Was it a Dream? | By : MelMel1982 Category: Harry Potter > Slash - Male/Male > Harry/Draco Views: 7670 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0 |
Disclaimer: I don't own Harry Potter or any of the characters from Harry Potter, nor do I make money from it. Nor do I own the song Was it a Dream from 30 Seconds to Mars. |
These are the reviews from the last time I posted this. I just wanted to keep these because they're so lovely...
Cassie 2006-05-13 WOW!! I loved it!! ^__- It was well written and I do hope you continue it PLEASE! Oh and if you ever get writers block and need help I wouldn�t mind helping you or talking about your stories to get the creative juices flowing!
Anon 2006-05-13 you had better writ more luv
Garrett 2006-05-13 I liked it. I think a few more chapters would make it awesome. Like�I dunno, you�re the author. I know writer�s block. I have a bad case myself. The pain is mutual.
edevis 2006-05-13 I hope that you received lots of good reviews, because I can� t wait for your update:) I love the story *hugs*
Anon 2006-05-13 Awesome fic! Keep it up, I�m still sweating! Hope there�s a sequel coming along, and thanks for the fantastic read!
Cassie 2006-05-14 WOW!!! I loved it! The wake up scene they had together was precious!! Both not knowing what to say just finally suites them!! I hope to read lots more soon u r doing great!!
Anon 2006-05-14 I�m in complete shock�you�ve never written a lemon before? The first chapter was so erotically charged even without the shagging, and I�m worried that I won�t be able to handle the tension when it comes to the actual sex! You must be a natural, and I can�t wait till you update some more. Love the sweet Draco, by the way! Thanks again!
Lilth 2006-05-15 That was really cute and fun. Please do another chap or two. Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
edevis 2006-05-15 Hi:) I know what you mean by not finishing your novels, i have the same problem too. But i don�t know what could be done about it sadly. But i really like your stile and the whole story. I really hope you will continue. *hugs*
Anon 2006-05-15 Your story is amazing, and if it takes a longer time to get a satisfying chapter out, then so be it. I�d be happy to read the story regardless of when the next update is, and if you�re worried about turning your story into an overdramatic epic, make it short and sweet by having in a few more chapters or so a complication and one sweet, kinky, hot ending. That�s enough to rock anybody critical of longer stories! Thanks heaps for putting yourself into writing this story and spending more time on it. Can�t wait to read more!
Ajax 2006-05-16 i Hey, you can�t stop there! give me more!
Yaoilovertash 2006-05-17 Hi, I just wanted to say that I loved your story and i would be honored to become your beta.
nobody noes 2006-05-19 mmmm�.fic was good�i don�t usually review cuz i�m way too lazy�but since u said u would update if u got reviews so i�m reviewing�lol�your style of writing is good actually�nice n smooth and it doesnt feel boring so i�m surprised u�ve never posted anything before�quit worrying bout the lemon and it should come out just fine (that is if you do decide to write one) cuz juz like er�whoever sed�you�re quite the natural at the limey stuff so the lemony stuff should b okay too rite?? hehe�have fun n besides flamers are just people who have no lives n wanna bring other people down with them�*winkz*
Belle 2006-05-19 Ye gods! You can actually write! I mean, not an insult on *your* particular story, but generally, these things have no depth to them. God, Draco is gorgeous, isn�t he?! You *must* write more. I mean, really, it�s not nice to put a weird acid cliffhanger like that. *pout* ^-^ Looking forward to chappie 5! `~belle~`
Ari 2006-05-19 Wow�I think you are an amazing writer� Bravo and I can�t wait to read your next chapter! (if that other beta doesn�t work out let me know L? :D) Have a good day! Hugs Ariana
austin 2006-05-20 awesome story. absolutely love it. but i have quiestion. whats a lemon??? half the descriptions on hp aff, i dont understand. the only ones i know are like yoi, and m.m.. but i dont know the others. were do u go to find that out.?? oh, btw, i love ur little miny story at the begging of cahpter 3 it hink. it was funny. *harry and draco in ur basement*
Lilth 2006-05-20 I loved the new chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I also understand about the whole only writing when your off. do I�ll try my best to be patient but I make now promises. I really like the story and am anxious to see how it ends. But then again you probably are to. So till the next chap. Happy Writing.
Emmeline Vance 2006-05-20 Hey again! When you said you couldn�t update soon, I was expecting a delay of a month, not a week or something. You rock! And in answer to your confusion, I figured that aff.net automatically names people �Anon� if the name and email spaces are left empty. I didn�t even realise I hadn�t typed myself in, so hi and nice to meet you! I generally review everytime a chapter comes out, so I think I�m 3 of the previous Anons to clear up the confusion. Oop!! =S Haha anyway, I love their idea of �friendship�, and especially loved how well Hermione and Ron took the news. They took a bet on him? Priceless! Thanks so much for making them a couple as it puts my Mills&Boon junkie side at ease. I absolutely loved the steaming supposed non-lemon in this chapter, and can�t wait till you lose your lemon virginity (to a M/M fic, congrats! Definitely a huge step to take). I took the M/F route myself, and the lemon turned out okay for me, but as for the plot�lol! Again, thanks for the update, hope you get lots of rest from the hectic sounding job, and can�t wait to read more. Peace!
dracos real lover 2006-05-21 very awesome indeed
Cassie 2006-05-22 Your 3rd chapter was great! Filled with lots of good detail and a very nice lime scene! I liked how you had a wager between Ron and Hermione. Plus you gave more detail to Malfoys personnallity with his cloths when Harry was undressing him. I hope your job starts to get easier for you; we�ll take what we can get when we can get it!
