe any man who looks at me wants me?!\"

\"Uh, no, \'Mione, I meant to say...\"

\"Or is it I\'m just too ugly to attract that type of attention and you think it\'s just wishful thinking?!\"

Harry was staying out of this one. Indeed, he was backing up as far as he could go.

\"No! What I mean is you...\"

\"Bugger off, Ron! I don\'t want to hear what you have to say. You were never attracted to me. You just wanted some stimulation for your wanking! I see that now.\" Her voice had been loud, but had quieted into a deadly whisper. She was looking straight into Ron\'s eyes, her own narrowed and almost black with rage. Coming in so her nose was almost touching his, she hissed, \"Get. Out. Now.\" Ron, not wanting to lose any of his body parts to the angry witch jump up and out of the room faster than he had earlier that morning. This time though, Harry wasn\'t threatened.

He stiffened when her eyes turned to him, expecting to be screamed at or hexed. Instead, Hermione ran over to him and buried her head in his shoulder, sobbing. He awkwardly patted her head in what he hoped was a comforting way. In all honesty, he was scared. What she had said made sense, after all. He and Ron had wanted some stimulation from her and now that they have had it, she was back to being their know-it-all friend. What HAD they been thinking last night? Other than Rons\' little crush on her, neither of them had been really attracted to her until yesterday. And now, well, they weren\'t. While he contemplated, Hermiones\' crying slowed and she pulled herself away from him, wiping her eyes with the back of her hand. \"I-I\'m sorry, Harry. I don\'t know what\'s come over me.\" She bit her lower lip and sniffled. Harry looked a little uncomfortable and had no idea what to say to that. \"Er, it\'s alright Hermione. Don\'t mind Ron. He\'s just being a git.\" He looked at her, hoping his words would not make her angry at him, too. She smiled and he relaxed. \"Thanks, Harry. You are a good friend.\" With that, she kissed him chastely on his cheek and walked over to her trunk. Opening it up, she pulled out a glass bottle. Harry\'s eyes opened in shock. \"Hermione! Where did you get that?\" She grinned as she placed the bottle on her nightstand and conjured up a glass. \"I nicked it from my dads\' cupboard right before I left. Good old Muggle Puerto Rican Rum!\" Laughing at Harrys\' face, she opened the bottle and poured a shots worth into the glass. \"Would you like some, Harry?\" He shook his head. Molly was right. Dumbledore would not be pleased if had access to alcoholic beverages this close to the end of the war. Not to mention, anything more than a single butterbeer made him giddy... he shuddered at the thought of what rum would do to him. Hermione shrugged her shoulders and downed the glass in two seconds, hoping it would somehow clear her moggled mind. After another shot, she put the bottle back in her trunk and smiled at Harry. \"Well, shall we?\" She held out her arm and made towards the door. He nodded and followed her downstairs, slightly worried about her behaivor.

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When they reached the bottom of the stairs, they almost ran into Bill and Charlie who had apparently been waiting for them...or at least Hermione. Charlie grabbed her arm and pulled her to the side. Bill looked over his shoulder at his mum who was cooking in the kitchen and then at Harry. He put a finger to his lips and gave a meaningful look to Harry, who raised his eyebrow in confusion. Then, without warning, the two men and Hermione disappeared with a loud crack. Harry stared dumbfounded at the spot where his friend was just standing. Molly rushed to his side. \"Who was that, dear? Did Hermione go somewhere? Or was it Bill and Charlie? They have been kind of restless since they got home.\" She looked at Harry expectantly. \"Um..well...they just left. With Hermione..\" he wasn\'t sure if he should have said that or not. By the shocked and worried expression on Molly\'s face, he guessed he shouldn\'t have said it. But then, he was worried, too. Maybe she HAD seen them looking at her the way he and Ron....oh shit. Harry\'s face contorted in anger and worry and he growled under his breath \"They had BETTER not lay a FINGER on her, or I sware I\'ll...\" he was interupted by Molly\'s voice, which was mirroring his own words, only louder. MUCH louder. Ron came into the kitchen confused. \"What happened? Harry, is Hermione still mad at me? Where is she?\" Harry told Ron what had just happened. Ron blanched. \"You don\'t reckon what she said earlier was true, do you?\" he asked, hoping for a negative response. Harry just glared back at him with a silent answer. Molly, meanwhile, was shouting obscenities Harry and Ron had never heard come out of her mouth. Apparently, Hermione was like a daughter to her, and she had recognised the looks on her sons\' faces.

