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Reviews for Independence Day

By : Tumshie
  • From MagicKira on November 13, 2007
    I loved this story the first time around and after rereading it now, I love it just as much as before! I won't urge you to update because I know how annoying that can be, but I'll think it at least :D
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  • From spellweaver731 on October 17, 2007
    I just finished reading up to the point where you left off and I must say I am really enjoying your story. Then I was sad to notice that you had not updated in 8 months...have you abandonded this story? do you still plan on updating? I would really like to read more so I hope that you will.
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  • From asrael on September 22, 2007
    This is a good story, shame that you haven't updated it in while. Was good reading it, hope you finish it sometime
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  • From egb67 on September 14, 2007
    Ok - so one major issue (other than the fact that you really, really need to work on your scene transitions). You have it in this chapter that Mr. Dursley punches Harry in the gut - near or on the kidneys. Usually, if it's done by the right person, that kind of blow is FATAL. If kidneys are ruptured - which is very, very likely in this scenario, because of the size difference - the person bleeds out in a matter of less than 1/2 hr. That makes the entire scene unbelievable for me. That's unfortunate, because you've a decent premise here and it would be fun to see it more detailed and accurate.

    Regards,

    the_scribbler
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  • From Pyro4571 on September 03, 2007
    hey, i love this story, but you havent updated it in forever.... it was going really well up until it stopped growing. please update!! i have to know how it ends!!!
    thanks :D
    -pyro
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  • From lovette on July 26, 2007
    please continue the story and thank you
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  • From lovette on July 10, 2007
    please continue the story please and thank you

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  • From dirtydragons on July 10, 2007
    Hey there, well written story. I look forward to seeing where you go from here. I'm glad you're having Harry actually use what he's gained (the Legimens skills for example). Good luck with your writing. Till next time.
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  • From ridert on June 05, 2007
    Please update soon have just reread this and would really like to at least know that it is still a work in progress and hasn't been abandoned
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  • From ygh616 on May 31, 2007
    bloody great storie keep it up.
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  • From LadyKind on April 07, 2007
    brilliant you wonderfull person you!!
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  • From tenrai on March 23, 2007
    MUST HAVE MORE this story is great im checking every day for updates thanks for all ur hard work keep on writin
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  • From ecorate on March 22, 2007
    UPDATE SOON!
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  • From VegaTDM0 on March 22, 2007
    great story. very in depth. looking forward to more and is waiting for more.
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  • From Dracon on March 17, 2007
    Okay, I must say that I have never really been a frequent reader on this site, I have found myself looking for "greener pastures". Jeconais opened my eyes to other ships than the standard H/G ship and I have found that when I am on this site I really do enjoy the H/HG even more, as they are able to bend the rules a bit more. Now I find that this is an incredibley well done fic, not quite to the Diamond standard of BOBMIN(but hey that is two authors,and thus is not a fair comparisson) it definately falls into the high gold/platinum standard by which I compare all authors. I am looking forward to future updates to this fic and am hoping that I can recieve an email notification of when they are posted.
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