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To Galina : There is no possibility to reply to the reviewers and so it's hard to reply without breaking the rules of AFF. I hope I will not get in trouble for answering you here. I don't think you will get happy soon with my fic and I don't want you to get a heart attack because you hate how the characters react. Everything you critic I can understand but it is part of the development of the story and it will take some time for Hermione to accept her place in the clan and support the other subs to express their wishes and problems. I can understand that it is very annoying to not being able to see the development because I need so much time to upload the chapters. It would be much better to be able to read the full story in one go. Then you would see the slow development and not just be annoyed by the scenes I have to put in to even show the problems at all. I don't know how to explain it. I can only suggest for you to stop reading and to wait if I ever will be able to upload all the chapters and complete the story. Then you could maybe enjoy reading it. At the slow pace I upload at the moment I fear it won't be any enjoyment for you. It will take several more chapters for Hermione to really work on the situation of the subs.

Chapter 45 – Learning to Play with Draco

Hermione was feeling for Draco. She had hardly seen him afraid and right now he was. Everything in him rebelled against having sex with Tara so closely after their dispute. His embarrassment from being punished in front of Tara was overwhelming Hermione's scenting ability.

Relieved, Hermione realized that Hagen didn't plan to make Draco take Tara. She had never seen a female dominant in any kind of sexual interactions except for Amaris kissing Morgan. Hermione looked on, fascinated by the scene in front of her.

That was the reason why she didn't realize more and more people had gathered around them and one man sat down beside her. Only when his hand rested on her thigh did she pull her eyes away from Draco and look at the black haired man.

“Hey, pup, remember me?”

It didn't take Hermione long to remember the guy who had fetched her from Voldemort with Fenrir. “Yes.” She looked unsure at him as she remembered him to be very dominant, but back then everyone would have seemed very dominant to her. The man was looking smug, obviously knowing what an effect he had on women or subs. His face was angular and very manly. Hermione guessed he was around thirty three or maybe thirty five. His eyes were blue and seemed to sparkle. His chin was covered with stubble.

“Haven't been around lately. I had to help out in the Toren Clan. Their blacksmith got injured and they needed some help. I heard you adjusted well. Never would I have guessed Alpha Fenrir would ever fall for a sub.”

Okay, the guy seemed to be a talkative one and his hand hadn't wandered until now. His big, rough hand was resting at the same spot, but Hermione could feel that he had the leather-like, rough hands of someone who worked hard. His whole body seemed to contain only muscles, but he looked athletic and not bulgy.

“And your name is?”

“Oh, sorry, pup,” the man said. “I'm Darren, third warrior rank.”

Hermione rolled her eyes. As if that was of any relevance to her. She was distracted by Tara's heavy choking. Frightened that Hagen was not releasing Tara, Hermione looked on, scared by the display in front of her, having no eyes for Darren anymore.

It got worse when Hagen's eyes rested on her. Would he want her to participate? The man was a scary dominant, still hot blooded, but the fear overtook Hermione's desire this time. When he chuckled loudly, Hermione was pulled out of her stupor when he made clear she was off limits, allowing her to relax a bit.

Hagen addressed Darren to get Neville ready, and Hermione had to worry for him now. Darren darted after a fleeing Neville and pinned him down while chuckling. He spoke something in Neville's ear and the boy stopped his struggles.

Neville was quickly undressed by Darren. He was shivering, but Hermione could still smell arousal coming from him and he was half hard. Darren would play with him until Hagen called for him.

Hermione's eyes were pulled away from Neville when she heard Draco protesting. Tara had not only swallowed his member but now was trying to penetrate Draco with her fingers. That was obviously enough for Draco.

Hagen laughed. “Okay, okay, sweet one.” He pulled Draco away from Tara, who licked her lips mockingly while looking at Draco. “Lay back on the table and spread your legs,” Hagen commanded in Tara's direction.

“I still need someone to get you ready, sweetie, so who will be the lucky one?” Hagen looked over at Hermione again. “Want to make sure I don't split your friend into two halves when I take him, pup?”

Hermione could feel the wave of desire coming from Draco by this suggestion and immediately she reacted to it by getting wet.

“Oh fuck, you two are really some horny shits,” Hagen said, groaning down his desire.

Hermione gave Hagen an unsure look after his comment, but the man merely grinned at her. “What are you waiting for, pup? Come over and play with your little friend as much as you want.”

“I thought I was off limits?” Hermione asked, puzzled.

“Off limits to play with, if it is against your explicit wishes. So if you wish to play with your friend here, it's no problem.”

Hermione stood up to go over to Draco, who still had hardly any room to move because Hagen was pressing him close to his chest. “All yours, pup,” Hagen said, amused, and pushed Draco's groin forward by his hip pressing against Draco's bum.

Hermione saw Draco's member jerk and swell even more.

“God, you two are sending pheromones off that make my balls blue,” Hagen growled huskily while nibbling at Draco's shoulder.

