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By : TransientTemptation
  • From RavenclawJedi on October 25, 2011
    Harry has no free will at this point. Draco had warped him so much, but Harry remains utterly oblivious. This story can go so many different ways. A total guilty PWP pleasure. A dark tale where Harry remains a sex toy. Revenge, sex, sad ending, hopeful ending.

    uses Jedi mind trick ... You will update soon.
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  • From WesleyY7 on October 09, 2011
    What a darkly teasing chapter! Of course, I love Draco being bad, but I got rather hopeful when he took Harry to get his wand. Maybe Harry would find a way out from under Draco's thumb once at Hogwarts. (Not that we want that to happen too soon, of course!) But then, reading Harry's reactions to the dresses and realizing Draco's nighttime teachings are perverting the poor boy, it appears Draco isn't going to let his charge go at all.

    That store owner creeped me out! "Still training?" "He's precious." How many other young boys get taken into that store? Does Harry just want to wear the dresses or do they turn him on too? If it's the latter, bad Draco for not giving him release as well! Looking forward to more.
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  • From Madamdragon on October 05, 2011
    Hawt update. I wonder what is going to happen when Harry finds out the truth. If he finds out I guess I should say. Well thank you for the update, I hope more is to come soon.
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  • From bloodshound on October 05, 2011
    *blinks. wow. short this time out. So, he can use dreams to train Har for any kink... I still wannoa know what he's gonna do if/when they get checked on.
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  • From RavenclawJedi on October 01, 2011
    Holy hell. Came here via a rec in the forum. I thought there were no new ideas for Harry/Draco and here you are with this naughty tale with a wonderful twist. I love the balance between Harry's innocent trust and Draco's manipulative guile. I like my smut very descriptive, so I'm surprised I'm loving this as much as I do. You sex it up in perfect smutty paragraphs. I think it's the mentions of Harry's cluelessness and the way Draco looks at and talks to him that do me in. Anytime he calls him Angel ...love, love, love. That and the potions.

    Femslash is so, so neglected, so it would thrill me to see this written with some ladies. (The wandplay alone would be worth it. I can't get enough of a little wide-eyede and innocent Hermione. Narcissa would be a perfect benefactor. Or, in keeping with the same age twist, what about an older and evil Ginny Weasley?

    Looking forward to your next update. Don't keep Harry (and us) waiting for too long.


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  • From oronochi on September 13, 2011
    It's great to see a new chapter, and it's just as awesome as always! I can't wait to see how Harry reacts to his night-time training and just exactly what Draco's spell from the previous chapter will do (If it's Mpreg, it's just another delicious treat!). I will be waiting anxiously for the next chapter. :)
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  • From Madamdragon on September 13, 2011
    Good update Hawt stuff. Hope more is to come soon.
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  • From bloodshound on September 13, 2011
    life as an unwitting sex toy huh? Seriously, he'd better hope no one checks... or that he's taught his pet enough to pass muster.
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  • From WesleyY7 on September 12, 2011
    Haven't read chapter 7 yet (on my way out the door), but I did want to reply to your author's not. :D You even considering the possibility of a femslash like this makes me very happy. (F/f never gets enough love in the HP fandom.) Which wonderful little girl would I like? Have to go with our dear Miss Granger. She's bright, but I can see her being overwhelmed by the magical world and she was so vulnerable and alone those first few months at Hogwarts. What terrible mistress? I'm sure Bella would be a popular choice, but I always find her to be too violent and crazy. I'm all for you to continue with your devious Malfoy theme and go with the lovely Narcissa. She's always wanted a little girl, I bet. Or, if it takes place at Hogwarts, what about Professor McGonagall?

    And it's totally understandable about the length of time between updates. Should come first. Good luck with your classes! :)
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  • From WesleyY7 on September 04, 2011
    Just finished Chapter 6. Have to agree with other reviewers who say this story is so, so wrong, but it keeps drawing me in. This is a completely manipulative and evil Draco who shows absolutely no remorse as he goes after what he wants. What makes it creepy is he doesn't see anything wrong with what he's doing. I want to say it's good that at least Harry's getting some pleasure out of it, but Draco is just giving the pleasure to further strengthen his bond and make Harry trust him even more.

    I always feel slightly guilty for enjoying chan fics, but I'm captivated by this story. I'm enjoying your other story as well, and while it's a different, I love your twist on the dominating dub con of a naive innocent. Have you ever written het or femslash before? I find myself wondering if young Harry was replaced by a young innocent Hermione or even Narcissa/young Hermione. The dynamics would be different, but I'm sure you would make it just as exciting. Apologies for my rambling review!
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  • From DwellingOnDreams7 on September 01, 2011
    oh god so wrong... but... so... good... this is actually like the 6th or so time i've read it, i keep having to start it again every time you update coz it's so good...
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  • From bloodshound on August 30, 2011
    damn, i seriously hope he's giving him some after care after this. He had a point. For a virgin of his age and size to have cock up him for half the night or more is going to do damage. considering all the work he's put into getting him, he wouldn't want to break his toy just yet. I hope he doesn't plan on knocking him up any time soon. Har's body is still to young and he needs to be trained to Draco's pleasure properly first.
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  • From mollyvirginia on August 29, 2011
    Yay! An update! I loved this chapter. Was the spell just a mental reinforcement or was it a pregnancy spell since it was done in the stomah area? I love this story and idea far more than I feel I should. But it is so good!
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  • From FaeriDreamer on August 29, 2011
    Ch.6 was awesome, I cant wait for the next parts to come out! I hope you're able to update soon again! ^_^
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  • From Madamdragon on August 29, 2011
    Good update. Hawt stuff. But what happens now? Draco has been reinforcing his memory, right? to make sure Harry doesn't forget? What happens when Harry finds out Draco has been giving him potions?

    Hope more is to come soon please.
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