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Reviews for Independence Day

By : Tumshie
  • From IanBorlace on June 24, 2008
    Please continue to update, I have loved this story since it was first posted, I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From genna on April 13, 2008
    Either you are with us or you are against us...

    I think this is the most creative dark HP universe I've read.
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  • From genna on April 12, 2008
    Revenge, retribution, and recompense. Payback is central to this story.

    I first started reading because Harry taking command of his life is something I miss in most stories. You allowed us to see how poorly he was treated. From there, Harry FINALLY devises a way out of his misery. I was impressed and happy by the training he received.

    The rest hurts me. Each payback is worse for Dumbledore, Snape and the Dursley. I like Dumbledore and snape. I have continued reading even though I yearn for reconciliation.

    You have had a good idea and worked it through. Good job.
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  • From LuciferRose on March 28, 2008
    This is some incredible writing. Please keep it up because I want to see how it all turns out.
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  • From shadows77769 on March 27, 2008
    love this story =D
    hope u keep it updated
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  • From AtlanVIII on March 25, 2008
    yeah finally a new chapter :) havent had the time to read it yet :) wanted to thank you that you continue this great story :)

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  • From BrokenArrow on March 09, 2008
    Hi Tumshie,

    Great story.... love the fact that Harry seems to be 'powerful' but not overly so, more just a boost of confidence :D . I think you probably rushed the H/Hr... but I must admit I prefer the slowly built romance storyline, and even so the relationship is not unbelievable

    Also is there some way to add your story to 'my favorites' and get a warning when you updated (e.g portkey) or do I just keep checking :)
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  • From AtlanVIII on February 28, 2008
    i really like your story hope to read more soon :)
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  • From Vegito786 on February 18, 2008
    this is one of the funniest stories i've read and its really good too, please update as soon as you can, can't wait
    to read some more
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  • From Rosutsu on February 07, 2008
    got to say i love this story ^^

    specically the way you write ...

    i hope you havent forgotten about this story (or summer lovin which had some promise too) and you continue it sometime

    *hopefully awaitin an update*
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  • From ridert on January 22, 2008
    can't believe I missed this update when you posted it originally I have only just seen it and it was good
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  • From shi21890 on December 30, 2007
    I hope you are going to do more. I like this story. I went to know what happen to Harry and the rest
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  • From SeayKat on December 27, 2007
    Hi! Only recently started to read your story, but I am really enjoying it. I can't wait to read the next update and I was wondering how long you think the story might go? I am hoping for a long one :)
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  • From Firelink on December 24, 2007
    Wow, just... wow. I love the storyline that you have set up. I also like that you gave harry a powerful yet caring image. In fact I registered just to review this story. This could be a book you could publish if you wanted to. I like that there is a lot of detail, but not too much. I've read some others and I got bored after a few minutes of reading. Your writing is amazing, it keeps you interested and involved. Although I wish there was a little more smut. This is a Adult fan fic site you know. Keep up the good work. Oh, and happy holidays! Hope you get lots of presents and love from your family and friends.
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  • From magicalheather999 on December 23, 2007
    WOW cant wait for more
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