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Reviews for Breaking the Chain

By : RynStar15
  • From madmapper82 on March 05, 2017

    Great chapter but I'm getting too old for this kind of tension. 😉 Now to se how stumbling, bumbling Draco fixes this mess he's created and hopefully still get the girl. 


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  • From JadedFate on March 05, 2017

    Another amazing story! I'd love to see a continuation of it though. I wanna see what happens. Do they get home? Can they really go back as though nothing happened between them??? I must know!!!


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  • From madmapper82 on March 05, 2017

    Thanks, loved the second anniversary present, this was our 39th.  Not bad for a couple that people were betting would only make it to two. Poor dumb, noble Draco cutting off his nose to spite his face. 


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  • From madmapper82 on March 04, 2017

    Lovely anniversary present. 


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  • From madmapper82 on March 03, 2017

    Lord, I hope Draco follows Milo's advice about the future. How evil to live it in a  cliff hanger. Evil, evil evil. Shame on you. Great chapter tho, glad to know that their savior doesn't actually die. 


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  • From madmapper82 on March 02, 2017

    Thank you for the frequent updates. This marvelous story is making a hellish week bearable. 


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  • From madmapper82 on March 01, 2017

    Terrific story, I find myself checking several times a day for updates. 


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  • From MotekElm on February 28, 2017

    Exciting back in time adventure story. Please post more chapters quickly


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  • From The_Last_Echo on February 27, 2017

    Loving the story. I will be heart broken when its over. Just wondering if you're still using the email address under your bio? I sort of sent you a letter. Heh. 

     

    -Echo


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  • From madmapper82 on February 26, 2017

    Very interesting story,  like it a lot so far. I hope poor Draco has enough common sense to follow Milo's instructions and ignore his past to concentrate on the future. 


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  • From sokolski on August 16, 2011
    I suddenly realized I've been acting like a complete pig! I've been gorging myself on your stories for the past few days, and haven't even had the common decency to leave a review! This is a familiar Catch 22 - it seems like the authors I worship the most are always the last to hear a word of thanks, because their writing is so good I don't want to waste a second not reading it! I am so sorry! I think you are so talented, and I am loving this story. The plot is fascinating. I'm curious to see how you choose to handle the time paradox - will Alvida die because they are there? The fact that they went so far back in time makes the setting almost as interesting as the plot. I loved it when Hermione changed into the dress the first time, and when she saw old London and the castle with the knights! The gallows scene was terrifying, but in retrospect beautifully done, especially with Draco's little revelation of what it feels like to have someone care about you. All of his internal ramblings are actually very interesting. I was saddened by his memories of the murdered muggle father, and I thought it was significant that he saved that still-motion photo. I can't wait any longer to see where this story goes, so I'm going to have to stop now, but I'll give more feedback later! Thank you for this awesomeness!!!
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  • From Drea1256 on December 10, 2010
    Please say you are still working on this. It's wonderful. I cried over Draco. Would love an ending.
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  • From pawprintmafia on December 03, 2010
    Spent the last several days going through and reading mostly all of your stories....but this is the only one that made me cry! lol. Very nice work..and i'm REALLY hoping there will be an update to this! The cliffhanger is terrible haha. Looking forward to any and all work you're going to be putting out. :)
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  • From loisalcantara on July 29, 2010
    chapter 34 really tore me up, i'm still crying but this was an amazing story thank you for writing this amazing piece of work.
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  • From QueenRuby on December 29, 2009
    Please update the new ending. I need happy. sad I know.
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