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Hermione landed on her feet, stumbling only slightly. She looked up at Bill and Charlie, who were eyeing her like a lion eyes his prey. All of a sudden, she found that thought rather arousing. She felt a familiar yet unusual tingling sensation in her nether region. Her body was responding fast to the hungry faces watching her. Charlie smiled at her and took her hands in his. \"Come, my little princess,\" he purred. \"We have much to show you.\" He led a trembling Hermione over to a queen sized bed with a blue comforter and sat down on it, facing her. Bill came up behind her and pulled her hair away from her neck, kissing the back of it softly. Hermione shivered at the touch and whimpered slightly when he stopped. Charlie pulled her down onto his lap so that she was stradling his legs with her knees resting on the bed. She could feel his erection through the material of his summer robes and unconsciously wiggled against it. He let out a quiet moan before crushing his lips against hers. Caught off guard, Hermione opened her eyes wide in shock and let out a gasp. Then, as Charlie ran his tonuge lightly over her bottom lip, she let her eyelids fall and opened her mouth to him. Bill returned to her neck and nipped at her shoulders, causing her to squirm in pain and pleasure. Smiling against her mouth, Charlie let go of her wrists and slid his hands under her blouse. When he got to her breasts, he growled at the material covering them. Hermione broke the kiss with a grin and pulled her shirt off before reaching behind her back and unclasping the bra. Bill, having been interupted from his task, decided to help his brother on the front. With his hands sliding up and down her back, Bill leaned over her and licked her throat, watching the rise and fall of her breasts out of the corner of his eyes. Charlie wasted no time capturing one breast in his mouth and his hand teased the nipple of the other one. Bill moved up her neck and started sucking on her earlobe. Hermione giggled at the sensation and her arms went up behind her to stroke the older man\'s head, her body arching in the process giving Charlie an even better view of her milky breasts. Bill let go of her earlobe and kissed her cheek lightly a few times before pressing his lips against hers. She moaned and the vibrations made his lips tingle. He bit her lower lip and then ran his tongue across it, so as to ease the pain and ask for entrance. Hermione parted her lips slowly, allowing him to slip his tongue into her mouth. She had never had such a passionate kiss before. It was all she could do to not scream in pleasure. Her tongue soon passed Bills\' as it went to explore his mouth. She ran it along his teeth and then, as he deepened the kiss, she let it slide across his palat, making him shiver in delight. Hermione smirked to herself. She had no idea she could do that to a man.

Charlie\'s attentions were getting more advanced. He circled her hard nipple with his tongue and then lightly blew on it, causing the flesh around the areola to goosebump. He chuckled at the reaction and repeated the action on her other nipple. Hermione\'s breath came out in small gasps as her mouth was being invaded by Bills\' tongue. Charlie bucked his hips against Hermione without warning, his erection making good contact with her mound under her shorts. She pulled back from the kiss and looked into Charlies\' sparkling eyes. \"You like that, don\'t you.\" It was said as more of a statement than a question, but Hermione nodded her head furiously. Laughing, Charlie bucked up again. Bill took the opportunity to stand upright and shed his shirt, then leaned back down into Hermione again, his lips finding hers instantly. A loud disturbance from the other room caused the three to whip their heads around, stopping all of the former actions. They waited to see who or what would come into the room and soon two identical figures sauntered into view.

\"Oy, why didn\'t you tell us what was going on?\"

\"Yeah, you just wanted her for yourselves, did ya?\"

\"You would think you could have found a better place than this-\"

\"-piece of crap you call a flat.\"

Both twins were glaring at their older brothers with their arms crossed over their chests.

Charlie, not bothering to hide what he had been doing, said in a calm, smooth voice, \"Well then, where would YOU have taken her?\" There was a challenge in his eyes that disappeared at the gleam in the twins\' eyes.

\"We\'ll show you\", they said together, mischievous grins on each face.

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Thank you to all of my reviewers!!!


Narcissa Black- Draco will play a role in this story, but not quite the one you are thinking. I\'ve decided that, even though the list is incomplete and a little odd (I have to get HAGRID in this somehow!!) I will stick to the main challenge. He\'ll get some action. Don\'t worry. ;-D Thanks for your reviews!

cccmistiq- thank you again for your nice review. I\'m glad you like surprises. There are a few things you will figure out, however. Some will be quite glaring...

Pastel- I believe this chapter answered one of your questions. Bill, Charlie, and apparently the twins as well, will get some action next chapter. And to clarify, they didn\'t actually SHAG her... sorry, but Hermione will NOT lose her virginity to either of those boys while I\'m in charge! :-D

Slave4Severus- first off, LOVE the handle. To be a save to Severus... ::shivers:: that would be....ooohhhhh.... Anyway, here is the 4th potato. Hope you liked it. There does seem to be a certain Slytherin who\'s good at making potions, huh? But I won\'t get your hopes up or give anything else away. BTW, you were number 6! I\'m having trouble keeping up with my promise!! I already have 19 reviews. That means I\'ll have to post the next chapter tomorrow!! (or sooner) :-D

x-tina- I\'m glad you like my characters. Hermione gets a bit ooc at times (you\'ll figure out when exactly that is if you haven\'t already) and of course the boys are all acting oddly around her...

Miari- I am glad you approve. I won\'t say who sent the potion yet. It may have been Snape, as others are guessing, but again, I will not get anyone\'s hopes up. :-D I was thining about doing a trio with Molly for that very reason. I\'m not sure. You\'ll find out my decision in either chapter 5 or 6.

petalsoft- you share your thoughts with another reviewer (pastel) and yes, they do seem to cool off once they\'ve had their way with her. four red heads is enough, right? ;-D Next chapter will come soon, promise!




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