Anonymous Flamer 2006-05-24 *applauds* Me likey. Though the thing is�50 galleons? Yikes! That�s like�several thousand dollars. Well, a lot. A LOT! But, other than that, I like it�heheh, lemon-avoidance syndrome (LAS), I know it well.
Emmeline Vance 2006-05-25 Hey again! Thanks heaps for the little note and review responses. I�m really glad that the chapter�s being worked on despite a hectic schedule. That is some serious devotion! Anyway, can�t wait to read more. Seeya next chapter!
Leilia 2006-05-31 Hello! I�m new here and just discovered your story. I must say I am impresed.-whistles- It is realy good!-smile- are you going to continue? Pleeease!! It�s just sooooo cuuuuuuuuute!!!! I realy liked it! Till soon I hope!
Cheerio!! Leilia
dracos pet 2006-05-31 get the next chapter up!!! and if any of my words get stuck together� blame my damnspacebar that wontwork�
Vance Emmeline 2006-06-01 Ick, food poisoning! Anyway, don�t stress yourself out too much over the lemon issue, and no need to rush yourself! Seeya next update!
Emmeline Vance 2006-06-04 Hey again! I�m extremely surprised with the tiny amount of time it takes for you to recover from writer�s block. It�s absolutely amazing! It takes me a month or so, at least! First off, congratulations for your first lemon. It was wonderful in true lemon-style, and am glad that you can continue to incorporate lemons into stories with less hesitation. Nice work! Thanks heaps for the steamy outdoor sex, and especially for linking it with the ending. Fantastically done! Also, the fluff was great and Hermione had a cheeky, coy attitude. Appreciated! Anyway, thanks heaps for keeping to your word and not abandoning this story, and would like to welcome you to the land of lemon-adventures. Happy writing! Peace, Emmeline.
roxierose13 2006-06-04 hey, you pimped my stuff! Awesome! anyway� hehe� yeah, I read this story a while ago, up to chapter 3 or something, but I must have been in a weird mood, cause I didn�t review, and I usually do :) You know what I like best? the fact that you didn�t drag it out horribly long after they got together ^_^ I don�t tend to like those, I�m all about �the chase� lol. very cute fic tho, some dream sequences could have been nice, but I understand about things not going the way you mean. happens to me all the time! ;) But usually they turn out okay anyway, or sometimes, even better! hehe :D You write very well and this was a great fic for a first-timer ;) hope to see more of your stuff!
Lilth 2006-06-05 it was sweet and I really liked the ending. Thanks for the review on mine. I can�t wait for more stories from you. Hope to enjoy them soon. Later.
Amessis 2006-06-06 I loved that! Great ending.
Momo_Mochi 2006-06-10 i This story got me thinking that it might be fun to give Ron a sugardaddy�I dunno someone should write it
Esper 2006-06-11 Aw!! This was totally cute. I liked it a lot! I have a story about thunder. Lols. But your story was freaking awesome! Keep up the good work! You�ve got a nice way of writing that makes me want to read more!
severussnapelover 2006-06-14 wow�this story was bloody amazing�..i absolutely loved it�� you are a really good writer and i look forward to seeing what you write in the future kudos to you! cheers severussnapelover p.s. i gave you full rating�you deserve it!
Mistress Malfoy 2006-06-16 Oh man that was an awesome story! Your story has a tie for second best Harry/Draco I�ve ever read. Keep writing more stories and I shall read! Thank you so much for writing this story! -M.M
S. Phantom 2006-07-27 Yay! I like happy Harry/Draco stories! Thanks for writing this! I enjoyed reading it!
BirdieBlythe 2006-08-31 OMG that was bloody HOT! Uh�and it�s so over and I than you for your increadible talent� *bows*
Slashy Snitch 2006-09-08 Hey, great story, i absolutely loved it. Wanna check out my story for me? i�m a newbie, but ive been told that my story is really good, and i update regularly. Please? i�ll be foreever greatful if you leave a review, too. Its called Picking Wildflowers, and its an H/D, but also has H/G, H/P, D/P, and R/HR. K? thx!!!
Anon 2006-09-15 good shit�more please
animegirl1791 2006-09-17 I really like this one. It was great. It was sweet, and passionate too. ^^ *puts up two thumbs*
Katie 2006-12-14 Good story.
thrnbrooke 2007-03-15 Oh that was fantastic!!!
Doinkers 2007-03-31 That�was so amazingly hot. o.o
And I�m on my period and just dumped by my fiance. Aren�t I supposed to be cranky as balls? But now, I can�t be, because..just..damn. o.o
Queen_mAlice 2007-05-09 i great story, I know what you mean about the posting new chapters thinggy, though; its a real pain in the arse.
You could always try posting your longer stories as interconnected single chapter stories, that might be a little easer for you.
Mer 2008-03-23 Wow, I love it, that�s amazing :)
Lumcer 2008-09-24 I sincerly liked it. It contained a sweet touch to it. I know all hob gwash right (JK), but no seriously it did move a little fast. even though it did though you compensated it well and made the speed of things work well in the long run. Not bad at all. KCK-Lumcer
ZipMeOff 2008-11-21 Waaw!! That was pretty hot! Ya know, you shouldn�t be that insecure about your writing, because it�s lovable!! Especially the lemon part!! :D Continue your good work! Hope there�s gonna be more!! And this was a pretty good idea, this idea of the rain and thunder to fit the song� i actually love �was it a dream� and it�s great that you�ve done a little wink to it � oh and sorry for ma ratter poor english, it�s not my first language *blushing madly*
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