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Reviews for Very Nearly Veela

By : Ms_Figg
  • From DB1 on February 20, 2008
    @23 cool chapter, update soon

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  • From CutiePie on February 19, 2008
    Thank you so much Ms_Figg for getting this back on track, I must admit that I was very much disappointed with the 'bastard snape' image that was starting to occur, I just think after all they've gone through, this would've taken it all back to square one again.
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  • From catysmom1028 on February 19, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From BinxBolling on February 19, 2008
    Great chapter :D
    I was thinking about adding something, but I wasn't sure how to go about it. :x
    This chap puts them on an even playing field I think, which makes it easier and bit more fun to play with for the next upcoming author.
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  • From ANON - snapeslave on February 19, 2008
    ohhhhhhh i love this new twist...good to see him knocked down a peg...wouldnt it be something if after he has her he is instantly hooked and she just more or less says thanks it was fun...talk about a taste of his own medicine...i love it...you are too good for words my dear girl
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  • From johanna3030 on February 19, 2008
    yay!! I love that Ms. Figg just took away some of Severus's fun. Then again...you never know how this will play out since there's so many potential authors for it. I love it!
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  • From ANON - sad reviewer on February 18, 2008
    this story was good up to the last chapter. Not that it is badly written, but it turned Severus completely OOC from the way he was in the first few chapters. Usually there is some indication of his bastard nature, and it was clear to see he wasn't trying to get at Hermione but resist her. Now he is plotting to break her heart? It doesn't make sense and is a development that is going to be hard to fix. I preferred the story as it was. It wasn't necessary to add this twist. I doubt anyone tries to fix this one. A shame. It was going pretty good for a collaborative story.
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  • From ANON - anonfornow on February 16, 2008
    too many cooks spoil the broth... and this story proves soo true. specially Q_C trying to get her raped by canteurs and lucius. sheesh. :( someone please get severus and hermione together for god's sake!
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  • From DB1 on February 16, 2008
    @21 awesome chapter!!

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  • From CutiePie on February 13, 2008
    I'm very interested to see where this goes. Great work everyone, keep it up.
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  • From Ms_Figg on February 11, 2008
    lol Queen, putting stuff in the game. Not cold-hearted, woman-ruining Severus! :::shakes head::: Well, let's see what happens now, especially with Lucius hip to the game. :)
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  • From BinxBolling on February 09, 2008
    I actually am quite interested to see how the next author will handle this new situation >:D
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  • From LJAM on February 09, 2008
    Love this chapter Queen! I love a nasty Snape, the harder he is, the harder he falls...he he.Also love that Lucius is in it, makes a nice subplot. This could turn out to be a book, yeah!
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  • From Queeny on February 09, 2008
    I am back! I took a haitus from writing my story, for something more interesting. >w> ACTUALLY I just decided to play Devils Advocate and throw in something twisted and snarly for the other authors to get their paws into. I hope no one kills me in my sleep!! ;-;
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  • From Ms_Figg on February 06, 2008
    Great Teacher: Thank you so much for two enjoyable and cohesive chapters. And ESPECIALLY for the Venus FlyTrap. I read Hermione touching it and said to myself, oh no. lolol. Good work with clarification of how the Blood Bond works. I think you've given enough background and interest for more authors to pick up. If they don't, you are welcome to keep going. I'm really enjoying the story. Come on yall. :))
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