RE: Chapter 18

You are quite literally driving me mad.

I sat over two days and read all 106 chapters.. waiting for more :)

This is an amazing story. Everytime I pick it up I just can't stop reading. It's like every chapter I read is another episode in a riveting series, keep up the excellent work. I can't wait for the next chapter!!

This was wonderful!!! You had me going when Hermione was about to leave London. I was like "NOooooooo" and I bet this chick in front of me was like "What is wrong with her?" but anyways! I enjoyed this chappy very much. much awaited much happiness much fun! I'll be checking out that picture after I get my sleep schuedule straight again! >:D

I'm sorry to hear that! But I'm glad you're feeling a bit better!  Please feel even more better (why is english so difficult when you wanna express a bunch of stuff? This is so much easier in german I bet. )  soon!! If you haven't already!

I have wait for this moment since ever!!!!!! Love it!!!

Dear Betz, 

I was thinking about you all week. It's a very sad time for you and I'm sorry, I am dreading this happening in my life and the mere fact, that it happens to everyone is not comforting. I'm hoping it is a little easier for you,  as you are surrounded by love and support. Your husband must be a true gem. Be strong. 

Love Dominika xx 

Chapter 100!  

Congratulations! It's a huge achievement, your writing style is wonderful. I always enjoy reading your offerings, you are so creative. 100 chapters and they are all wonderfully detailed, descriptive and exciting.  

I especially enjoyed Mounga's back story , I was very curious about it, as you've been hinting at things for a while.  

Please, please if Severus goes to see Hermione, please don't send her to Hawai at the same time. Please let them see each other, if he manages to leave Malu at all.  Another "fate" thing and I'll explode! 

Thank you 

Fox xx 

if ron is pro, even second string, mean he makeing alot of money and that is what you dream about play pro, even secound string, so hermoine a bitch.

So very sorry about your mom

About your disclaimer.

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You always use the actual name of the fandom. Just naming the fandom is enough, but you go above and beyond. It's also enough to say that you make no money/profit, but you entertain us as well.

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Dear Betz, 

I'm very sorry to hear about your mum.  

Don't worry about "updating on time" whatever that means.  We can wait. Family is the most important. 

Chapter 99.

Quite a variety of events for a short chapter. As always excellent writing.

I wanted to ask you before,  are you a chef or some food professional? Your chapters are so delicious. 

Thank you 

Take care 

Fox xx 

Firstly, I am sad to hear about your mother, and can only hope there is a little peace for both of you.  This is more important than a posting scedule, after all.  hugs

Secondly, another interesting chapter in the way each of them are facing things.  The Weasleys, sans Molly, have seen how Ron and Lavender are with Hermione, so that is looking up. 

Good to see how attached Anne is to Victor, and knowing someone else who knows but isn't likely to use it against her can only help. 

And Severus has the jolt of confronting mortality to set his mind to working on different lines - please don't have them crossing each other on their way to a surprise visit (unless they meet up in San Francisco by accident), I dont think I could take the strain!

Dear Betz, 

Chapter 98.

It's always very exciting to see another update from you  ;) Your story is like watching a soap opera at times. I love how detailed it is and how much background info there is on everything and everyone. 

I'm enjoying your slow pace and attention to detail (your research into accurate info -like weather, food recipes and so on- is astounding) 

Thank you for your hard work 

Fox xx 

Hm, lots of interesting goings on, I find myself waiting impatiently for where this will all lead.  If Jerry won't show off his Patronus, will this be a problem in his new job?  Arnold continues to be subpar in his dealings with people, and given his past Jerry was quite right to want a bit of reassurance, given what he has been through.

Oh, and the twins continue to be as tasteless and exuberant as ever! Damn, you've beaten me to the Snowball, which was ro feature heavily in my own tiny seasonal ficlet this year - though no Santas will be harmed in the making of the tale  :D

Loving it...