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Reviews for Breaking the Chain

By : RynStar15
  • From incognito on May 23, 2009
    on chp. 17; hm, I'm not sure I understand this chapter. why does Hermione stand in for Alvida?
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  • From incognito on May 22, 2009
    I am just loving the story. It's got me hooked that I have spent most of my Friday evening reading it! I was so happy to see I still have several more chapters to go. Kudos to you for writing a story filled with action & character development, as well as a clever plot line.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 22, 2009
    I have to catch up again, don't I? It's not that I'm slack but that you update too quickly. ;) (just kidding)

    Chap 30 - OMG OMG OMG I just wanted to tear into the place and rip Voldemort to pieces. I think I'm more afraid of your version than the official one. Especially with their fight and the way you described him breaking her arm, hand and fingers a bit at a time. And wow, wasn't expecting Draco to switch with her via polyjuice potion but the stupid git didn't even listen to her. I hope there's a plan in there somewhere.

    Chap 31 - More twists and turns. Glad that Snape really is switched on after all and that Arthur is there for Hermione too. (loved that in the books as well) Yay for Neville coming to the rescue and the way they (Ginny and Molly especially) just keep on fighting. And le gasp again, he can't be dead. There's got to be something to do with the polyjuice that throws off the killing curse. I'm sticking with that way of thinking. I refuse to believe Draco died inside her body and will still be dead when the potion wears off. Not sure she's really channelling Draco as she gets past Dolohov to get to the snake, that's all grief anger and adrenaline spurring her on now. Wait a minute - oh no you didn't! She's dead? Nope, there's gonna be a twist. LOL Oh and I've decided that someone else polyjuiced themselves into Draco - don't know if they can do a double polyjuice but anything's possible in magic, right? LOL

    Chap 32 - There, I knew she wasn't dead. LOL Glad I didn't have to wait for that one. Awww poor Colin and how typical of Hermione to be trying to save Dennis. Oh I didn't know which way Lucius was going to go at first. He certainly never expected Voldemort to kill his son, did he? (not that I believe it either, mind you). LOL And I can totally understand why she wouldn't block him at first. She'd welcome that pain because it's the only thing she can truly feel at the moment. And LMAO at Luna's comment - even in the midst of a batttle to come out with something like that. Loved her moment with Ron too, there will always be something special between them, a freindship that will survive anything (even Draco) but what a cliffhanger ending. Who has Hermione??? Whew, I think I need a moment to get over it all now. Wel done, once again. :)
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  • From Robs on May 22, 2009
    Phew! Finally reached the current point. I haven't read many new fics recently, so I decided to give yours a go. It's bloody brilliant! Although I wish you hadn't killed Draco off. A happy ending would have been nice. Unless you have something up your sleeve to bring him back? I don't know, but I can't wait to find out!
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  • From dragongirl on May 22, 2009
    You have me on an edge here! Please MORE MORE MORE!!!! That was intense.
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  • From Citten on May 22, 2009
    oh!!! please dont make us wait through this long weekend without more!!! i love that she bested lucius and broke his wand and i love that she was doing it to all the others too! :) so who has her now? update soon!
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  • From kazfeist on May 21, 2009
    Loved the most recent chapter. Lots of great action sequences....but are we sure that Draco's dead? ;D
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  • From wingslikeeagles on May 19, 2009
    I am pretty sure I hate you, but I am going to reserve judgement until I see a "completed" sign up. :)



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  • From trixiedust on May 15, 2009
    Hate you?

    This story has progressed and changed from the very start, you keep me coming back for more, how could I hate you?

    I have no idea as to what you will do next, so I will just say keep up the great work and I'm eagerly awaiting the next chappie so I can see what kind of twists and surprises you have in that one!!
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  • From Given2Fly on May 15, 2009
    You. Are. Evil.

    Wanker.


    LoL


    Seriously...TELL me you're going to update again soon!!!!
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  • From margaritama on May 15, 2009
    I'm bawling.....
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  • From HighViscosity on May 15, 2009
    No hate!

    The polyjuice trick was very neat, and everyone being so confused...

    I enjoyed the update, and I wonder what's going to happen next.
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  • From SilverEyedPhoenix on May 08, 2009
    O_O gasp that was awesome!!!
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  • From From56to62 on May 08, 2009
    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! Stupid ducking DRACO!!! and by ducking I mean fucking. What an idiot. Way to save the day. NOT. Bah. HOW THE HELL WILL THEY GET OUT OF THIS ONE!? DUN DUN DUNNNNN
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  • From redneckpassion on May 07, 2009
    OHMIGOD!

    AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

    It was . . . and I . . . . with the . . . OUT OF NO WHERE!

    O.O

    Bloody . . . Effin' . . . Hell.

    Amazing BTW. :D
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