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Reviews for The Apprentice

By : Nerys
  • From ANON - Lady T on April 20, 2010
    Thanks a lot for the lovely, long chapter, I thoroughly enjoyed it, especially the witty banter between Fred and George. The way you write reminds me so much of Rowling's own style and you mostly stay true to the characters, which doesn't happen very often in fanfics, so that's a big plus. It's not easy to write a pairing like LV/HG and make it seem believable, but you pull it off, somehow :) I hope next chapter will be up soon, cheers.
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  • From sbrande on April 16, 2010
    So much action in this chapter. I really do love your writing style. Everyone seems to have secrets, secrets they are not willing to part with.

    Is Harry going to defeat Tom in your story? I truly hope not, but I am just a humble reader and admirer.

    Love Sonia :)
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  • From MrGalion on April 01, 2010
    You can thank Serp that I am now a loyal follower....
    I love your writings.

    Looking forward to an update!
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  • From ANON - hero_jaejoong on March 30, 2010
    finally an update...seeing the light at the end of the tunnel..

    a fantastic chappie
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  • From ANON - Summer Leah on March 29, 2010
    Uh oh! Another great chapter. This is my favorite of your WIPs, so I'd love if you updated it more often! That said, I love all of your stories, so I'm happy as long as you keep writing.
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  • From TheLadyMiya on March 29, 2010
    Haha, Hermione's little poweroutbreak caused quite a scene at the Burrow. Would have guessed Ron managed to get himself hurt before the glass broke. Such a clumzy boy, tihi. Good cover by Dumbledore... I wonder what he, Ludmilja and Hermione will talk about... I want her to get together with Voldemort! You said they would meet again soon :(
    Oooh, and Mrs Grindewald have secrets that can make Dumbledore fall? How interesting :) I can't wait to hear more about that! Hehe, and you too wrote that Voldemort had a sexual history with Bella. Tell me if you get the same angry PM as I did from that girl who hates the moment anyone mentions Voldemort being together with Bella...
    Great chapter! Looking forward to the next even if I know I shouldn't hold my breath ;) Take your time! I'm just happy when you manage to post it!
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  • From QueenRuby on March 29, 2010
    I could really use some HG/LV action right about now. Loved the update and the glimps of a possable dark Hermione. I really Really REALLY wish updates came faster. *Makes Puppy eyes* Please!
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  • From ANON - Allie on March 29, 2010
    You can not belive how happy I was when I saw that you updated.
    I liked the chapter, the Fred&Geroge interaction was totally funny,
    and Really, Bellatrix Lestrange? Are they delusional? Like he can
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  • From sbrande on March 21, 2010
    WOW! This story is fabulous... I only wish you hadn't have killed off Severus, but I know it's your story.

    Love your manipulative AD, as that is the way that I see him too. Poor Hermione though, stuck between a rock and a hard place.

    Can't wait for more.

    Love Sonia :)
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  • From QueenRuby on February 17, 2010
    Gah I could help screaming in my mind 'Labby' during the first part of the whole ball scene while she is looking around for something and he keeps appeareing and disappearing. Humms 'and the world falls down' Part of me wants to do a LV and HG story but I know I would not be able to capture him as well as you do. He would turn good or sissy. Might try it any how just for fun if I even finsh the story I'm working on now. anyhow keep the post coming as I want to see Hermione as a keeper and to have some of these questions answered. If I was Hermione I would be blasting things by now and demanding answeres.
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  • From BlakeHart on February 05, 2010
    I just spent the better part of today reading this story. I LOVE it so far! Is it bad of me to want Hermione to choose the dark and be trapped(willingly) with LV forever? Nothing hotter than a bit of darkness!
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  • From ANON - Lucianne on January 26, 2010
    what a perfect way to end a horrible day :D

    I loved the thought of Dumbledore being rash in his youth, it gave a different veiw to him like he wasn't always a wise old guy.

    I wish you great ideas for the future.
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  • From ANON - Miya, once again on another computer. I'm not even sure I remember my password, I'm always logged in on my first computer... on January 25, 2010
    YAY! Now I can procrastinating writing my own story a little more. Mehe. Oh, darn, THAT'S how the Prophecy goes. I had forgotten... hm.. that give me a tiny little problem in my own story. Hmhm... I'll think of something. And yes, it's quite weird that Voldemort acted on the prophecy. Although, he is rather paranoid so... okay, never mind. Of course he will try to destroy any treat he think there is...
    Oh, new lesson and new irritating song. No, I will NOT click on that link. I already have a annoying song on my brain, thank you very much. There is this Swedish kids-serie called "Life according to Rosa" and the intro is so catchy but I can never remember the lyrics "I've been up and I've been down... tralalalala... you're not always here beside me. All my friends asks 'hi, what's new' they don't think the way we do... trallala..." now I just have to find the song and fill in the blanks, otherwise it will bother me forever... But first I will see what the lesson will be like :)
    Oooh, Bombadaboomboomboom happened between Hermione and Ljudmila. It just stroke me that that must be how my godfather's wife spells her name. Or... hm... well at least it has to be pronounced in the same way. I have never had to spell it. I'll have to ask my father. Nevermind, my mind is rather unfocused today it would seem... SO. Bombadaboomboomboom as Hades in Disney's Hercules says. Hermione almost died again. Dumbledore could do nothing. Same old, same old...
    Oooh, strange power. Nice, nice. I bet old Tommy will want to know more about that.
    I just thought of something. Voldemort has had the position as a Defence teacher. He had it through Quirrell in the first year! So techinaclly, he cursed himself, HAHA!
    Draco showed up! Wow, poor little ferrent. And Hermione has no sympathy at all anymore. I bet Voldemort is proud of her.
    Dumbledore was a naughty boy when he was sixteen? Why and I not surprised :P Yay! Go and find Gellert, Dumby! I want to see some old men smut! (It's a weird fixation of mine, okay?)
    Oh what I would give to be able to cast a silencing charm on people that snore...
    NICE DREAM! I love that scene! So intense and Hermione and Tom dancing. That was such a nice way to describe her emotions and then when he made her go all dark!Hermione again WOW! Love that for some reason. Mehe, I wonder how she will be able to explain this to the Weasleys. If they realise she is the one responsible of course. Hm... I'm sure Voldemort must be horny as hell after her darkness display. So... will he pay dear Hermione a visit in the next chapter to congratulate her little trip down darkness lane? Oooh, I would so love that.
    By the way, have you seen the film Labyrinth with Bowie? I was reminded by a scene in that film when Hermione searched through the dacing crowd in the beginning of the dream. There is a so good clip of that on youtube... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GbZsEbRkR1o The film isn't good, but this clip is ^^ Hm, perhaps I've already send this to you? The song fit the dream-scene in your story as well, I think :)
    Thanks for a good new chapter! Looking forward to the next one :D
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  • From ANON - Lady T on January 24, 2010
    Good chapter, loved the exchange between Hermione and Dumbledore about Snape, that was pretty tense. However, I'm kind of disappointed, I feel like in the last 2 chapters, there was too much focus on the secondary characters, which steals scenes from our beloved heroes (or anti-heroes). I just wish there was more LV and Harry, can't wait to see more of them. Anyways, looking forward to the next chapter, cheers :)
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  • From ANON - Nicky111 on January 17, 2010
    I love this story!!! This is one of my favorites!!! I can't wait till there is more interaction between Hermione and Voldemort. I especially like seeing when Voldemort gets all protective of Hermione, especially when she could be in serious trouble. I can't wait for your next chapter!!!
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