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By : pittwitch
  • From ccino49 on July 25, 2007
    Why has Nolan become a Deatheater? Also I got a bit confused when it suddenly jumped to Snape coming out of a pensive, what happened after Bella's initiation? What was that ritual thing Nat was doing on the sand and how will she get Nolan back? Was the eagle going to Nolan?
    ccino
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  • From ccino49 on July 11, 2007
    SHIT!!! Nolan's took the Dark Mark. Why? Is it some kind of plan to bring about Voldies downfall? Surely he doesn't realy want to be a Death Eater. Is Nat in on it? Argh, whats going on here? Why has he done this? Pleeeeeeeeease hurry up and tell me.
    ccino
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  • From misslala on July 10, 2007
    Oh shit. Nolan becoming a DE!!!! that doesn't bode well for things! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From Marti on July 10, 2007
    did I miss something? I thought this was set during the few weeks following the Yule Ball. Now they're talking about the prophesy?....ah well

    yes, their world is going to be tipped so far upside down they're gonna think they're in Australia. *the princes, i mean, lol*

    I'll try and send you either a teaser of the next chapter, or maybe a sneak peak of the assault scene.

    mar


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  • From Marti on July 08, 2007
    I Loooooove this story! I never know what is going to happen and I adore that!

    Marti
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  • From ccino49 on July 08, 2007
    Oh. It's got to be the chapter on Diluo Murus. Removing defensive walls. He's figured out that Nats hidden his memories of his time with her so he'll need to find them. What will she make Nickolas and Dickie do? When this mysterious brother coming into play, and is he a goody or a baddy? Argh. The suspense os killing me.
    Keep writing girl.
    ccino
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  • From misslala on July 08, 2007
    Oooh, i like how that ended up! I am guessing memory modification... haha. Whoa, the potions are too funny!!! They were trying to get her "hemmed up" it would seem!
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  • From ccino49 on July 07, 2007
    Oh, that was evil. I loved it. Just how did she swap the glasses? I want Nat and Severus back together. It was just so sad when they parted at Hogwarts. You know they're in love so they have to be together. Pleeeese.
    ccino
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  • From Happyappy on July 04, 2007
    So, was it Nickolas who caused the havic in Snape's store cupbards stealing the ingredients for the potion in the champagne? Too bad Daddy's plans were foiled. Too bad he has lost his biggest tool- Nickolas. What will Natalie do with him now that he is pledged to her? How long will it take Daddy to find out he isn't his any more? How outraged is Daddy going to be when he finds out who Nickolas is pledged to. Old Dumbledore still has his hand in meddeling between Natalie and Snape too. Is he trying to intentionally make Snape remember? Hope you had a good holiday!

    Sansa
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  • From magpie79 on July 04, 2007
    nice one Pittwitch! Natalie really kicks ass, although I wouldnt want to see my brother at it yuk. I think I know where your going but I'll have to wait and see I suppose!
    xxx
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  • From Marti on July 03, 2007
    well yeah there's interest! look at your review ratio to your hits! it's phenomenal! i get 100 reviews for 30,000 hits, you haven't even made 10,000 hits yet and more reviews than i'd hope to get....of course i pissed off some readers when I told them if they didn't like what they read, press the 'backspace' button. eh....great show...hope you have a plan on where this is going, lol

    mar
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  • From misslala on July 03, 2007
    What is Natalie planning? haha Dumbldoere is a sneaky bastid, lol I am definately looking forward to your next chapters and how all this plays out in the end :)
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  • From Marbil on June 29, 2007
    I'm without my own computer, the motherboard gave up the ghost and it was cheaper to buy a new computer than to have the old one fixed. I'm waiting for the new computer we ordered to get here, in the meantime I'm using my husband's computer. My email got screwed up when the motherboard blew, all three accounts are screwed up. I can receive messages, but I can't send any out so the only way I can get messages is to make entries in my LJ, use the private message function on the fan fic archives I use, or to use a review as I'm doing now.

    I do have a question for you. What was the last chapter you sent me to check for you? That's the last one I've read, but I can't remember the title and I need to know the title to be able pick up where I left off and catch up with the story. I need to keep the continuity of the story straight or I get hopelessly lost.

    I also have a request of you. Since AFF.net doesn't send out update alerts ould you send out an email when you update, pretty please? My memory is terrible and I don't remember to check all the archives for updates as often as I should, that's why I fell behind with this story. Whitewitch sends all her reviewers an email when she updates and that helps tremendously. I wish all the authors would do that until the day AFF.net decides to add an update alert function to their Archive.
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  • From ccino49 on June 28, 2007
    Hiya. Sorry I took so long but I've finaly caught up on this and i'm gripped now. I don't like Maurice and what did Nickolas mean when he told Nat to take Noah and Nolan? Did he mean bite them and heal them like she did with Snape? When she healed Snape from her bite has she set off her own dark magic a bit? Is her mark colouring in now? Why can't she marry the other twerp and keep Snape as a lover? Or maybe she can. (Hee Hee) Don't believe you'll keep em apart for too long, unless you're sending him my way for a while. That would be more than acceptable. lol.
    Don't think it will be long before he remebers about him and Nat sharing more than one encounter at Hogwarts. Too many things filtering through his head now. He'll read the book again and get the memories beack. Wont he?Where's Maurice and Naunt Mairead now? I like Naunt Mairead. Chapter 61 quickly please. Luv ya lots.
    ccino
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  • From Happyappy on June 28, 2007
    Aha, so he is filing his shadow memory away for later pensieve veiwing. Just what will he discover in that memory I wonder? Can't wait to read that little tidbit!
    Sansa
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