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Reviews for Breaking the Chain

By : RynStar15
  • From LittleMissPrincess on May 27, 2009
    Wow, that was amazing.
    I actually bawled my eyes out, haha.

    I don't like the fact that Draco died but it's somehow more real this way... not everyone survives and chances are we'll loose someone close to us. So it's bloody brilliant.
    You wrote it amazingly and despite my one issue (Draco's death) I still love it.

    Well done =]
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  • From incognito on May 26, 2009
    GAH! Gut-wrenching!!! Bad, bad, author! I want Hermione and Draco together! As sad as I am, I do think it was well written. Just warn me next time, OK? Thanks.
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  • From wingslikeeagles on May 26, 2009
    I did hate you at first, only because most fan fiction ends happily.
    This was such a great story. I have to admit I teared up a little.
    Phenomenal job. Keep writing!
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  • From redneckpassion on May 26, 2009
    . . . .

    Are you happy? You turned me into a blubbering baby. =(

    Write more please . . . something with a happy Dramione ending with much snarky ness in it and fights turning into lovin'. :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 26, 2009
    I was holding out, hoping there'd be a twist within the twist but it was not to be. (sigh). But having said that, WOW what an ending!!!! There is no greater sacrafice then the ones we make for our loved ones and to give one's life so that they might continue on - so touching, so beautiful, so perfect. Loved that she finally remembered their last night together and knew that he truly loved her and I loved how she came to be with Fred and that they made their marriage work and she could be happy again. Definitely not with the same passion she had with Draco but happiness just the same (love the realistic touch) And for him to appear in the portrait once she knew in her heart what had happened - well I just blubbed my way through the rest of the chapter and outright bawled when Draco asked her to show him the baby. Well done! Well done!!!!!!!
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  • From Robs on May 26, 2009
    Fantastic ending to a brilliant story! Although I was a little miffed about Draco being killed, it has actually worked really well. I liked the way you ended it with Fred too, and the portrait was a nice touch. I've read the first chapter of Penance, so will be following that now!
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  • From HighViscosity on May 26, 2009
    Thanks for giving it a bitter-sweet ending, I like those best.
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  • From mag7ical on May 26, 2009
    Aw, you made me cry again. I hate when either of the main characters die. But you wrote it wonderfully!
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  • From Ilovegreen on May 26, 2009
    Let me just say WOW!! I read the last three chapters at work on lunch and my boss thought I was going crazy. I was bawling. Standing ovation for the author. I've loved reading this story since the beginning. It didn't end quite how I thought but still a great ending. Can't wait for more stories from you.
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  • From kazfeist on May 26, 2009
    An incredibly beautiful epilogue. I personally wish he had survived, but you made a beautiful ending. :D
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  • From margaritama on May 26, 2009
    I'm still bawling....oh Draco.

    I have to say, while I don't love the Fred pairing (I just don't see them together at all), it was a lovely ending. Very touching, bittersweet and so sad. Sigh.
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  • From margaritama on May 26, 2009
    I'M BAWLING!!!!
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  • From Citten on May 26, 2009
    That was very good!!! but i still would love and like to see the other ending that you had planned and i will beg if i have too!!! :) i do love how you wrote this one though it just was not the way i wanted it to end! :)
    i will be watching for another draco hermione fic, but i will try your other story too!
    please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, PLEASE write the other endings!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! with wipped cream and a cherry on top!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
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  • From incognito on May 25, 2009
    I wish there had been a warning about character death in this story. I don't read those, so now I'm disappointed :(
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 25, 2009
    Well thank Merlin for the tissue warning - I needed it. That was so beautifully sad and I know when I lose someone I love that much I'm going to totally lose the plot too. No dignified goodbyes here. I loved the way Fred was there for her and helped her realise how much Draco really did love her and that it was Harry who held her close at the funeral and tried to comfort her. And for the record, I still don't want to believe he's truly dead. I'm still waiting for the twist. I'm in denial. LOL
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