Hermione knelt in front of Draco and gently took his balls in hand. That was all it took for Draco to come in combination from the little bites Hagen was giving him. Embarrassed, Draco groaned and glanced shyly at Hermione.

Hagen laughed. “If I had known it has been this much fun up here lately, I would have come much more often. You two are hilarious.” When he was able to control his laughter once more, he lifted Draco the way he had done when Maria had pleasured the boy. Now, Hermione could stand as Hagen was holding Draco high enough.

“Come on, pup, he still needs to be widened for me.” Hagen looked at Hermione and grinned when he saw her looking uneasy. “Someone able to help the pup?”

“Darren, come over here and take the sub from me. Distract him well,”

Darren then sauntered over to Hermione. “Okay, pup, lets have some fun.” He took Hermione's right hand and guided it to his own mouth, then gently licked and sucked at Hermione's fingers, one after another.

Draco moaned and his member jerked again seeing this erotic play, and Darren really made it an exciting show of lust.

Hermione was in complete agreement. She had the feeling Darren's tongue was caressing her center and not her fingers. She moaned and pressed her legs together. “Darren.”

“Oh, I like my name on your lips.” Darren released her fingers and licked her shoulder.

“Remember that we have another sub here, Darren,” Hagen barked impatiently.

“Spoilsport,” Darren mumbled against Hermione's shoulder, but then slowly guided Hermione's hand to Draco's pucker. “Use your other hand to distract him a bit by playing with his balls or cock.”

Hermione did so and was transfixed by the lovely penis that was oddly red against Draco's pale skin. He was just beautiful in Hermione's eyes.

Draco moaned wildly, and Hermione feared he would come again, too soon.

“Now slowly circle his pucker.” Darren laid his fingers over hers and showed her what to do. “Now push in.”

Draco whimpered and came hard when Hermione had only pushed her finger into him to the first knuckle.

“Tsk, tsk, pup. He will have a heart attack before I get my dick into him,” Hagen said, amused.

Hermione bit her bottom lip and realized that some of Draco's come had hit her face. Her tongue darted out to catch it. Then she squeaked because Darren had sneaked his free hand under Hermione's skirt and inserted two fingers into her wet center.

Darren prevented her from escaping by sneaking his other arm around her waist. “Come on, give me a bit of fun as well. Hagen still wants his sub to be prepared for him. You got the idea of what to do and I will help you when it is necessary. So get to work.”

Hermione knew she could stop this all now, but she didn't want to. If she was honest, she needed something inside her and Darren was juicy. “I can't concentrate when you—oh Merlin...”

Darren chuckled. He had pushed her skirt out of the way and had entered her in one go. “I will hold still now so you can get back on task.”

Hermione could hardly think straight. The erection inside of her was perfect, and she started to rock on it. Nothing could make her stop. Nothing except strong hands placed on her hips. “Pup? Your friend is really in need of some rest, but big bad Hagen here won't release him before he's gotten his rocks off. So get him ready okay?”

Hermione groaned but penetrated Draco again. She followed Darren's instruction as quickly as possible and squeezed her inner walls over the member in her center from time to time. When Darren loosened his grip on Hermione's hips, she immediately started to rock herself on him.

Soon Hagen couldn't control himself anymore, declaring Draco to be ready for taking. Draco's feet hadn't even met the floor before Hagen was balls-deep inside him. Draco toppled over, only finding his balance by holding onto Hermione.

Hermione's mind fogged up when the pleasure increased to incredible heights. She didn't really notice Draco using her for his balance and he was pulled away soon after he grabbed her, anyway.

“Please take over,” Hermione whispered and grabbed for Darren's hands on her hips.

“It will be my pleasure, pup,” Darren panted, whirling her around and bending her over the side of the couch. She landed face down on another dominant's lap, but who it was she couldn't say, as it didn't matter. The man placed his hand on her head but he didn't do anything else. Maybe Hermione's hot breath while she moaned was enough for the man as it was directed at his crotch.

Darren was taking her hard and stopped every time she was close. Soon Hermione was begging. She needed more and she didn't care on which lap she was laying, she just had to take something in her mouth, taste the musky flavor of a cock. She grabbed for the man's trousers and opened them. She felt him stiffen and then moan when she took him deeply in her mouth to suck on him. He wasn't very big, so he most likely was a lower rank; not that it mattered to Hermione.

The man in her mouth didn't last long and came with a startled cry. Hermione swallowed his seed and finally was allowed to come as well. Darren released his seed into her while she was still clamping around him.

She was pulled up on the lap of the man she had just pleasured with her mouth and she weakly looked up at him. It was Thalien, the splinter with the Mohawk. “Oh, Fenrir is going to kill me,” she moaned in momentary despair.

Thalien smiled a sweet smile at her. “I'm rank one now. You're allowed to have fun with me.”

“Nice way to put it, Thalien,” Hermione jibed and leaned against his chest, exhausted but relieved she wasn't going to be punished after all.

