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Toppers Wallow

By: Toddy
folder Harry Potter β€Ί Slash - Male/Male β€Ί Harry/Draco
Rating: Adult ++
Chapters: 59
Views: 7,328
Reviews: 23
Recommended: 0
Currently Reading: 0
Disclaimer: I do not own Harry Potter, nor any of the characters from the books or movies. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
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Paigee07 and Thrnbrook thank you for reviewing regularly it encouraged me no end.

Never_Tempt – I hope you managed to stay awake for the last episode.

Areadeal – Thank you for the info on paint ball – I appreciate your worries over health and safety and support your feelings about not playing without proper supervision. Really the paintball was a means to an end. That end being to use the woods for magical combat. An amount of artistic licence must be allowed therefore.

Plot line? Well see if life has a continuous plot. To be credible fiction has to reflect possible real life happenings. As to buildings look at the plan and you will see that the practical people had to alter what was a small space to suit different circumstances.

My writing is accompanied by a thesaurus and a dictionary – in fact I make a few lists in the computer memory. When repetition appears; I either edit it out or substitute the words in order to add emphasis. My word programme also has a limited thesaurus and that gives me ideas as well.

Being a committed Christian I can relate to religious ceremonies – I also believe that God created our psyches in different ways and that one hard-line is not the way of the Bible or of Jesus’ forgiveness.

Thank you all for your contributions. I now have another tale of the young magicians to tell – same sort of relationships, but a definite spoiler for the last book. I thought I might revise it to fit, but things became very convoluted – look out for HP&DM.

Whitmore.

MORE REPLIES 07 Feb 08

Thanks for more reviews.

Areadeal and Thrnbrook – I have another one in the pipeline – provisional title HP&DM – it will be a spoiler for the last book.

MightyGryffindor – Lucius was not caught – otherwise we would have to invent another nasty if the story is to be continued. Voldie was defeated and came back, maybe Lucius will???????????????

HarryDraco4life – Note the secret portal between both bedrooms. Note Narcissa lamenting the loss of two good bloodlines. Harry had to rescue Ginny did he not? He cannot be a callous bastard; that is why we all love him. In real life many people make compromises in order to be accepted. This way each pair was still together maintaining the smokescreen.
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