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Reviews for Benefactor

By : TransientTemptation
  • From mollyvirginia on August 26, 2011
    Oh I hope you update this soon! I enjoy Strage Seduction, but I love this concept and cannot wait for more!
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  • From WesleyY7 on August 22, 2011
    Draco is so deliciously devious! And I'm looking at the title now and realizing how ironic it is. Poor little Harry is being warped and manipulated, and I can't believe you're making this work! I'm wondering if Harry will figure out what's happening to him or remain happily ignorant of the situation. Update soon pretty please?
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  • From Madamdragon on August 14, 2011
    If Harry does learn magic. Will he learn Draco manipulated him and then leave him? Ooo, this keeps getting better and better. Hope more is to come soon.
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  • From bloodshound on August 13, 2011
    um,if they're checked up on and he hasn't taught har, won't there be problems.
    as to the manipulation being discovered prob, considering how much he's done already, surely a little mental manipulation won't hurt. once the physical training is done or even during, adimit little bits of his manipulation but condition the kid to accept because he loved him just that much that he couldn't handle any one else trying to take him. get the kid to believe he should be honoured by the attention and a spell so that he won't think to discuss HOW such attention came about. train him so that draco is the center of his world. What could be hotter than a super powerful, beautiful wizard whose wand moves at your word and whose body is for your pleasure. ;D
    Had a thought, what happens when a kid wants training in a discipline the parents aren't so good at? would they hire a tutor?
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  • From bloodshound on August 09, 2011
    he sure is a kinky pedo bastard isn't he. I hope he doesn't get bored of Haarry after he's got him. it'd devastate Harry, especially with all the illegal things he's done to get him. Poor Harry, they left with a sexual predator... or is he only pedo for Harry? is there anyone who checks up on new wards of people in case of abuse... and does Draco ever get visitors? In which case, he might want to hold onto that second bed for show.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 09, 2011
    I think this story is lovely. You've definitely captured my interest. I don't think the characters are exactly 'in character' but the characterization you've given them is good and it fits the story. Don't worry, I don't think it deters from it at all.
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  • From kyuubifreak on August 09, 2011
    very nice story! i cannot wait for more to come!
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  • From Madamdragon on August 09, 2011
    Yay! An update. Thank You. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 07, 2011
    One warm had gently wrapped around his prick .. i think had there was ment to b hand :) loveing the story btw cant wait 4 more..
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  • From WesleyY7 on August 07, 2011
    I don't want to enjoy this story, but so many aspects are fascinating - the non-canon age gap, the potions, Draco being unabashedly evil and manipulative, poor Harry. Interested to see where you, and Draco, take this.
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  • From Carousel on August 06, 2011
    I love this far more than I should. Update soon!~
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  • From bloodshound on August 06, 2011
    off to a bit of a pedo start... so, where do they get schooling if there's no hogwarts?
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  • From sarah999 on August 06, 2011
    A very interesting story. I hope you update soon.
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