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Reviews for Breaking the Chain

By : RynStar15
  • From mag7ical on May 25, 2009
    Oh my god, that was so incredibly sad. I was on the verge of tears. I can't believe you picked this ending?! I'm still delusionally holding out for a miraculous come-back-to-life scenario.
    Great chapter!
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  • From redneckpassion on May 25, 2009
    :( Tell me this isn't the end. I like seriously cried. :'( MAKE THIS NOT HAPPEN!
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  • From SilverEyedPhoenix on May 24, 2009
    that was utterly heartbreaking =[
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  • From kazfeist on May 24, 2009
    Gosh, that was so sad! Beautifully done, though. :D
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  • From Robs on May 24, 2009
    So sad! I still can't believe you've killed Draco off, but I suppose there's got to be a story that does every now and again. It doesn't take away from the awesomeness of your writing. Poor Hermione must feel so broken inside :[ I look forward to more.
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  • From ochitduzon on May 24, 2009
    This chapter is so emotionally heartbreaking! Is he really dead? Cant believe it! They've been through a lot from the beginning to the end. I cant bear to see them separated like this in the end.

    Great writing! You got me crying there!
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  • From dragongirl on May 24, 2009
    Thr tissue alert was not enoughm this was very emotional... and the songs were very appropiate....
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  • From Citten on May 24, 2009
    (teary eyed) boy that was just....devesating...to say the very least. well now everyone knows their depth that they shared. at least to some extent. poor sweet hermione, at least she has many people to be by her side. do post the next chapter soon! i am so very looking forward to how you will be writing this part (but you still have the other options! :) don't forget!) soon PLEASE!
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  • From distinctlyME on May 24, 2009
    Wow...soo...he really is dead.

    I was just praying it was some sick ploy to make the story all dark and twisty, but he's dead.

    Wow.

    I'm not sure how to feel about this. This story has made me cry too many times, and usually besides feeling incredibly silly for crying over written words, I've enjoyed having that emotion ripped from me.
    Now however, I don't think this was good cry.

    I don't know how to feel about him really being dead.
    I suppose I'll have to wait until next chapter to see where all emotions lie.
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  • From Citten on May 24, 2009
    a very bitter-sweet moment for all of them. :] well lucius will get his fitting punishment. they must find draco and severus' bodies or maybe you do have some marcle for us? :) well do post the next chapter and soon i really do hope that you dont skip ahead (or at the very least not too far ahead!) soon please!!!! :)
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  • From kazfeist on May 24, 2009
    Loved the Voldemort-Death chapter. Lots of great action. Poor Hermione, though. :D
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  • From margaritama on May 23, 2009
    I know not what to say...I feel no joy either....(not about the story, which I love). sigh, to go on without the one you love...

    great update.
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  • From dragongirl on May 23, 2009
    Please Please my Draco back.. somewhere somehow.. LOL
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 23, 2009
    I hope that's laughter in amusement and not laughing at how mad I actually am. LOL

    Another angst filled, fly by the seat of your pants chapter. I'd love to see this as a movie - only I wouldn't know where to look because there would be so much action going on. Phew!!!! And for a second there when Lucius was saying not everything was as it seemed I actually thought he might have changed sides because of what Voldemort had done to his son but no, not this time. And oh, I didn't even think of going back for the time turner and saving Draco that way, not that doing so is a guaranteed save (and no, still not convinced he's actually dead). LOL Oh you killed Neville. Now I'm sad. I adore Neville. Oh well. Harry has won the war at such a cost, I'm having very mixed feelings about seeing the fallout now. Kudos to you, once again. :)
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  • From subility on May 23, 2009
    Ok first off this isn't subility, just a friend. I cannot get enough of this story. I swear I check it 3 times a day to see if you have updated. You are a really talented writer, I can't wait to see what happens next!!
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