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Reviews for Secretly Slytherin

By : Veresna
  • From ANON - Tracy on May 14, 2003
    I can't wait to read the sequel! This is the best story i've read in a long time!
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  • From ANON - Laerai on May 12, 2003
    This story was amazing. I don't usually favor OC pairings, but this... it was great. Well written, with many twists and turns along the way! Wonderful job!
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  • From ANON - Liya on May 03, 2003
    I have read the story 4 months ago and cannot forget it. I am recommending for everyone at the Russian site to read it too.
    And what about to continie? I am so waiting for it!!!
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  • From ANON - Ricky Roo on May 02, 2003
    Yahoo! Very very very well done! Excellent fic... There's only one thing that disappoints me... I was really looking forward to a conclusion where Helena would hear Severus whisper those three big, passionate words. You had it building up! I hope you at least considered having him tell her that he loves her, so perhaps it'll happen in the next one!

    Anyway... what do I read next?!?
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  • From ANON - Ricky Roo on April 29, 2003
    Holy Smokies! You know what... I think you've just captured the essense and adrenaline of a Death Eater's meeting even better than JK ever will... You go, Girl!
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  • From ANON - RickyRoo on April 27, 2003
    I've lost a lot of sleep over reading this! Up way past my bedtime because I just keep clicking to the next chapter... looks like tonight won't be any different! So, what's the scoop with Lewis? Must find out!

    P.s... do you watch Smallville by any chance? I couldn't help but no tha that you mistook the Daily Prophet for the Daily Planet. :P
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  • From ANON - Lady Aidil on April 26, 2003
    I apologise for the rather weird appearance of my review but I don`t know how I could change it.I`ve forgotten to write that I like your portrait of Snape-similar to mine-he shouldn`t be a goofy fluffy sweetheart.He is brilliant,powerful and high-skilled wizard but the nasty,mockering,sarcastic bastard too.And ,what`s the most important-HE IS DEAD SEXY!Keep him in the character in this way!Regards
    Lady Aidil
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  • From ANON - Lady Aidil on April 26, 2003
    I hope you read some-times the reviews of the completed stories. You are the incre-dibly wonder-ful and talen-ted writer of the steamy,
    exciting Snapefics I`ve ever read!I love
    your "meaty"
    arousing vocabulary
    and all love scenes.I`m waiting for continuation
    `cause I like
    "this little witch-bitch";))
    Helena.In the
    meanwhile
    I`m going to read all your
    fics.BTW I received this
    title on the
    mailing list
    "Slytherins Severus Society"-called as one
    of the best fanfictions.
    Regards
    Lady Aidil




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  • From ANON - Ricky Roo on April 25, 2003
    Damn! You just think of everything, Girl! Just like JK, you've got such a constructive imagination... al the these little tid bits (specifically the blue hand) are really awesome. Awesome work... Gotta keep reading now!
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  • From ANON - Ricky Roo on April 24, 2003
    Ha! You got me! Way to go, I love being wrong. I suspected that Voldemort would be the father, but perhaps that's just because he's the ultimate Slytherin persona. Good job!
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  • From ANON - Persephone on April 06, 2003
    VeresnaUssep,
    I am completely addicted to your work.
    This story is remarkably well written. The plot is well constructed with quite a few surprises (end of Ch. 29 for example). Your characterization of Snape is ideal and he is well mated by your creation Helena. I
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  • From ANON - Eden on April 06, 2003
    Oh! ::gets all weepy and misty eyed:: Thank goodness you intend to write more! As I began to draw closer to the end of this one I actually started to get anxious! ::does a happy dance!:: I CAN'T WAIT to see what you have planned for them next! Every time I thought I knew what was going on you quite unceremoniously dumped me onto my ass, leaving me wondering what in the hjustjust happened. As I've told you before, your story (LLPL) was the first HP fan fic I've read, and I quite honestly think you have completely spoiled me for the rest. And since I can never possibly be happy reading anyone else's work, you must take pity on me and WRITE, WRITE, WRITE!!!
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  • From ANON - Renate Yang on March 30, 2003
    Hot damn. You packaged up all my favorite ideas and tied them with a bow. Thank you!!! (and please, write another sequel!)
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  • From ANON - wirineth on February 21, 2003
    I can not admit to myself that this fiction is complete...I will not admit it to myself. It has been so much fun to follow this story and watch how a character like Snape deals with som he he clearly underestimated from the first, and I hate to think that there could be nothing more to come. I first found the story on fanfiction.net, and then followed it here when it was forced to be edited. And now, after all that, it could be over??!! Oh Please NOooo! Well, whatever happens, it has been a great read and I thank you for that!!!
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  • From ANON - Zebee on February 21, 2003
    Someone reccommended your story about the encounter with the pro, and liking that I read the rest of your stuff.

    I found Secretly Syltherin fascinating enough to read it in one sitting. A couple of chapters dragged a fraction, There's only so much sex I can take, but that's personal preference.

    I liked the way they are matched, and the different ways they thougt of to out do each other. The only quibble I have is that considering the ways he tends to trick her, nasty things that strike at her in undermining ways, I think she trusts him way too much. And too quickly. I suppose he does show concern early enough, and she is naturally attracted to him, and she is angry at him a lot, but it still seems a little off. The deep distrust/fear shown in small ways that I'd expect doesn't seem to be there. I can't quite buy the sex drive overcoming the self preservation.

    That said, by the end they have generated the trust, the bit with "kill me" was excellent. And I do like Dumbledore pulling Snape up, be interesting to see more of that relationship.

    I'd like to see more of your writing.
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