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Reviews for And They Didn\'t Live Happily Ever After

By : ElizabethStump
  • From OracleObscured on December 14, 2015
    I liked this new chapter
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  • From Nichole-Hermione on December 07, 2015
    Wow!!!! I feel sorry for the therapist lol
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  • From Remarkable on December 05, 2015
    Ahhhhh cliffffyyyyyyyyyyy..... I rolled all the way to this point and went to hit "more" and .... now I'm stuck waiting with the rest of the lot! Heh heh, well, that's alright. I'm really enjoying this fic and look forward to the continuation of the story.
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  • From ANON - maj on December 05, 2015
    I don't usually read wips. I am that impatient. I prefer reading the whole story in one sitting.. but you got me hooked :-) this is probably the first WIP I've monitored since I found this site early this year.thanks.
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  • From Nichole-Hermione on November 27, 2015
    Yay!!!
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  • From Nichole-Hermione on November 22, 2015
    Awesome chapter
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  • From ANON - DinaTheCat on November 22, 2015
    Oh no! The Sirens' Secret doesn't open until the day after my birthday :-( I'll just have to make a wish list for Christmas instead :-P
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  • From Midnight_Fairy on November 22, 2015
    Great chapter, keep writing!
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  • From Nichole-Hermione on November 19, 2015
    I just want to say WOW!!! I've read this whole thing in the last week and can't wait for more!!!!
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  • From ANON - iloveHGDM on November 18, 2015
    I have spent the last few days reading this story in my spare time. I love your characterizations and the intrigue you weave. You have kept my attention through 52 chapters of a story that I normally would have looked over since I don't usually like adultery stories. That said, I have to say that in chapter 51 when hermione suspects Ron (SPOILER) of being gay - you go from shocked to homophobic gay bashing very quickly. I understand her reaction would be complicated but to turn to that kind of hatred and derogatory terms was hard to swallow considering Hermione always champions the underrepresented. I think you should look back at that chapter and re think some of the words you use.
    However - aside from that I have found no fault - and I look forward to reading the conclusion of the story.
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  • From ANON - Danielle on November 14, 2015
    Chapter 38:

    I found this chapter as hard to read as the rape chapter.

    It's nothing against your writing, you do a beautiful job. Just... "O'Brian
    Indian costumes" turn my stomach. It makes me so depressed, saying my culture used like that. The story really illustrates how people really do treat our culture.

    I, myself, was raped for being aa "redskin squaw" on my 19th birthday. The police response to it was too beat me and return me to my assailant. Considering this happened in 2001... You can see that views on natives haven't changed much.

    I earned my first eagle feather by coming forward with my story, and helping other native women like myself.

    1/3 native women will report being raped before the age of 30... Most don't even bother to report it, because less than 1% of the reports get followed up on. The true numbers of rape are 1/10 native women will make it to 30 without being raped.

    My best friend earned his first feather by being hung at the age of 11, at the school, and surviving.

    If his mother hasn't happened to find him, he would be dead. The police and school dismissed the incident as a "harmless childhood prank".

    Here in the story, the party is fiction. But it echos reality so clearly it's chilling.
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  • From ANON - Danielle on November 12, 2015
    Raspberry vinigarette

    Omg I love you for this recipe alone. I once found a REALLY good flavor of this, but the store never carried it again and the other brands are far too harsh.

    Write me back and I'll share some of my own intentions with you. I only request that, if you like them and market them, you ask me first :)
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  • From ANON - Danielle on November 12, 2015
    The debate over cassoulet reminds me of the debates in my household over various Italian dishes (on one side) and traditional native American dishes on the other.
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  • From Midnight_Fairy on November 10, 2015
    Great chapter! I really hope Hermione divorces Ron soon. At least then she could be a free woman and not have to wait on her unwanted husband. Keep writing and update soon!
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  • From Midnight_Fairy on November 08, 2015
    Great story! I have enjoyed reading every chapter and I look forward to reading many more. Please update soon!
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