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By : pittwitch
  • From ccino49 on May 17, 2007
    She's finaly admitted she feels something for Sna;pe, reckon his feelings run a bit deeper then affection though. So the females of the family are on her side, good. Hope they all gang up together and do something about wicked daddy-o. The mean b#####d. Have to wonder though, if dad wants her dead because she's female and can be 2become1, why didnt he kill her when she was born? Yeah, I know that sounds really callous but it would have been easier for him.
    ccino
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  • From ozarkmoon on May 17, 2007
    Well, this was certainly a wild ride. Some interesting pairings, some surprising ones and a very satisfactory one. Your original characters were all very interesting, especially Natalie. The sex scenes were well done {{always an imporant thing!}}. The premise of this story was unique - I've never seen it done before at all -- and fits perfectly into cannon. Very good job here. I do hope you will write more stories, and possibly a follow-up to this one? :)
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  • From ccino49 on May 12, 2007
    You know I'm still confused. Her dad wants her dead because it puts and end to the awful things they have to do to be the one in control, (I think) wouldn't that be a good thing? Or am I getting myself all mixed up here. If Natalies mark was coloured and she accepted the dark magic, couldn't she use it against her father? She is probably more powerful than him, seeing as she's got both animagusis and could be the one becomes two. Is she marries the ugly bugger in a civil ceremony, will she be able to divorce him without repercussions? Does the family rule stipulate she has to stay married to him? Why has Lucius suddenly turned horrible after she gave the best orgasm he's probably ever had. And who's at the door? and will she and Severus eventualy have babies. (wink)
    ccino
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  • From Happyappy on May 11, 2007
    So glad she told him everything that she could. Guess she doesn't hold a grudge against the malfoys. This chapter answered many questions. If she did have a child, providing she was the one that becomes two, wouldn't that break the curse so that no one had to fight to the death?
    Sansa
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  • From ozarkmoon on May 06, 2007
    Ch. 47 (and 46 for that matter too)- It is all a little mysterious with this 'thing' Natalie has with her brothers and her father. I hope it is explained soon, because I'm feeling quite confused here...
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  • From ccino49 on May 05, 2007
    When we getting ch 47? You promised it would be last week an we still waiting. Come on pitt. get those fingers tip tapping.
    ccino
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  • From Happyappy on April 29, 2007
    You think you got out of that curse, think again! You didn't really tell us anything else. All we know now, is that there was some kind of profecy with the one becomes two thing that could pertain to more than one of Natalie's family. What is an avenger? Is thah why Mom met her untimely death, because she was one? Is that why Daddy doesn't like Natalie, because she inherited something from her Mother? What is up with the twin thing? Why does Malfoy know about it and Severus doesn't? Is it because Malfoy is pure blood, and Severus isn't, so he doesn't have the same background to know that kind of thing? Where did Natalie go? Why is Moody/Crouch looking for her too, and not wanting Snape to go up to the tower? What exactly is the proficey, and who made it? OK, questions done. Just have to make you suffer a little.
    Sansa
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  • From Happyappy on April 29, 2007
    If what is true? The mark real? Change? What is she going to change into? Is the mark only black if it were her father calling her? When two become one? You are rotten for leaving me with SO So many unanswered questions! Dog collar my ass, I am going to curse you with racing in the mud with 50 muddy whining kids Friday Saturday and Sunday for the rest of your natural born life!
    Sansa
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  • From ccino49 on April 26, 2007
    Sansa you got me thinking now. Okay, so Nolan and Noah are both animagusisises, or something like that. Ones a snake and ones an eagle. Natalie has both markings on her back so I suppose if the eagle changed colour, the other brother would come to her. Yes???? And why Slytherin colours????
    Do the twins have a single marking each? and can Noah get on the island too? Was it her father calling her through the mark?
    If I don't get answers, I'm gonna surpass Sansa for questions.
    A very frustrated ccino
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  • From ANON - Sansa on April 25, 2007
    Ok, after reading your answer to Ccino, I didn't realise that only Nolan could get past the wards. I thought it was only Dad, if you knew how to get in. I did kind of get the idea that Nolan doesn't seem to like Dad too much, and he would also get away from him on the island. Another question, can the mark not be activated on the island? It is kind of like the dark mark, isn't it? Wasn't it Daddy calling her, and her resisting? Maybe I am completely wrong here, because if her and Nolan had resisted it before wouldn't Daddy have not been too happy about it?
    Sansa
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  • From ANON - Sansa on April 25, 2007
    If Natalie can escape to the island, why is she agreeing to marry the toad? It is kind of ironic that she had her little sexcapade with Lucious, since he was on her fathers list of potential husbands. Can't wait to see what Snape's reaction will be.
    Sansa
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  • From ccino49 on April 24, 2007
    So who's the bug eyed spawn leech? Why can't she marry Snape. I want her to marry Snape. sob sob sob. She has to marry Snape. So what set off the mark on her back? Was it the taste of blood, or the dark side of her nature that was woken when she realised what power she held over these two? You know I can't wait more than a few hours for the answer don't you? You know you have to post ch 46 now don't you. You know there is nothing else as important as getting this next chapter out quickly don't you?
    ccino
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  • From ccino49 on April 17, 2007
    Fantastic. I'm so glad Albus and Minerva get to lose those memories. But who keeps the pensive, and I hope they don't get them back later, otherwise they'll know again won't they? The memories should be destroyed. Is that what Ana's gonna do? I hope so.
    Well, Snape didn't click when Nat mentioned Moony's tongue flicking thingy. Wonder of he will later.
    Keep going, I want more. Greedy bugger that I am.
    ccino
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  • From Happyappy on April 16, 2007
    So the plot really does thicken. What just is the significance of having 2 animangus forms? Can't wait to find out! Natalie certainly does have some physical prowess. Maybe turning into animals helps some with that. Snakes are very flexable creatures. What is up with moody? Why is he watching? Just because he is letcherous, or does he have something sinister (other than plotting against Harry and being Barty) up his sleeve? Natalie's Dad doesn't have him in mind for her, does he? Yuuuuck! Your story just gets better. Happy 40th!
    Sansa
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  • From ccino49 on April 16, 2007
    I wanna know about this serpent/eagle thing and you're making me wait. Just one thing. I still don't think it's fair the Albus and Minerve got to read all the lists at the beggining. Should'nt they be obliviated or something? Say yes. But maybe you won't do anything nice for me now after my last review. LOL
    ccino
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