Hagen, meanwhile, had finished with Draco and laid the unconscious boy on the couch opposite Hermione. “My, Darren, look at those cubs. First, one is making the pup suck him off and while we are busy, another one is just taking Tara as if its his right. Tsk, tsk, tsk you greenhorns are really getting too cheeky for your own good. The head beta is right, we need to get them more under control.”

“I'm sorry, I didn't know we weren't allowed to, sir,” Jasper, a warrior of a low rank said, ducking his head.

“I will show you your place later. I would suggest you prepare yourself as there will be no pup to get you ready for me.”

Jasper whimpered and quickly left.

“Now to the fun part. I hope you are still up for it, sub.” Hagen looked at Tara who eagerly nodded and then looked over to Neville, as she knew he was the one Hagen wanted her to play with.

X-X

(around 20 minutes ago)

Neville tried to run when Hagen had asked Darren to undress him, but the dominant was quicker and pinned him down. He whimpered, but Darren bit his earlobe and then spoke charmingly, directly in his ear. “Don't run, sub. There is nothing to run away from. He wants you to take Tara. Don't you want to take her?”

Neville whimpered again but calmed down a bit.

“Ah, I knew it. Now come and let me undress you.”

Neville stayed calm while Darren undressed him. Only when the dominant pulled him on his lap did he squeak and stiffen a bit.

“What's wrong? I heard you adjusted well.”

“He is... he is scary,” Neville whispered.

“Dogs that bark don't bite, sub. If you ask him nicely, he will be a big teddy bear, all gentle.”

Neville bit his bottom lip and relaxed against Darren's chest until the man was called away to help Hermione. Then Nick took over, old Nick not the splinter. Neville knew Nick well and so he was able to relax even more with him and let the dominant lazily play with his member. Neville could hardly decide where to look. The show with Draco and Hermione, or the sudden scene with Jasper, who had sneaked to Tara and took her on the table.

Neville had fantasized about taking Tara as soon as Draco had told him that the dominants, from time to time, made the subs go on each other. Now he would get his chance. Nevertheless he was so nervous that when Hagen came over to get him, he went limp.

“Scared again, sub?” Hagen asked.

“I don't know what to do.”

“That's the fun of it. We will help you.”

Neville was reminded of his session with Yorik and Morgan and looked at Hagen's member. It was limp but still huge.

Chuckling, Hagen pulled Neville out of Nick's lap. “Nothing to be scared of. It will fit perfectly in your pale ass.” Hagen grabbed Neville's bum and squeezed.

Neville squeaked but his member filled up with blood again. “Much better, sweetie.”

Just hearing the gentler words from Hagen made Neville relax and enjoy the ministrations. “Ah, so you want some sugar, baby? You can have sugar.” Hagen pressed Neville close to him so their members met. Neville was already fully hard and Hagen's quickly followed. “Now we will teach you to pleasure our female super-sub.” He turned Neville and guided him over to Tara, who spread her legs willingly.

It seemed there was no jealousy between the two as Tara smiled encouragingly at Neville and he smiled shyly back. First, Hagen taught Neville how to pleasure Tara with his mouth. It tasted wonderful and he was so proud with each moan he heard her release.

“Okay, time for some more direct action, sub. Crawl over her and try to see if you can find the way yourself.”

Nervously, Neville did as he was asked. Again, he looked shyly at Tara.

“You are sweet, Neville. I like you,” Tara said truthfully.

“More sugar for you, sweetie. Now fuck her,” Hagen commanded, chuckling.

Neville needed three attempts, but then he sank into Tara with a low moan. “Oh Merlin,” he muttered and rested his head on her chest. He breathed a few times very deeply to get control of himself.

Tara squeezed her muscles around him and said, “Come on, Neville, take me. Make me come.”

Neville lifted his head and started to rock into her with utmost concentration.

Tara laughed, took his face in her hands and said, “Shh, Neville. Relax. This shouldn't be hard work.”

“I... I want to make it good.”

“You do but you don't need to concentrate so much. Just do what feels right for you as well.”

Neville smiled and went on at a more relaxed pace. Sweat was dripping from his forehead, and he concentrated hard not to come before Tara. Then Tara shifted under him and moved her legs further up and grabbed his bum to push him into her at a different angle. “Yeah that way, Neville. Deeper and harder.”

Neville obeyed without protest. This was more familiar territory; being told what to do to pleasure another. Then her vagina was clamping down over him in waves and Tara moaned. Was she coming? What should he do? Neville panicked.

“Don't stop,” Tara said, and Neville heard the dominants chuckle around him.

Neville was good with following commands, so he went on while Tara was still clamping down on him, which finally brought him over the edge as well. Exhausted, he let himself rest on Tara. “You are beautiful."

Tara chuckled. “And you are very sweet, Neville.”

Liquid was hitting Neville on his back and then he was lifted off of Tara. “I think we'll try to see if I can fit into your perfect arse another time, sub. For now, you all need time to rest.”

I hope there are still some people happy with this fic and not to mad at me for being so slow with my uploads.
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