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Reviews for The First Horcrux

By : magentasouth
  • From ANON - CJB on August 08, 2011
    Oh please update soon I'm dying to find out what happens next. This Tom is such a horn dog but it works really well with his personallity. I'm so wondering if he'll learn to be a better person through his interactions with Draco, Harry, and Hermione, and if he'll end up fighting his evil self or if he'll end up taking his older self out just to be head villian in the end anyways. I really hope he falls for Harry and wants to help Harry defeat his bad self. I really feel bad for poor Draco and can't stand what happened to him. Now does he have unwanted feelings towards both Harry and Tom? I hope to read the next chapter soon your new fan CJB.
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  • From ANON - raven on July 03, 2011
    i really do hope all is well! just wanted you to know i havent forgot about my fav storys and i look forward to your plans for them... well im sure others check this site almost dayly lk me to see if you have updated...
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  • From RAVENSLUST on May 10, 2011
    wow i cant belive its almost a month and im still checking everyday for a update. should i go two days? NEvER! lol jk. i hope you update soon. hopefully your muse sends you a hott hott dream and all you can think about is a hansome young Harry and a Horny young tom. lol hope all is well
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 02, 2011
    Great story! I really like your Tom!
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  • From ANON - xalanta on April 30, 2011
    Hi!

    Great story. Can't wait tored next - 15th - chapter. #^_^#
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  • From SalonKitty on April 27, 2011
    Well, here I am, adding to your reviews in order to convey my desire that you continue this soon. You've left us with something of a cliffhanger.

    Once again, poor Draco. I can't believe how sorry I'm feeling for the git in this, but at the same time, as he's cowering in abject terror with the idea that he might have to endure another punishment, I still see it from Tom's point-of-view--that shit gets old fast.

    I feel confident that Hermione is going to think up some way to get around Tom's limitations on her power of speech. I think Harry might get wise after a while...she's got to be a mess outside of her dorm. I can't imagine she'll be able to hide her distress from the boys for long the worse Tom gets.

    I do like it when Tom one-ups Snape. Damn, that's satisfying.
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  • From RAVENSLUST on April 26, 2011
    Just wanted you to know that i was thinking about your awesome story...... all day today lol makes sound as if i have no life. sometimes i dont lol cant wait for that Tom and Harry "Moment"!
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  • From SalonKitty on April 23, 2011
    I've really been enjoying this story. You really delve into a lot of the more fascinating elements of Tom's character and the nature of the Horcruxes themselves. You also vividly draw out the characters of Harry, Hermione, and Draco, as seen through the eyes of a young Tom so that they are at once familiar, but more interesting, texturalized. We share Tom's fixation with them. Well, perhaps Hermione and definitely Harry, but Draco....I don't know how I feel about him suddenly getting center stage. I so dislike him, usually, but the events held in the memory during Ch. 13 were so disturbing that I couldn't help but feel sympathetic. I mean, I've read a lot of pretty transgressive stuff, so that most attempts in fanfiction rarely shock me, but I think I might have been a little green from the description of Draco's poor backside. And Lucius' apparent lust for his own son, especially after witnessing such a violent rape----ewwww. I'm a little squicked. But no matter, no matter....

    You are obviously quite drawn to the idea of two versions of Tom/Voldemort interacting.

    I have to admit, I gave your other Harry/Voldemort story a shot, but I so grew to dislike Harry I had to give it up. He's my favorite character, so I'm easily rankled when he's presented in a way that I find weak or out of character. But I really like your Harry in this. His attempts at outwitting Tom by seduction were facile, at best, but I have to give him an O for effort. I'm quite enjoying their conversations, as well as Tom's constant baiting of Hermione. I'm really curious if you're actually going to get all three of them together or not. Tom obviously has a boner for them both. And what with your admitted interest in H/Hr....well, this could be pretty impressive if you pull it off.

    One thing about the letter writ upon Draco's back---it reminded me heavily of a film by Peter Greenaway called The Pillow Book. You should check it out if you haven't seen it already.

    Oh, and Harry is loooaads better looking than Draco.

    And judging by your distaste of the Weasley lot, I am guessing that Harry never got together with Ginny in this story? Seeing as Draco mentioned that Harry's never dated, it seems unlikely. But as much as I'm not terribly fond of the Book Weasleys either, I will admit to a certain dark pleasure in seeing Ginny with Voldemort/Tom. Wondering if she'll turn up anywhere.

    Your Voldemort descriptions had me tickled, particularly during the bedroom scene with Draco. We obviously see the Dark Lord very similarly, as I have written him in one story not too far off from how you've depicted the snake man. Amusing.


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  • From CrownofLeaves on April 20, 2011
    It is interesting how similar yet different Tom and Voldemort are. I love the juxtaposition! Also, Snape should know better than to underestimate the mini-Dark Lord! It's going to come back to bit him in the butt! Great chapter!!
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  • From RAVENSLUST on April 20, 2011
    Delightful as always. Much draco action yumm yumm and of corse im going to b thinking about all the wonderful things that will posibly happing soon. cant wait for more tom and harry yummie goodnes. i feel so spoiled you have been updating so often i never wANT YOU TO STOP. drat the real world sometimes
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  • From SexyLizard on April 19, 2011
    Deliciously wicked.

    I feel sorry for Hermione though, and (much to my surprise) Draco too.

    Young Tom Riddle is certainly an intelligent and engaging sociopath. I wonder how long it will take him to realize Harry Potter is a Horcrux as well.
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  • From ANON - MrE-Quecky on April 19, 2011
    OMG, this chapter must have been really hard to write. Draco hurts so much... Loved the ache!
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  • From Tesgura on April 19, 2011
    I'm really lovin this story, especially the H/T interaction and T/D interaction. Draco trying so hard to make Tom happy is just great, but I'm really looking forward to more electrifying moments with Harry.
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  • From bloodshound on April 19, 2011
    Guess it's more satisfying playing with toys you've broken yourself. Though, I'm not sure if Harry will be reduced to toy to easily. I hope not, Slyth as Tom is he needs someone who can keep his interest.
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  • From CrownofLeaves on April 18, 2011
    That last bit was a serious tease! I actually hope there is a Tom/LV!!
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